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#1 Flamesingh1
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BW version:

Lets see if anyone can figure out who the character is.

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#2 BrunoBRS
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well acording to a friend's sig, looks like the guy from cowboy bebop.

but that's the problem: it looks cool, but it's not good. i mean, you can't see the focal, it creates a feeling of frustration :P

and just for the record, i like the colored one more.

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#3 Flamesingh1
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well acording to a friend's sig, looks like the guy from cowboy bebop.

but that's the problem: it looks cool, but it's not good. i mean, you can't see the focal, it creates a feeling of frustration :P

and just for the record, i like the colored one more.

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But that mainly the point of typography , for the letters to be the focal rather than a render.
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#4 BrunoBRS
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doesn't change the fact that everyone (or at least i) will always be looking at the invisible dude trying to see him more clearly, causing said frustration :P
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#5 Flamesingh1
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doesn't change the fact that everyone (or at least i) will always be looking at the invisible dude trying to see him more clearly, causing said frustration :PBrunoBRS
Now see theres 2 ways to look at that , you could say that its a weakness of the piece , or you could say that its a pro for the piece because you keep looking at it to try to figure out its secrets.
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#6 BrunoBRS
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i knew you'd say that :P

and you didn't say if i guessed right or wrong

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#7 Flamesingh1
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i knew you'd say that :P

and you didn't say if i guessed right or wrong

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Oh yeah , you guessed right , it's Spike Spiegal. And i rendered the render i used.
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#8 blackwingzero
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Its Spike from Cowboy Bebop. Rather interesting idea.
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#9 zeldafreak7
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i like it, but i agree that its sorta frustrating. it actually gave me headache just now.:P
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#10 BrunoBRS
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[QUOTE="BrunoBRS"]

i knew you'd say that :P

and you didn't say if i guessed right or wrong

Flamesingh1
Oh yeah , you guessed right , it's Spike Spiegal. And i rendered the render i used.

well i can't really rate the quality of the render because... you know... GRR :x
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#11 mastetofthedark
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Great concept bad execution.
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#12 BrunoBRS
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I HAD AN IDEA!

try to make his outline thicker. not much, just a little. AND DON'T CHANGE THE HEAD, because it's working fine as it is.

can you do it on the first one, just so i see how it looks like? :D

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#13 Mr_Jenkins
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I think this might be a right brain/left brain thing.  The right brain is trying to just look at the picture how it is altogether, but the left brain is trying to find some logic such as lines.  I'm right brained, so I didn't find this frustrating and thought it looked really neat.  Of course I might be off...but either way I totally dig it. 8)

 

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#14 Flamesingh1
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I have an idea , try standing back from your monitor while looking at the picture.
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#15 BrunoBRS
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I have an idea , try standing back from your monitor while looking at the picture.Flamesingh1
nope. still clearly noticeable that there's a sillhouette, still really hard to see it properly.
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#16 Dudersaper
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I don't like how it leaves an empty looking space in the middle. And I agree with Motd
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#17 Jas0n94
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Great concept bad execution.mastetofthedark

This^ but I wouldn't say bad. It could just use some improvements. Also I am not a fan of those "rust" textures.

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#18 zeldafreak7
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I think this might be a right brain/left brain thing.  The right brain is trying to just look at the picture how it is altogether, but the left brain is trying to find some logic such as lines.  I'm right brained, so I didn't find this frustrating and thought it looked really neat.  Of course I might be off...but either way I totally dig it. 8)Mr_Jenkins

is it possible youre wrong in every way.:P

naw, i love it, it just is kinda annoying trying to look at it straight. but that imo makes it a great interesting design. 

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#19 loggens
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but that's the problem: it looks cool, but it's not good. i mean, you can't see the focal, it creates a feeling of frustration :P

and just for the record, i like the colored one more.

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Its like iam saying but i didnt sed that