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I think it has something to do with hallucinating, maybe drugs, and trying to come up after a night were something very good happened.
1st verse: There were colours everywhere, illusionary colours, that is, and the ceiling was the limiting wall to the world.
2nd verse: The night just passed away, and all the luck that came with it vanished in the morning.
3rd verse: The night would be much more memorable than the day. Something very good happened, maybe life changing. That moon would forever be remembered.
4th verse: In the end, everything turned out good. People were trying to make it go wrong, but everything just went well.
That's what i got. Very good writing, by the way. :)
Sounds like a poem about the creation of Earth if you ask me. I'd say the lucky seven refers to the seven days of creation from the bible, and this ties back to the presence cast from the past of the morning, as this implies that there was nothing before. And the first line about the pouring colors probably refers to earth in its first stages when it was a barren lifeless volcanic ash world, and I'm assuming the moon would be the essence of the sun because it is basically the sun of the night, as it gives light like the sun, but it reflects it, hence it is an essence. That's what I'm getting from it.Blood-Scribe
Areyou by any chance, majoring in English?
Sounds like a poem about the creation of Earth if you ask me. I'd say the lucky seven refers to the seven days of creation from the bible, and this ties back to the presence cast from the past of the morning, as this implies that there was nothing before. And the first line about the pouring colors probably refers to earth in its first stages when it was a barren lifeless volcanic ash world, and I'm assuming the moon would be the essence of the sun because it is basically the sun of the night, as it gives light like the sun, but it reflects it, hence it is an essence. That's what I'm getting from it.Blood-Scribe
Christians. Finding meaning in nothing since the dawn of time.
[QUOTE="Blood-Scribe"]Sounds like a poem about the creation of Earth if you ask me. I'd say the lucky seven refers to the seven days of creation from the bible, and this ties back to the presence cast from the past of the morning, as this implies that there was nothing before. And the first line about the pouring colors probably refers to earth in its first stages when it was a barren lifeless volcanic ash world, and I'm assuming the moon would be the essence of the sun because it is basically the sun of the night, as it gives light like the sun, but it reflects it, hence it is an essence. That's what I'm getting from it.Chavyneebslod
Areyou by any chance, majoring in English?
No, I'm 16, and I'm going into Digital Art and Video Game Design.
It's funny though, I just realized that I still have a poem sitting on my desktop that I made for english class last year in 10th grade:
The hand of creation transcends the reaches of the universe
Comets cast off their names
Stellar neurons misfire
Light is no longer absent
Through the motions of time, the creator places the seed
And spits out millions of branches
Between the labyrinth of chaos and light of peace
Buds bloom in all directions
Refractions of light ignite and explode
Within the margin of the vacuum
The kinetic energy of matter turns unto itself
It's might sheathed in fire
A body of black
It bears no reflection
Defying its own identity
The eggs of creation are ablaze
The semen of life dictates the future
Man arises from the chaos
He sees the light and the dark
His path is set in motion
Cells of logic are imbued to him
He stands fathomless to his universe
Its boundless horizons baffle him
His curiosity out-stretches his lifetime
Striving for nirvana through perfection
His image is shattered through mortality
Realizing his fallacy, he prays for redemption
The final judgment has been decreed
Time meets its end
The limits of space are shattered
It swallows unto itself
And in spite of it all
We will rise again
Though I didn't really like it that much, because I only spent about 45 minutes on it, but I still got an A.
Edit: Goddamnit, gamespot keeps deleting the spaces between the verses.
[QUOTE="Blood-Scribe"]Sounds like a poem about the creation of Earth if you ask me. I'd say the lucky seven refers to the seven days of creation from the bible, and this ties back to the presence cast from the past of the morning, as this implies that there was nothing before. And the first line about the pouring colors probably refers to earth in its first stages when it was a barren lifeless volcanic ash world, and I'm assuming the moon would be the essence of the sun because it is basically the sun of the night, as it gives light like the sun, but it reflects it, hence it is an essence. That's what I'm getting from it.Boring_Bland
Christians. Finding meaning in nothing since the dawn of time.
You earned that A.It's funny though, I just realized that I still have a poem sitting on my desktop that I made for english class last year in 10th grade:
The hand of creation transcends the reaches of the universe
Comets cast off their names
Stellar neurons misfire
Light is no longer absent
Through the motions of time, the creator places the seed
And spits out millions of branches
Between the labyrinth of chaos and light of peace
Buds bloom in all directions
Refractions of light ignite and explode
Within the margin of the vacuum
The kinetic energy of matter turns unto itself
It's might sheathed in fire
A body of black
It bears no reflection
Defying its own identity
The eggs of creation are ablaze
The semen of life dictates the future
Man arises from the chaos
He sees the light and the dark
His path is set in motion
Cells of logic are imbued to him
He stands fathomless to his universe
Its boundless horizons baffle him
His curiosity out-stretches his lifetime
Striving for nirvana through perfection
His image is shattered through mortality
Realizing his fallacy, he prays for redemption
The final judgment has been decreed
Time meets its end
The limits of space are shattered
It swallows unto itself
And in spite of it all
We will rise again
Though I didn't really like it that much, because I only spent about 45 minutes on it, but I still got an A.Blood-Scribe
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