Im gonna start converting my comic strips to tv. com. and yaaaaaahh i finished chap 3.. heres chap 1:

Bryan wakes up. His girlfriend, Heidy, comes in and says the Black Hats (the evil guys) are attacking their city. Bryan says to get ready and they move to defend the stairs. His soldriers blow up 2 black hats. Bryan thinks they have won, but 14 more black hats come with grenades. They try to blow up Bryan but he takes cover behind a fallen pillar. He comes back shooting and does well. The rest of his soldriers go to help him. Meanwhile, Heidy and her partner come behind the black hats and the army destroys them. 2 days later, Bryan is told by Heidy that the city Goldrock is being attacked. He gets his gun and starts on the streets to his motorcycle. Suddenly an old lady ,whos a hunchback, appears and says she is a warnining of death. She disapears and Bryan contiunes. Hes almost to his motorcylce when a huge cyclops with a log asks if he can join the army. Bryan is busy so he says no. Cyclops almost hits bryan but bryan runs. Bryan is almost to Goldrock and sees that it is gold! and a rock. Anyways, they get inside and meet the minister. The minister is worried at their numbers but Heidy says there reaaaaaaaaaly strong. Bryan is about to go to bed when that old woman appears again. She says his brother Devil is leading the attack on Goldrock. She disapears. Bryan thinks he never had a brother, but he'll be ready. When the lookout can see the badguys, Bryan goes to see. Turns out theres about 500 Black Hats marching. Heidy tells him those are just the scouts. Every1 gets ready for battle and the Cyclops guy is back. He gives Bryan 5000 bullets that are guided, and have 4 mini grenades attached to them. Bryan makes him a captain, and the cyclops is reaaaaaaaaaaaaal happy. Heidy comes and says theyre here. Bryan fights with his soldriers and they do well. But they keep coming and coming till bryan is worn out. Devil comes and they are about to fight when heidy pushes Bryan to the ground and shoots Devil. Devil runs and gets away. Bryan faints because he is so tired. Bryan wakes to find that Devil's army has retreated. Cyclops takes out the last that stayed and heidy comes to tell them more. Then trouble. Devil comes and shoots Heidy without warning. Devil gets away easily, and Bryan kneels and mourns. To Be Continued

Did any1 like it? I know its kinda cheesy, but its fun. Plz comment