The Scene: { 2340, humanity has finally discovered true space exploration. Shuttles are set out orbiting far away distances in vast space. Some space colonies exist, however with no permanent life on them. They are used as emergency zones incase major space stations experience malfunctions. Here, we lay our scene on a certain space station. It is orbiting near an artificially created moon. On board the space station are 4 shuttles which may depart at any time to land on the moon for food, supplies, weapons, ammunition, mobile armor suits. Also on board are very peculiar inhabitants, 10 humans, one captain which has a key-card controlling locking of doors, targets of sentry guns, and also on board is an A.I whose goal is to protect the humans. Our scene takes us to the control room with the AI and captain and a human in a orange suit.)
CAPTAIN: I can trust you Orange, your blood test sample came back to me positive. This is very well and good. Now i won't be so lonely in the CTRL. Room. I have locked both doors, your assignment here will be to watch for suspicious activity and answer any calls I may get. I will be working on defensive layers, we may need them later. I will also be finishing another bloodtest sample.
ORANGE: Yessir! {Orange cocks and loads rifle, retreats to Oxygen generator for sleep.}
{Large A.I, looking like a robotic cyclops with a red eye and no skin, only robotic exterior, is aimlessly wandering the quarters.}
{The very next day, they get a transmission.}
Computer: T R A N S M I S S I O N ( P U R P L E ): Captain, I am requesting entrance to the captains room to make my journey to the shuttle bay to stock up on ammunition. I fear the parasite is plotting to evolve to a stronger form.
Orange: Captain, purple is requesting entrance.
CAPTAIN: Let him through.
{Purple leads through Oxygen Generator and to the Power Generator, to the shuttle bay}
ORANGE: Do you think he could be infected?
Captain: Anyone can be infected as far as we know. AI, please send drones to power generator. I fear it will be a target of the infested human.
{END SCENE 1.}
I will do these in installments if more people like them.
[QUOTE="XilePrincess"]Not really grabbing my interest.BabbsTheTitan
can i get some critique Change it from a play to a movie. watching AIs clunk around onstage would look pretty dumb imo. And using colors as names reminds me of pokemon (ie, all the cities are color names) so I'd not do that.
[QUOTE="BabbsTheTitan"][QUOTE="XilePrincess"]Not really grabbing my interest.XilePrincess
can i get some critique Change it from a play to a movie. watching AIs clunk around onstage would look pretty dumb imo. And using colors as names reminds me of pokemon (ie, all the cities are color names) so I'd not do that. Its based on a videogame
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