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#1 loggens
Member since 2007 • 1441 Posts

Iam half way with this..dunno what to do next..

and i know the render is bad cutout :) (cut mysel)

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didnt know what to but on the left side so i added text and made it smaller:P

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#2 Dudersaper
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Not that bad, just a tad over contrasted, and theres lots of negative space.
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#3 Jas0n94
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There is a lot of empty space on the left. Make the light source more... light xD. Find another wings stock cuz this looks like wooden. this has a lot of potencial, don't quit it ;)
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#4 loggens
Member since 2007 • 1441 Posts
Alright..new wings..more stuff..and not so contrasted..:)wait for V2:D
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#5 Adurna0
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Pretty cool.;) But it IS kinda empty. I agree with Jason on the wings part. And when you do find new wings place them a bit more to the front cuz now it seems like they're coming out from the middle of her back while they should be coming out from the shoulders. Not sure if you get what i mean. And fix her knee a bit cuz it's a little choppy. Other than that the rendering's not bad. I really like the flame and the light in general.:D
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#6 loggens
Member since 2007 • 1441 Posts
Know what u mean..noticed the same thing on second wing when u told..fixed the knee i think:)
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#7 cousin_eddy
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I think it looks great :D.
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#8 pokemondude2012
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v1 is best