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You should start by fixing your grammar.Darth_Tyrevoh well yah,i usually fix all my grammar when i do a final draft.
if you want the basic plot overview feel free to ask
because this is just the beggining
btw,feel free to be as critical as you wish-i wont take it personally and its the only way to learn
here ya go
Humans.weve been watching your kind for days,some of you seem to think weve been watching you for centuries.the truth is,you have never been that important to us.we laugh at your dilusions of our probing and cattle disection.like we would spend so much time here only to not find anything of use.the most idiotic ones that we see on your broadcast systems seem to think we have put some type of code in corn fields years ago.corn fields?you humans think we,with our technology would use corn fields?ludicrious.me and my fellow race live hundreds and thousandss of miles away.and we have not ever needed anything from you untill now.see,there is a war going on billions of light years away.one wich size you cannot comprehend.your wars,like your civil war and your world wars,are called by your kind mass tragedies.our war has wiped out fully populated life forms,thousands of planets have been damaged,and worse,completely obliverated.the war has been going on for three thousand and five earth years now.sometimes,your kind may look up in the sky to see a star or a comet.in fact,most likely it was a halogen bomb.or one of our missles.this is all i can tell you about the war.what we need from you is a element,not like potassium or uranium.not like any element that you can conjure up in your test tubes or found in your prehistoric rocks.an element that we believe is hidden deep into your nervous system,somewhere where the spinal chord connects with your brain.we believe this element to weaken our enemies,render their immune systems into complete distortions,therefore making our biological warfare much more supreme.
so are you going to kill us
No.why would you think that.
well.your a ******* alien.or one.and it seeems like getting an element out of our spine would be a life threatening surgery
no.our instruments our superior.we need not kill you to reach the element
how long will you guys take
untilll we reach the element we shall not leave.this means that untill we reach the element,you shall be confined.
you think you could give me and estimate
untilll we reach the element we shall not leave.this means that untill we reach the element,you shall be confined.
or so ive heard,but i dont want to be confined
untilll we reach the element we shall not leave.this means that untill we reach the element,you shall be confined.
**** you let me go!
untilll we reach the element we shall not leave.this means that untill we reach the element,you shall be confined.
untilll we reach the element we shall not leave.this means that until...
...shut up.
as long as you understand
yah,i got it
as i pondered what would happen next,i looked around my room in wich it seemed i would be confined in.i had a few posters on the wall,some comic books,some of my dvds my video games,oh yah,and an alien.it was like a "find what doesnt belong" geometry problem.hes been standing like that since he got here.arms folded,legs straight and chin high.only to move if i moved towards the door or window.and it hurt when i did.he has arms just like me but strenght of a bodybuilder.he didnt look any different than me.he has legs like a man.arms like a man. his torso seemed to repeat.almost if he has 4 sets of rib cages and 4 sets of lungs.I assume his face looks normal but hes keeping it hidden with a hat and a pair of glasses.his hand is werid.he just has an opposible thumb and one big finger.i wonder how he picked me up with that thing.
where are my parents?
they are confined.as you are.in their room
are they ok?
well,are they!?
yes.
they are safe.
so uh,i guess the whole world is being invaded by you guys
no
no?
no
why
we do not need a mass amount of the element
so,what,are you saying only this state is being invaded
no
the county?
no
are you saying that our town,and only our town,in this whole entire world is being invaded by you
yes
****
well does the whole world know you are here
no,no one shall know or ever know.we have taken precautions to make sure outsiders cant get involved
I dont know if this is a stereotyoe,but because im jewish,there are some people who dont know if i believe in god.its like,christianity must be the only religion to have a god.its dumb
one thing that bothers me thats deff a stereotype is that when someone drops a penny/nickel/dime ecetera they look at me and expect me to pick it up because im jewish.
[QUOTE="whamu"]hey guys!so i guess roll call is like,an off topic thread in an off topic board?meh,anyways,heya!playstation2004
Hey.
You must be new :P
Welcome to OT !
gracias,senior.so what do i do now?
[QUOTE="hoola"]I have never been moderated so i don't mind them. How will i know if i get moderated? what kinds of moderations are there?GabuEx
You get a PM if you're moderated. There are four levels of penalties: warnings ("please don't do that again"), point losses ("seriously, stop doing that"), suspensions ("maybe a cooling off period will make you stop doing that"), and bannings ("okay, fine, we'll make you stop doing that").
you forgot about double secret probation. :P
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