E3 Question Blitz up for evaluation

They say persistence pays off... well, I'm on blog #11, still trying to get featured. My resolve is strong!

http://www.gamespot.com/users/experience_fade/show_blog_entry.php?topic_id=m-100-26027122

My burning question is: are you asking for critique? 

They say persistence pays off... well, I'm on blog #11, still trying to get featured. My resolve is strong!

http://www.gamespot.com/users/experience_fade/show_blog_entry.php?topic_id=m-100-26027122

 

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