I wrote a poem..Yay !

 

Red rivers flowing through mind, body, soul
Everywhere they flow where they go
A day like today I go where I am
Where, you'd know if you had been
Viewing the sights and sounds amazing
Electric fires dancing, flowing, blazing
Emotion running free, mind follows
Outer space beyond reach of Apollos
Starry night is illuminating faces
People are all traveling places
I am where I am, am today
In the sky on a pillow here I lay

Where are you
Are you listening?

GRR dang Gamespot hates copy and pastes...It left 3 lines out...now fixed!

I liked it. The double "am" seems to disrupt the flow a little though.blue_elephant

[QUOTE="blue_elephant"]I liked it. The double "am" seems to disrupt the flow a little though.TallicaFan2005

I am more into love poems :oops:xwolfghost

I don't care for poetry that doesn't have a rhyme scheme, it just doesn't seem like it takes any talent.

No offense, I'm sure it's not easy to just make a poem even if it doesn't rhyme, but it's rare for me to read a poem with no rhyme scheme and be impressed.

I may be biased because I write raps though, where the more complex the rhyme scheme the better.  I know that often, in poetry it is considered lacksidaisical for it to rhyme too much, which would obstruct the work if you're trying to be abstract.  But most people completely use this as an excuse to put some words on paper and call it poetry, and say "you can't judge art".  That doesn't cut it.  I'm not talking about you here, though, just people in general, so many people think they write good poetry because it's "from their heart".

oh me likenightshade85

Who the HELL is that in your sig, lol.

[QUOTE="nightshade85"]oh me likeSunJian18

Who the HELL is that in your sig, lol.

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[QUOTE="nightshade85"]oh me likenightshade85

Who the HELL is that in your sig, lol.

He looks like someone who I went to school with but with scratches all over his face.

And I don't know who bruce is.