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#1 Pain9000000
Member since 2008 • 21484 Posts

I'm not sure if I like it or not. I have the original file so let me know if I should change anything

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#2 dahui58
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I don't like the colours (far too many, needs a smaller colour scheme).

Effect seem random as well, build up on the lines coming from him maybe rather than having just a few sitting there standing out?

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#3 anihimz
Member since 2010 • 14242 Posts

Has a good compo just needs more build up of lines

Oh and PM me the stock/render plz

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#4 Pain9000000
Member since 2008 • 21484 Posts

I don't like the colours (far too many, needs a smaller colour scheme).

Effect seem random as well, build up on the lines coming from him maybe rather than having just a few sitting there standing out?

dahui58

Hmm...ok. the only reason I did it like this is cause I have been told I have an issue with too many effects so I was trying something simpler

@ani - just search roxas render on photobucket

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#5 BrunoBRS
Member since 2005 • 74156 Posts

HOLY CRAP PAIN'S ALIVE.

it has a nice flow, but that's it. text is bad, left side looks "dirty", and effects are meh.

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#6 Pain9000000
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Question, what do you think I should add to the lines coming from him? Like should I define them more with like another c4d or some pentooling or what? and yeah if you know how I can get more texts in PS 7 that would be great cause I have tried and it doesn't work! So I'm stuck with the pre-sets
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#7 Dudersaper
Member since 2007 • 32952 Posts

50x better than your old stuff, I'll give you that.

Lighting and contrast are too high. Just fix that up and it's a pretty solid tag.

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#8 Jas0n94
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Hi Pain!

Remove the motion blur and add some detailed effects like dust or sparkles.

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#9 BrunoBRS
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*notices ghost roxas*

*can't stop being annoyed by it*

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#10 Bobakuzero
Member since 2005 • 12162 Posts

50x better than your old stuff, I'll give you that.

Lighting and contrast are too high. Just fix that up and it's a pretty solid tag.

Dudersaper
Alot better then before. Nice to see you again too. :)
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#11 Pain9000000
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Ok I tried to take everyone's advice into account and I tried to get rid of the things that you guys didn't like, including the ghost roxas lol. And I just went ahead and killed the text. Also as duder suggested I tried to dim the colors and the lighting a bit, so let me know what you guys think of v.2 ;)
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#12 anihimz
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I think you overdid it...V1 is better than V2 IMO
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#13 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts

V2 is bad. it's very... dirty.

always aim for a clen look.