this level two piccie sucks. am posting another blog to score points and get a cool one, altho its so bad its good and im kinda growing attached to it. yay! forever for disco and the 'king of cool'. anyways, blogging is fun! i get to talk and you have to listen (read) - well only if you want to. coming from a big family where you have to scrap and claw your way for 5 minutes of fame - this is great fun. posted my new chapter of my fic. the last two were rubbish and very much pulled out tooth and nail, like blood from a rock, add more cliches here. it wasnt very smooth reading and very stop and start with the dialogue: she said, he said, she turned, it cut off. get a thesaurus already or use your brain.:) anyways, new chapter was much better and easy to read. i also liked chapter 17 - they are both the longest ones. i do notice, when i reread to get an idea of where to go, all the mistakes tho. i have misused terms and better words should have been used, and sometimes there was too many adjectives. i am too lazy to edit it tho. i want to point it out afterwards in a post what i did wrong, but then i dont want you to realize how silly i was to write it in in the first place. im stumped, so y'all will just have to deal with it. so there. sycophantic