Need Help With A Song I'm Writing For A Girl

I met this girl in a Sizzlers at this gas stop in the middle of nowhere off of Highway 5 on my trip from San Francisco to LA and I think she was into me. I could tell by the way she blushed at me when I asked for the chicken tenders in my very calm yet commanding voice. Being the middle of nowhere, she probably didn't see many sexy and confident guys her age. I didn't think much of her blushing and smiling and didn't try to make a move on her afterwards but now I can't stop thinking about her.

I hope to see her in September when I drive back to LA since I'll probably run out of gas at the same area so I am preparing a song. I haven't put words and music together yet since lyrics are stil WIP. Here's the progression I'm using http://youtube.com/watch?v=TEukFRk8YKY. Going for the funky sexy feel because honestly I'm not going to be in that little of nowhere place too long so I need to show her I mean business. I mean, the only place to go on a date in the area is the Wendy's across the highway.

Here's some lyrics:

I remember when I first saw you girl
On that trip to LA yea
I was running low on fuel so I got some gas
Then I saw the Sizzlers there

I walked inside you were standing there
You asked me what I wanted yea
Chicken tenders, hold the fries
I'm not that hungry anyway

Then you asked what I'd like to drink
I said coke is very nice
You said is Pepsi fine
Anything that you want girl

You started to blush so very cute
girl I want to get to know ya
you sat me down at the booth
Gave me my Pepsi Cola

Then as I was sitting there
Girl I got to thinking yea
Where the hell do all you live
There's nothing here for 50 miles

The only other things around here
Are a gas station and a Wendy's
You must be one of those freaky
Small town girls that get it on

Maybe later I'll put 1 and 2 together and have a full song ready.

Just tell her you want to **** her brains out and go from there. :Ptomxizor

Sexual harrasment FTW!

I met this girl in a Sizzlers at this gas stop in the middle of nowhere off of Highway 5

she was into me, I was into her

I told gamespot and nobody cared

"You started to blush so very cute
girl I want to get to know ya
you sat me down at the booth
Gave me my Pepsi Cola "

This verse is full of win.

Also, what the hell is a Sizzler?

"You started to blush so very cute
girl I want to get to know ya
you sat me down at the booth
Gave me my Pepsi Cola "

This verse is full of win.

Also, what the hell is a Sizzler?

CheddarLimbo

A nice American restaurant in the west.

I met this girl in a Sizzlers at this gas stop in the middle of nowhere off of Highway 5

she was into me, I was into her

I told gamespot and nobody cared

mark4091

So...what do you need help with?

Perhaps I'm blind or just plain stupid, but I didn't notice the part that asks what you need help with.

So...what do you need help with?

Perhaps I'm blind or just plain stupid, but I didn't notice the part that asks what you need help with.

MrGeezer

opinions, feedback etc

when i read it... my avy was my exact expression :|blooddemon666

Just tell her you want to **** her brains out and go from there. :Ptomxizor

Always with these simple ****** answers! ****** doesn't solve everything!

wait so u dont really kno this girl u just met her at a sizzler barely talkd to her might not even kno her name now u want to drive bak there and sing to her? interesting u must REALLY love heraDrenaLine1337

No, I'll be passing through because I need to go back down to the LA area for school.

[QUOTE="tomxizor"]Just tell her you want to **** her brains out and go from there. :Pkylekatarn10

Always with these simple ****** answers! ****** doesn't solve everything!

For Bonobos it solves everything! :P

walked inside you were standing there
You asked me what I wanted yea
Chicken tenders, hold the fries
I'm not that hungry anyway

she said, no shirt no shoes no service

I said gimmie them tenders

she called security

I said, I still want my tenders

she said fine and gave me them with fries

I was pissed, now I'm in this cell but only with fries cause the cops ate my tenders.

no dipping sauce for you though.

Girl I want to rail you so hard
Oh oh oh so har hard hard
Yeah yeah yeah
From the back then the front
Uh uh uh uh
Gonna ride you like a dragon
Cause I know you like it like that
Yeah yeah yeah
Gonna p n your b
But I must tell you girl
I have aids
**** yeah!

[QUOTE="blooddemon666"]when i read it... my avy was my exact expression :|soulfood4

i was just thinking that

ALSO u never talkd to her and ur calling her freaky woah woah buddy get ur act together talk to her first get to kno her man.....

Eh, I usually go for the Denny's girls.Spandia

Eh, I usually go for the Denny's girls.Spandia

I didn't see any Denny's out there and given the choice I would go to Denny's rather than Sizzler's. Luckily fate had it so there were no Denny's to tempt me and I chose Sizzler's with the hot chick.

[QUOTE="soulfood4"][QUOTE="blooddemon666"]when i read it... my avy was my exact expression :|generalpotatoes

i was just thinking that

Eh, I usually go for the Denny's girls.Spandia

[QUOTE="Spandia"]Eh, I usually go for the Denny's girls._S0LID_SNAKE_

Seriously. Everyone knows the hot waitresses are at IHOP.

walked inside you were standing there
You asked me what I wanted yea
Chicken tenders, hold the fries
I'm not that hungry anyway

she said, no shirt no shoes no service

I said gimmie them tenders

she called security

I said, I still want my tenders

she said fine and gave me them with fries

I was pissed, now I'm in this cell but only with fries cause the cops ate my tenders.

no dipping sauce for you though.

mark4091

What do you guys think of the guitar bit? I'm pretty much set on it and I can add a "breakdown" section if need be.Headbanger88

[QUOTE="Headbanger88"]What do you guys think of the guitar bit? I'm pretty much set on it and I can add a "breakdown" section if need be.Mumbles527

I was going to order the porterhouse this time, only an idiot would order the tenders again. A girl needs a man who eats steaks and I need to show that.

[QUOTE="Mumbles527"][QUOTE="Headbanger88"]What do you guys think of the guitar bit? I'm pretty much set on it and I can add a "breakdown" section if need be.Headbanger88

I was going to order the porterhouse this time, only an idiot would order the tenders again. A girl needs a man who eats steaks and I need to show that.

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Please please please be a joke thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[QUOTE="Mumbles527"][QUOTE="Headbanger88"]What do you guys think of the guitar bit? I'm pretty much set on it and I can add a "breakdown" section if need be.Headbanger88

I was going to order the porterhouse this time, only an idiot would order the tenders again. A girl needs a man who eats steaks and I need to show that.

[QUOTE="Spandia"]Eh, I usually go for the Denny's girls.soulfood4

I tried Waffle House chicks, and random non franchise diners in my past. But, really it's Denny's for me. I'm fine with cracker barrel chicks but that is as low on the franchise chain as I'll go. I think cracker jack has a sex quota of like -3 for thier waitress though.They never put out. thats why I wrote my cracker barrel farwell song

I know you want to do me

and I dont want know quarrel

but your boss he might just sue me

if I enter your cracker barrel

I'd make our loving endless

but I think that you should know this

I have a wife in toledo

but she's killing my labido

I'd look to love you everyday

or at least two times a week

you're kind of ugly anyway

and you sometimes sorta reek

I just might get arrested

and I've go to get aids tested

I think you gave me syphilis

when we did it just like this

I'm headed back to detroit

so just stay out of my life okay?

this is illegal

you're 17

I don't want no trouble

[QUOTE="Headbanger88"]

[QUOTE="Mumbles527"][QUOTE="Headbanger88"]What do you guys think of the guitar bit? I'm pretty much set on it and I can add a "breakdown" section if need be._S0LID_SNAKE_

I was going to order the porterhouse this time, only an idiot would order the tenders again. A girl needs a man who eats steaks and I need to show that.

Does it look like I'm joking? Did you see any silly emoticons? Look at my avatar and ask him if I'm joking. I'm for serious here.

I wrote a rap about my experience at IHOP and Bannana Pancakes

[spoiler]
Banana Pancakes, Banana Pancakes
And hyrup and hyrup

I like banana pancakes
but I don't like bananas
So I go to IHOP and be like i want banana pancakes without bananas
and then the guy be all like, why don't you just get regular pancakes
and im like, cuz i like....

Banana Pancakes, Banana Pancakes
And hyrup and hyrup

i want my hyrup now
i want it today
bring me my hyrup
cuz i doesn't play
the waiter be like is hyrup syrup?
i be like.. no syrup syrup hyrup hyrup syrup hyrup syrup hyrup hyrup syrup
he be like "yo whatever man" i be right back
he walked 10 feet and had a heart attack
i never got my hyrup but i got my pancakes...so i be like

I got Banana Pancakes, Banana Pancakes
but no hyrup but no hyrup
I got Banana Pancakes, Banana Pancakes
but no hyrup but no hyrup [/spoiler]

[QUOTE="soulfood4"][QUOTE="Spandia"]Eh, I usually go for the Denny's girls.Spandia

I know you want to do me

and I dont want know quarrel

but your boss he might just sue me

if I enter your cracker barrel

LOL! That's some good stuff right there. Maybe if you got serious you could help me out with my song.

[QUOTE="Spandia"]

[QUOTE="soulfood4"][QUOTE="Spandia"]Eh, I usually go for the Denny's girls.Headbanger88

I know you want to do me

and I dont want know quarrel

but your boss he might just sue me

if I enter your cracker barrel

LOL! That's some good stuff right there. Maybe if you got serious you could help me out with my song.

It's serious I havn't been to a cracker barrel since. but you've got to be smart, I told her I was getting tested in detroit but really I was going to memphis. She used to try calling me, but I think she might of hung herself, I'm not sure, I saw her in the obituararies once .

But you talked to here once.....about chicken tenders and pepsi._S0LID_SNAKE_

With me, that's all you need. That gives me an idea for a lyric.

With me all you need

Is Chicken Tenders and Pepsi

You know I'm into you

When soft drinks are on the list

Alright this has to be a joke thread....

But if its not.....Im sorry, but you should be put down....