Hidden Blade and Bunny Girl UPDATED!!

Well I haven't posted nothing in a couple of days, but I have been lurking around the union. :P And saw some tutorials that snowmanu360 posted. And I tried my hand at them. Even though with the second sig, I started to use one and I got stuck on some steps and then decided to do what I had done in the last tutorial to finish it. But enough of the talking...I need feed back, :P I have the xcf files of both of theses so...I can always go back and fix them again. So let me have it. :P

V2: No Sharpening, no Gradient Maps, just smudging and some more brushes, and of course different color background and I made the render bigger and moved it to the middle.

V3: I did Graident Maps at the end:

V4: Black and White

I hate you. j/k :P Seriously now, why you did this to Altair? The colors are totally off and the left side is LQ. Big text in this font AND on the bottom doesn't works imo. Also the BG lacks of contrast and the render is overcontrasted :P  Try to keep a balance between the render and the BG.

 The second needs some more blending and it's ready to go.

oh! the text...

the bunny girl one, text is hard to read.

oh! the text...

the bunny girl one, text is hard to read.

BrunoBRS

Like I said I have the xcf files I can go back and change up these sigs with any kind of tip you give me.

First, overcontraste =/= Oversharpened :P

Second, I'd remove the text on both. Yes a blue tone would work with Altair, or a brown, careful when setting space stocks in, or whatever you used, the ones you used are LQ, made the whole sig end up that way unfortunatly.

The girl one needs the render to blend more, smaller focal, more Foreground effects and needs flow

What gradients are you using? :? Looks like you pick random ones, try using gradients that compliment the colours.Dudersaper

The centered render doesn't really work in the new Altair one, you could crop the right side of the sig... And I think the BW version looks better, mostly cuz the colors in the other one are a bit random.Adurna0

The basic problem is that it lacks of flow IMO. really really really really really really really really really messyJas0n94

i liked it better now... but i still think AC doesn't match with colorful sparkles.

make the text slightly bigger (not much).