Please help me in english...

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#1 texturaz
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I've got section 'JOBS' on my website, but I don't speak english very well. I need some short, clear text there.

I wrote sthg like this:

If you would like to support (supply? reinforce? streghten? -which word will be the best?) our team,
do not hesitate to write to us. We are looking for people every specialization:

- graphic artist
- photographer
- ...
- ...

Please send your CV and samples of your work on jobs@Something.com

Is that ok?

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#2 sAndroid17
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um, yeah support is probably the best word there

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#3 texturaz
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Ok, and ethg else is ok ?
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#4 sAndroid17
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Ok, and ethg else is ok ?texturaz

If you would like to support our team, do not hesitate to write to us. We are looking for people with different types of specializations

: - graphic artist
- photographer
- ...
- ...

Please send your CV and samples of your work to *email adress*

well im no english teacher. and it could be worded wrong:P but thats better

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#5 TheSystemLord1
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I've got section 'JOBS' on my website, but I don't speak english very well. I need some short, clear text there.

I wrote sthg like this:

If you would like to support (supply? reinforce? streghten? -which word will be the best?) our team,
do not hesitate to write to us. We are looking for people every specialization:

- graphic artist
- photographer
- ...
- ...

Please send your CV and samples of your work on jobs@Something.com

Is that ok?

texturaz

I am an English Major, let me take a crack.

If you would like to support our team, do not hesitate to write to us. We are looking for people from every specialization:

-graphic artist

-photographer

-...

-...

Please send your CV and any samples of work you have done to the following e-mail address: jobs@Something.com.

I like the way that flows.

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#6 aliblabla2007
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Support is the most suitable word for that, yeah. Here's my suggestion:

If you would like to supportour team, do not hesitate to write to us. We are looking for people who can fill at least one of the following roles:

- graphics artist
- photographer
- ...
- ...

If you are interested, please send your CV and samples of your work to the following email address: jobs@Something.com

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#7 texturaz
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OK, thanks a lot guys !
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#8 jimmyjammer69
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or "join" or "assist"
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#9 Rocky32189
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I would put "If you would like to be a part of our team" or "join our team". I don't think any of the words you chose are used correctly in the context you are looking for. However, even if you keep it as support, people will know what you mean.
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#10 karriston
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That's perfectly ok, but I would put a "from" between "people" and "every".
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#11 Dawq902
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[QUOTE="texturaz"]

I've got section 'JOBS' on my website, but I don't speak english very well. I need some short, clear text there.

I wrote sthg like this:

If you would like to support (supply? reinforce? streghten? -which word will be the best?) our team,
do not hesitate to write to us. We are looking for people every specialization:

- graphic artist
- photographer
- ...
- ...

Please send your CV and samples of your work on jobs@Something.com

Is that ok?

TheSystemLord1

I am an English Major, let me take a crack.

If you would like to support our team, do not hesitate to write to us. We are looking for people from every specialization:

-graphic artist

-photographer

-...

-...

Please send your CV and any samples of work you have done to the following e-mail address: jobs@Something.com.

I like the way that flows.

one of these two would flow the best and sound the most professional.