[QUOTE="Pirate700"]Seriously dude, I know you're only 14 but if you think I "dissed" you, you need to grow up and fast. You asked what we thought of them and I told you. You asked what was wrong, and I told you. You asked what should be fixed and I told you. That called critiquing, not dissing. And if you don't know what body structure or shading is referring to, then seriously, step away from the pencil and paper. :?
Pirate700
What part of the shading? Lighting? What part of the body structure? Torso, legs, feet? BE MORE SPECIFIC! There is no being more specific. The shading is way off thus not giving the piece any depth and the body structure as in form, shape, ergonomics, whatever you want to call it, is also off. If you work on those, you will get much better. You are already off to a decent start. Well thanks for finally explaining!
after all the effort to get them on, they arent very good.
What about them isn't good? what do you mean>? if a picture doesnt look good, it doesnt look good:| they dont look real, it looks as though you have traced the bodies, so you havnt got the dimensions right. the only thing it looks like you have done free hand is the faces:P they are a completely different style than the bodies you say you are only 14.. so what... you are either a good drawer always or your not, my mate in grade 7(12 or 13) was incredible.
after all the effort to get them on, they arent very good.
sAndroid17
What about them isn't good? what do you mean>? if a picture doesnt look good, it doesnt look good:| they dont look real, it looks as though you have traced the bodies, so you havnt got the dimensions right. the only thing it looks like you have done free hand is the faces:P they are a completely different style than the bodies you say you are only 14.. so what... you are either a good drawer always or your not, my mate in grade 7(12 or 13) was incredible. Well, I didn't trace them.
[QUOTE="sAndroid17"][QUOTE="flamesrule12"]What about them isn't good?
what do you mean>? if a picture doesnt look good, it doesnt look good:| they dont look real, it looks as though you have traced the bodies, so you havnt got the dimensions right. the only thing it looks like you have done free hand is the faces:P they are a completely different style than the bodies you say you are only 14.. so what... you are either a good drawer always or your not, my mate in grade 7(12 or 13) was incredible. Well, I didn't trace them.well ist a completely different drawing style than the faces
[QUOTE="sAndroid17"] what do you mean>? if a picture doesnt look good, it doesnt look good:| they dont look real, it looks as though you have traced the bodies, so you havnt got the dimensions right. the only thing it looks like you have done free hand is the faces:P they are a completely different style than the bodies you say you are only 14.. so what... you are either a good drawer always or your not, my mate in grade 7(12 or 13) was incredible. sAndroid17
Well, I didn't trace them.well ist a completely different drawing style than the faces I think you guys should stop dissing. They get it and I don't think they look traced. Great job TC! Keep up the good work! 9/10
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