I Want It Bad..Your Bad Romance RE-DONE

First this is what the render I used was,

Alright I went back to my file and decided to show what I started out with at first:

Since I had to rotate her I had to smudge the render and the erase the top render to make it look like it wasn't cut off.

This is the effects I did before Gradient Maps

This one I only used one Gradient Map and that was the black and white, and no sharpening either.

Plus I was trying to cover up that stuff on the left side so you couldn't see what I did with the render...so that might be why I don't have that much of a good flow. :? Plus that extra face you see too, I did that by using Make Seamless under the filters.

Text has potencial but could be better executed.

The whole thing is a bit over contrasted.

And it's pretty much a floating head in a blurry BG

Try making more detailed BG's (Try solid C4D's and stuff like that)

Text has potencial but could be better executed.

The whole thing is a bit over contrasted.

And it's pretty much a floating head in a blurry BG

Try making more detailed BG's (Try solid C4D's and stuff like that)

Dudersaper

Exactly. And watch out your flow. There are effects going everywhere

what they sed..lol

My main concern is its overcontrasted, and it has a floating head. Decent text.

You could do better ;)

Actually those blurred black lines on the left ruin the flow.

EDIT: I just figured out that those are clipping masks of her face. I suggest immediate removal

Since I still have the xcf file..I will try fixing it and also show you guys how I started out too. Because it is not really a floating head. :P Colmillios

hmm effects overkill much ? you over covvered with effects try not to fill upthe space completely with multiple kinds of effects try just a limited number of effects but at a bigger scale to cover some space and create some sort of flow also you blured it didnt you ? daxter223

[QUOTE="Colmillios"]Since I still have the xcf file..I will try fixing it and also show you guys how I started out too. Because it is not really a floating head. :P Dudersaper