Made a Song for Gears of War

Well me and My friend Mike 0 made a song for gears of war. The song has a little bit of rock, Rap, and Comdey in it as well. All I ask you to do is Just listen to it and give feed back. Postive or negative. any feedback is better then No feedback you know?? Everything in the song is true, and please Listen to the lyrics. LOL.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5447159&q=hi

Theres the song. I can Post Lyrics up if you want...Juss Say on the thread.

P.S.
Gamertags:

Mike 0 - str8outtafrisko
TeXaZ - YaDaDax2eZx

And A Video for the song will come soon by the way. Hope you enjoy.

You can Download if you go to www.soundclick.com/texaz06, click on Music, Scroll down to the song, and click MP3. should DL for you.

If the intent for this song was to be funny, mission accomplished. It had a good flow for sure, and the lyrics are hilarious, the only thing I'm scared of is that you might think this is like actually serious and cool.

One thing I would personally tone down is the echoing of words...like "It's World War 4 (Four!)", it comes off as a little Fred Durst-ish. Other than that it's good. The second guy talking to a computer manufactured beat was hilarious.

Good job.