hey tell me what you think. i just wrote it nowwe just need music and it will be up on the bands myspace page.
tell me how it should improve i would appreciate it.
The repeated chorus will be done by me using the tradtional "screaming" singing. listen to ABRB,JFAC or any other death metal band for examples. the rest by our drummer normally.
here goes
We aren't desperate, Just super lonely.
Theres nothing left
but the heat of your breath
And theres nothing more
than the pain of this chore
And i want to get away
i need to get away
But your forcing me to stay
Your not as important as you think
Shut the hell up and go to sleep
Stop talking i need time to think
5 years from now you won't even know my name
Nothing remains
But the stain
Of what used to be
A part of me
you walk away
nothing left to say
I'll always remember this day
Your not as important as you think
Shut the hell up and go to sleep
Stop talking i need time to think
5 years from now you won't even know my name
Now that i thought it over
i'm glad its over
I hope i'll forget you
and all we've been thru
I hope you fell this too
Cause every feeling i had for you....
is gone
Your not as important as you think
Shut the hell up and go to sleep
Stop talking i need time to think
5 years from now you won't even know my name