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[spoiler] It all began on a cold winter night at the OT State Penitentiary...Mods and Admins are seen lurking in every corner. It had been an incredibly dull evening; that is, until a visitor had arrived.
"I'm looking for Bruce (Greatgone). I'm here for a visit."
"And who are you?" exclaimed a Mod, hungry for something interesting to happen.
"Just a friend. What does it matter?"
"Keep that attitude up and you can look forward to a nice '7-day vacation'."
"Alright, alright. Can you just take me to him?"
"Follow me."
The two walk through many small hallways, each one reeking of spam. After nearly 15 minutes of walking, the Mod shows the visitor to a small room. A few minutes later, Bruce walks in.
"Hey Bruce," said the visitor.
"Ed (Spirit)?! Is it really you??" said Bruce in excitement.
"Yeah, and I have something really important to tell you."
"I've figured out a way for all of us to get Mod promotions, but it won't be easy," whispered Ed so the Mod couldn't hear.
"What's that matter to me? How in the hell am I supposed to help you...bein' locked in here and all."
In an instant, Ed whips around, shooting the Mod right in the neck with a tranquilizer.
"That's how. Now hurry up, let's get you outta here." [/spoiler]
[spoiler] It all began on a cold winter night at the OT State Penitentiary...Mods and Admins are seen lurking in every corner. It had been an incredibly dull evening; that is, until a visitor had arrived.
"I'm looking for Bruce (Greatgone). I'm here for a visit."
"And who are you?" exclaimed a Mod, hungry for something interesting to happen.
"Just a friend. What does it matter?"
"Keep that attitude up and you can look forward to a nice '7-day vacation'."
"Alright, alright. Can you just take me to him?"
"Follow me."
The two walk through many small hallways, each one reeking of spam. After nearly 15 minutes of walking, the Mod shows the visitor to a small room. A few minutes later, Bruce walks in.
"Hey Bruce," said the visitor.
"Ed (Spirit)?! Is it really you??" said Bruce in excitement.
"Yeah, and I have something really important to tell you."
"I've figured out a way for all of us to get Mod promotions, but it won't be easy," whispered Ed so the Mod couldn't hear.
"What's that matter to me? How in the hell am I supposed to help you...bein' locked in here and all."
In an instant, Ed whips around, shooting the Mod right in the neck with a tranquilizer.
"That's how. Now hurry up, let's get you outta here." [/spoiler]
KJAX90
*claps* I had fun reading that. _S0LID_SNAKE_ came up with the idea of that, congrats.
Oh,I see,in a penitentiary.I like it.Do the actor have a say in their roles? Okay,I'll make up some mock-up screens for you.Expect them tomorrow.[spoiler] It all began on a cold winter night at the OT State Penitentiary...Mods and Admins are seen lurking in every corner. It had been an incredibly dull evening; that is, until a visitor had arrived.
"I'm looking for Bruce (Greatgone). I'm here for a visit."
"And who are you?" exclaimed a Mod, hungry for something interesting to happen.
"Just a friend. What does it matter?"
"Keep that attitude up and you can look forward to a nice '7-day vacation'."
"Alright, alright. Can you just take me to him?"
"Follow me."
The two walk through many small hallways, each one reeking of spam. After nearly 15 minutes of walking, the Mod shows the visitor to a small room. A few minutes later, Bruce walks in.
"Hey Bruce," said the visitor.
"Ed (Spirit)?! Is it really you??" said Bruce in excitement.
"Yeah, and I have something really important to tell you."
"I've figured out a way for all of us to get Mod promotions, but it won't be easy," whispered Ed so the Mod couldn't hear.
"What's that matter to me? How in the hell am I supposed to help you...bein' locked in here and all."
In an instant, Ed whips around, shooting the Mod right in the neck with a tranquilizer.
"That's how. Now hurry up, let's get you outta here." [/spoiler]
KJAX90
[QUOTE="KJAX90"]Oh,I see,in a penitentiary.I like it.Do the actor have a say in their roles? Okay,I'll make up some mock-up screens for you.Expect them tomorrow.[spoiler] It all began on a cold winter night at the OT State Penitentiary...Mods and Admins are seen lurking in every corner. It had been an incredibly dull evening; that is, until a visitor had arrived.
"I'm looking for Bruce (Greatgone). I'm here for a visit."
"And who are you?" exclaimed a Mod, hungry for something interesting to happen.
"Just a friend. What does it matter?"
"Keep that attitude up and you can look forward to a nice '7-day vacation'."
"Alright, alright. Can you just take me to him?"
"Follow me."
The two walk through many small hallways, each one reeking of spam. After nearly 15 minutes of walking, the Mod shows the visitor to a small room. A few minutes later, Bruce walks in.
"Hey Bruce," said the visitor.
"Ed (Spirit)?! Is it really you??" said Bruce in excitement.
"Yeah, and I have something really important to tell you."
"I've figured out a way for all of us to get Mod promotions, but it won't be easy," whispered Ed so the Mod couldn't hear.
"What's that matter to me? How in the hell am I supposed to help you...bein' locked in here and all."
In an instant, Ed whips around, shooting the Mod right in the neck with a tranquilizer.
"That's how. Now hurry up, let's get you outta here." [/spoiler]
Greyhound222
Not yet. :P But thanks; I'll be looking forward to them. Be back in a few hours!
[QUOTE="KJAX90"]Oh,I see,in a penitentiary.I like it.Do the actor have a say in their roles? Okay,I'll make up some mock-up screens for you.Expect them tomorrow.[spoiler] It all began on a cold winter night at the OT State Penitentiary...Mods and Admins are seen lurking in every corner. It had been an incredibly dull evening; that is, until a visitor had arrived.
"I'm looking for Bruce (Greatgone). I'm here for a visit."
"And who are you?" exclaimed a Mod, hungry for something interesting to happen.
"Just a friend. What does it matter?"
"Keep that attitude up and you can look forward to a nice '7-day vacation'."
"Alright, alright. Can you just take me to him?"
"Follow me."
The two walk through many small hallways, each one reeking of spam. After nearly 15 minutes of walking, the Mod shows the visitor to a small room. A few minutes later, Bruce walks in.
"Hey Bruce," said the visitor.
"Ed (Spirit)?! Is it really you??" said Bruce in excitement.
"Yeah, and I have something really important to tell you."
"I've figured out a way for all of us to get Mod promotions, but it won't be easy," whispered Ed so the Mod couldn't hear.
"What's that matter to me? How in the hell am I supposed to help you...bein' locked in here and all."
In an instant, Ed whips around, shooting the Mod right in the neck with a tranquilizer.
"That's how. Now hurry up, let's get you outta here." [/spoiler]
Greyhound222
Well... GreatGone is basically the leader of the banned, ban dodger group, I'm second command, that's all I know. Besides that Apollo is leader of the opposite.
Muse
Modest Mouse
and Wolf Parade have been booked for the soundtrack... Along with the Beastie Boys..
[QUOTE="Apollo5000"]Heres a theory, out avatars can be used for symbols on the helmets or clothes if thats possible...Also shouldn't the script be in script format so its easier to view for everyone?SpiritEmu
Help us write the script, be back on later.
Actually i've got to go for just now myself, i'll be back on later and give y'all a hand![QUOTE="Greyhound222"]Ok,well,actually,the mock-ups are delayed.I need source pics so I can tell what type of penitentiary you want.Do you want a run-down,super-max etc.SpiritEmu
Run-Down, like Alcatraz.
Okay,thanks.I'll get cracking now. Also,will I help with the script?Please Log In to post.
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