Ive decide to keep writing my story but if you guys could criticize or even post more it would help encourage me :D
i hope you guys enjoy the climactic end to this battle! :o
Chapter 18:
Lori slowly stood up but by the time she was up a huge fireball was already heading her way.
The fireball hit her and smoke shot out.
Her right arm was gone but she looked fine besides that.
Jouji ran at her with an intensity of a beast.
His chakra was starting to die down but it was still visible.
He shot multiple mini fire balls at Lori.
His right hand gathered chakra, and was focused into a ball shape.
Lori was now burnt all over and her right arm was gone.
She was standing trying to concentrate her chakra.
"I can't fail...master..." she thought
Jouji ran at her and the ball of chakra in his hand turned pure white and started to grow in size.
He thrust it forward and it burst into flames.
The fireball was at least the size of him and when it was about to hit Lori...
Lori exploded!
Tiny particles of blood shot out from where she was.
They were about the size of a marble.
When they flew up they stopped in midair.
Meanwhile Jouji's attack hit the floor and the arena started to rip apart.
The floor split apart and flames erupted from the cracks
The particles of blood shot at Jouji and high speed.
Jouji looked up but it was too late.
The particles shot through him.
When they got to the other side, Lori's original body formed out of the blood.
Jouji staggered and stepped a few steps back.
He stepped right on Ahnuld's dead body.
When he stepped on it Lori whispered "sacrifices must be made."
The blood shot out of Ahnuld in a spire and shot out towards Jouji.
Everything seemed to go in slow motion, Jouji was turning around,
Hikari closed her eyes,
Tora jumped off the bleachers,
Lori smiled,
Dust flew up where Jouji was standing.
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i hope you enjoyed it next chapter should be up soon but heres a preview
[spoiler] Hes not dead. [/spoiler]