FFE: Official Fanart/Artwork Thread (Always check the first page)

Here is updated Laguna with better textures and fixed jacket. I've always wanted to do a nice picture of him with Raine and never got around to it so maybe I'll work on her next.

Haha that would be cool. :) I think I read that he uses Poser for renders. I still use DAZ Studio as the UI makes more sense to me and poser is way expensive.

I'm going to attempt to post some of my art from my deviantart account. Not sure if it's gonna work since I don't know whether they allow thumbnails to be posted offsite or not, but I'll give it a try. Don't have too much there as almost everything I've done is sketches and nowhere near complete. Will post some more later.

Not a bad start but I already have some problems with believability. I've had a few fiction writing classes and I'm trying to help with a critic, I'm not saying its bad or to stop just some things that you may want to look at.

• They are living under a bridge until they are 16. I can understand being orphans and all that but I would think they would also need to worry about obtaining food and staying warm in the winter besides sword fightning. Somewhat of a knit pick or maybe you'll go more in depth in the story.
• The begining reminds me of Sora and Riku sword fightning in Kingdom Hearts, just an observation.
• Why are they in a Resistance army fightning rebels? Resistance fighters are rebels, resisting the current government so this identification confused me.
• You put pasted where is should be passed, and the first time you put Lufifer instead of Lucifer.
• I don't get how Jeneaux just suddenly decides to kill everyone on the planet or the motivation behind it, I mean is he posessed or something, maybe that will be explained later.