Remembered Event Essay

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#1 TallicaFan2005
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Okay so I have an essay due today that is supposed to be a remembered autobiographical event set in a school environment that changed something about me or how I view the world.

So I have this so far and was wondering where you think I should expand on it. It needs to be at least three pages and this is two and a half:

WTF It keeps saying forbidden and my html is messed up when I try to paste it.

Alright hold on I'm going to drop it on my webpage quick and post a link.

http://www.ipwn1.com/essay.htm
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#2 Gallego
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you can elaborate more on the fun you had with those new people you met. The card game, talking about a show, etc. You can also make a few things up...I mean, the teacher is not going to know if you really did them anyway.
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#3 Underworldy69
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lol

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#5 needled24-7
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i assume you're writing in size 12 font. change all the periods to size 14, that will give it a bit more length. if it's still not long enough, you can do it with the commas also.

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#6 Underworldy69
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i assume you're writing in size 12 font. change all the periods to size 14, that will give it a bit more length. if it's still not long enough, you can do it with the commas also.

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In a shocking twist it was all a dream, but then the same thing happens again in real life.

Boom. Story length doubled.

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In a shocking twist it was all a dream, but then the same thing happens again in real life.

Boom. Story length doubled.

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#9 dave123321
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haven't seen a double years bumped thread in a while.
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haven't seen a double years bumped thread in a while.dave123321
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haven't seen a double years bumped thread in a while.dave123321
And buy the same user as well....weird.
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#12 Underworldy69
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[QUOTE="dave123321"]haven't seen a double years bumped thread in a while.Commander-Gree
And buy the same user as well....weird.

good post