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#1 blackwingzero
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Though I'd go for a properly sized sig so I made one. Note Sigs 1 and 2 are the same just with a different effect. Tell me what think or give me an idea as to how to make them better as I'm going to use one.

Sig 1

This one I went for a fire like effect.

Sig 2

Sig 2

With this one I tried for ice effect.

sig 2 take 2

If anyone want's a copy of the fire effect by itself let me know.

Here's the updated version. Let me know if I got the errors.

sig2-2

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#2 Pain9000000
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well, they are both kinda plain in the background, and they both don't have clear renders, but I would say sig 2 cause it is a little better color wise, just keep practicing, use fractals and c4d's, and make your renders bigger when you make sigs ;)
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#3 blackwingzero
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The images aren't too visable on purpose to make it look like they're in the flames or ice so to speak.
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#4 Pain9000000
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well, you overdid it in my opinion
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#5 dragonfly110
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to hard ot make out the focal and plain, I can see that you worked hard on the effect but it needs better application and more flow and better compo. good start though, Im sure if you continue fiddling with it for a while itll turn out great :)

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#6 sleepinglion789
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not too bad, just that the renders need to be a bit bigger, i Like #2 better
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#7 blackwingzero
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I'll try a different render for the right and left sides that are bigger. I'm working on the fire effect at the moment. Will post an updated version once it's done in this thread to get some feedback and see if I fixed the errors. So far what I gather from everyone that's posted is wrong with it is the effect needs more work and the renders need to be a bit bigger.
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#8 Grottekvarnen
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yep the second one is much better....try bigger renders and more effects and brushes to the background
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#9 govinator07
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i agree the second is better. i must say i like it better than the banner.. just follow what everyone else said :P
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#10 Bond_of_Flame23
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#2 is alot clearer but both backgrouns are kinda plain. I liked how you made the letters blend in good. 7.5/10
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#11 blackwingzero
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Well govinator07 if you want to use it but with different wording let me know by either PM or posting here because I'm probably not going to be using that one. Like I said I'm working on the flame one as it's the basis for the ice one and I think I've cracked the effect so that it looks better. Just got to work on the render placement now and once that's done I'll post the updated copy in this thread in the first post. And you're right this looks better than my banner as it's a mess and I don't think I can salvage it.

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#12 govinator07
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i didnt say i wanted to use it :| i just said it looks better..
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#13 blackwingzero
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Sorry about that govinator07. I must've screwed up when I was reading your comment. My bad.

I think got it. Refer to the top of this topic for the updated sig.

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#14 Dudersaper
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Middle focal is too small. there pretty monotoned and the fire one is overcontrasted.

Get some nice tuts :)

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#15 blackwingzero
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Unfortunatly I can't go much bigger with the middle render without having to redo the entire sig from scratch.