Can I get a few opinions on my band?

myspace.com/thewhitecollarambush

I know we are not perfect by any means but, Id like to get some opinions on us! Before you go to the link, It punk music so if thats not your type of music then dont bother XD

Pretty good, you should start up a youtube channel for it aswell. Maybe record some of your songs in higher quality aswell (if possible)

It's decent, I wouldn't think it was a bunch of teenagers if I heard it. Which kid are you, out of curiosity? XilePrincess

i like what i heard, but the singer needs something...i'm not sure what...but he needs something. his voice really blends into the instruments. all in all though it was pretty good.

i like what i heard, but the singer needs something...i'm not sure what...but he needs something. his voice really blends into the instruments. all in all though it was pretty good.

zmbi_gmr

As a record executive I wouldn't sign you.sboyer2

Not bad. Sounds a lot like Anti-Flag.xTheExploited

Sounds pretty good considering it's only your first month. But you need to crank the singer up, he needs to be louder then the music.

Sounds pretty good considering it's only your first month. But you need to crank the singer up, he needs to be louder then the music.

SideSwipes

Can I request that you post the lyrics to the songs that were up there?

Also, where did you go to record? And how much did they charge you? Sorry, but I'm into music myself so I'm just curious.

Can I request that you post the lyrics to the songs that were up there?

Also, where did you go to record? And how much did they charge you? Sorry, but I'm into music myself so I'm just curious.

SideSwipes

Last verse
This place is so redundent
I think its time to make an adjustment

(then its the chorus again)



the end of that


The System
We fight for peace
They Fight for power
Push em back
Their final hour

The face of a lier
they cant deny it
Truth is knowledge
lets **** Riot

Final blow
shoot for the head
stupid twist
were all dead

When the days over
we start again
this **** war will never end


Turn the pages
turn back time
War for ages
not justified

They think their safe
but while they sleep
We destroy
their **** dreams

People killed
just incase
their stupid plan
blows in their face

one by one
they take us down
without a fight
without a **** sound


and, thats both of them, I know the lyrics are kinda corny but I try XD.

[QUOTE="zmbi_gmr"]

i like what i heard, but the singer needs something...i'm not sure what...but he needs something. his voice really blends into the instruments. all in all though it was pretty good.

MrAmbush

it wasn't until about 3 minutes into the song that i really heard you, but unfortunately you needed to scream for that to happen. maybe it's emotion in your voice, maybe it's that the music drowns you out a little, but a lot of punk music is that way. right now i would only want to relisten to that song for the instrument portion of the song, but really that shouldn't be how it is. i should want to listen to it to feel the edge that your voice brings to the song. like i said though it's pretty good.

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[QUOTE="zmbi_gmr"]

i like what i heard, but the singer needs something...i'm not sure what...but he needs something. his voice really blends into the instruments. all in all though it was pretty good.

zmbi_gmr

it wasn't until about 3 minutes into the song that i really heard you, but unfortunately you needed to scream for that to happen. maybe it's emotion in your voice, maybe it's that the music drowns you out a little, but a lot of punk music is that way. right now i would only want to relisten to that song for the instrument portion of the song, but really that shouldn't be how it is. i should want to listen to it to feel the edge that your voice brings to the song. like i said though it's pretty good.

Well this is actually the first band ive song in, so im kind of new to it, but ill try to bring more emotion to it for now on, thank you.

[QUOTE="SideSwipes"]

Can I request that you post the lyrics to the songs that were up there?

Also, where did you go to record? And how much did they charge you? Sorry, but I'm into music myself so I'm just curious.

MrAmbush

Only part of the lyrics I didn't like. Otherwise it was pretty good. I extend my thumb in your general direction.

Thanks for the info too!

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[QUOTE="SideSwipes"]

Can I request that you post the lyrics to the songs that were up there?

Also, where did you go to record? And how much did they charge you? Sorry, but I'm into music myself so I'm just curious.

SideSwipes

Only part of the lyrics I didn't like. Otherwise it was pretty good. I extend my thumb in your general direction.

Thanks for the info too!

[QUOTE="zmbi_gmr"]

i like what i heard, but the singer needs something...i'm not sure what...but he needs something. his voice really blends into the instruments. all in all though it was pretty good.

MrAmbush

Treble, I'd say you need to try and use a bit of treble when singing. It would give the vocals a bit more interest IMO.

I think if you guys step it up just a notch, you could get a record contract. It just depends on how bad you want to make it big. ;)

Sounds like every other midwest punk/garage band I've heard. Band is sloppy, drummer is sloppier.

[QUOTE="MrAmbush"]

[QUOTE="zmbi_gmr"]

i like what i heard, but the singer needs something...i'm not sure what...but he needs something. his voice really blends into the instruments. all in all though it was pretty good.

SideSwipes

Treble, I'd say you need to try and use a bit of treble when singing. It would give the vocals a bit more interest IMO.

I think if you guys step it up just a notch, you could get a record contract. It just depends on how bad you want to make it big. ;)

Sounds like every other midwest punk/garage band I've heard. Band is sloppy, drummer is sloppier.

bebopoutlaw3gun

I liked the singing more than anything. He has charisma.

I liked the singing more than anything. He has charisma.

bruinfan617

[QUOTE="bebopoutlaw3gun"]

Sounds like every other midwest punk/garage band I've heard. Band is sloppy, drummer is sloppier.

MrAmbush

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jG2KMkQLZmI

jk of course. ;)

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[QUOTE="bebopoutlaw3gun"]

Sounds like every other midwest punk/garage band I've heard. Band is sloppy, drummer is sloppier.

CocoMarshmellow

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jG2KMkQLZmI

jk of course. ;)

I don't like it and I would not reccomend you to anyone I know

Not my kind of music, but instrumentally, it was pretty good.

The guitars and drums are good and if I was listening to it on the radio I wouldn't know it was by a bunch of teenagers. However one problem that I do have with the song is that you seem to be rushing through the lyrics rather than actually singing them in my opinion.

Overall it's really good just work on the vocals.

I don't mind it, definately pretty good considering how little time you've been going, one question though, why ask for peoples opinion when you get all arsey the moment someone says they don't like it?samremnant