hey so i wrote a song

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#1 dangerd0g24
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So i was out back smoking and then this song came to me tell me what you think of it as like a punk like song.

Society

We live in a world ruled by one minded capitalist d**kheads

The world as of today is on a one way flight to catastrophe

It is time for us as a whole to liberate are minds and think beyond them

(chorus)

with societies established we are enslaved

societies conform, we will never be free

with societies established we are enslaved

societies conform, we will never be free

Wars wage on in 3rd world countries centered around profit and corporate greed

The truth drowned out by the nonsense spewing medias

(chorus)

with societies established we are enslaved

societies conform, we will never be free

with societies established we are enslaved

societies conform, we will never be free

When society crumbles we are set free

When society crumbles we are set free

When society crumbles we are set free

(spoken) Its not your fault your son is dead its our fault

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#2 badaboom187
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I dont know how it sounds..so i dont know how to comment on it
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#3 stevenscott14
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That's not really a song, that's just some lyrics. ;)

And I'm not particularly enthused by any of punk rock's views, so whatever, I don't think I can really comment on the lyrics themselves.

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#4 xid32
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3/10

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#5 dangerd0g24
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3/10

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alright well its a start.

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#6 Episode_666
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That's was ridiculously terrible. I think I got diabetes just by reading that.
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#7 Bloodbath_87
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Stereotypical punk stuff that I hate. As soon as I saw your avatar I knew what this would be...
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#8 Yunvonn
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No beat = fail
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#9 omfg_its_dally
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I think this, for once, is appropriate: :|
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#10 dangerd0g24
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I think this, for once, is appropriate: :|omfg_its_dally

so you liked it (somewhat).

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#11 omfg_its_dally
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[QUOTE="omfg_its_dally"]I think this, for once, is appropriate: :|dangerd0g24

so you liked it (somewhat).

Somewhat is a reasonable answer.