I don't know really but your letter seems a little bit too much. Its like you are obsessed, which isn't good. If it was me the letter would scare me, most guys fear commitment and that is what you are implying in your letter.
I don't know really but your letter seems a little bit too much. Its like you are obsessed, which isn't good. If it was me the letter would scare me, most guys fear commitment and that is what you are implying in your letter.l0ve
You may like feedback from people, but writing love letters are meant as something that is PRIVATE. You're sharing your deepest emotions (or one would assume), your deepest thoughts, etc. that should be shared with him and him alone. Sharing it with a forum of people you don't know can make a person question how you really feel about him. If you think it comes off as creepy, maybe write it differently. Maybe reread it yourself and rewrite it until it is right the way you want it to sound. Getting feedback from people you don't know won't help you in any way. They are just going to say "It's sweet" or "It's cute", etc. If you're going to write a love letter to your boyfriend and want it to mean something, then don't share it with others. Only share it with him and him alone.
It looks like it's written by a non-writer who is nevertheless trying to brute-force a love letter. I think it's cute. An internet forum seems like the wrong place to ask for feedback, but I guess you're trying every source you can think of. Unless there's a simple typo, change nothing.
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