Perfected Technique!

Alright, I have perfected the technique I have been working on the past week or so, I just wanted to get everyone's opinion on these 2 sigs, and please don't comment on what renders I used or anything close to that nature, we are adults here :|

Sig 1:

Ok so with the first sig the guy was actually black and white, so does he look somewhat natural?

Sig 2:

How's the text on this one? Placement good? so and so

Yeah I am mainly trying to focus on text at the moment so yeah, please don't forget to comment on the text :)

Text is bad on both :\

Your BG never are fitting with text tbh. I can't explain why, but every text you use it looks bad.

I wouldn't say perfected, the circles on the first don't look good, use a softer brush, the one you used is slightly hard. It's slightly overcontrasted and the render doesn't fit the BG, and the bg is too bright. BG is too simple and kinda mono. But yes the colouring of the guy was pretty well done .

On the second, the pen tool is really basic and lame tbh, render doesn't fit the BG, and I already commented on it's text.

Keep trying :)

EDIT: And most here are teenagers :P

Well they could still try and act like adults >.>

and yeah, I am not a fan of the circles on the first one, don't know why I thought they looked good before, perhaps I was tired, at any rate yeah

The pen tooling for the second one I was just trying to add a little something to the sig, and darn this text conundrum! :P

Ok without talking about the renders too much. They simply don't look like they fit in with the background but that may just be me.:P

The backgrounds look good but a little too bright at least priamrly in the first one. The pen tooling in the second one looks decent but seems to stand out too much.

Text wise the first one looks very bad. Stands out too much doesn't seem to fit at all. The second one's text looks better in both color and placement but it would help if it was blended in a bit more.

I actually think the first one would look better without the circles.

I am also not a fan of the reused renders in the background of both, seems uneeded an detract from the focal imo.

i still don't like those circles, but whatever :P

pentooling in front of the guy on the second sig doesn't automatically blend him. he seems pretty "cut out", especially on the right side (with the black outline and everything), and the text is hard to read, being orange and white on an orange and white background.

on the first one, also needs some blending, and the text isn't bad at all.