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Nicolaj - Story of an Angel - Chapter 4

The girls arrive at Jane's house in less than ten minutes. They approach the front door and ring the doorbell. Almost immediately, Jane answers.
Jane: (Squealing happily and throwing her arms around the four) Ohhh!!! My babies!!! Hi!!! Oh, I'm so happy you made it!!!
Ojo: Hey, girl!
Jane: Hi, Ojo, Sweet-Cheeks. (Kisses Ojo's cheek)
Madison: Hey, Sweetie.
Jane: Hi, Precious. (Kisses Madison's cheek)
Teresa: (Bitterly) Hi.
Jane: Hey, Sweetheart. (Kisses Teresa's cheek)
Ojo: Sorry she's being such a bleep again.
Jane: Awww, it's okay. She's still my baby.
Tiffany: (Smiling) Hey, Jane.
Jane: (Squealing) Baby!!! Awww, come here, you! (Throws her arms around Tiffany and kisses her cheek) You look so cute! Oh, I could just eat you right up!
Tiffany: You are so sweet.
Jane: Awww, I love being sweet to you. (Looks at the other girls) Awww, you three come here right now. (Hugs them again)
Tiffany: I was gonna say. Don't give me extra attention. (Laughs nervously)
Jane: Aww, I love all of you equally. I don't have any favorites. Now, you four angels come in right now.
The four follow Jane into the living room.
Jane: (Announcing to everyone) More of my babies have arrived!
Sunshine: Hi, everyone!
Ojo: Hey, Sunny-Girl.
Candy: (Jumping out of her seat and hugging everyone) Hi, my little angels!
Madison: (Teasing) Hey, you Jane clone, you.
Candy: (Giggles) You think I'm just like Jane?
Madison: A lot like her.
Candy: Aww, I'm honored.
Jane: Why don't you all sit down? I want you to feel at home.
The other girls sit down on one of the sofas Jane has out.
Ojo: These couches are really comfy, Jane.
Teresa: (Farts) What was that?
Ojo: Teresa, that was you! You disgusting pig! Say excuse me!
Teresa: Excuse you.
Tiffany: (Sniffs) Eww! (Not breathing) God, that stinks!
Teresa: Then, shower more often.
Madison: (Hides head in face) Oh, Lord, help me.
Ojo: Teresa, you're embarrassing us!
Abbie: (Laughs) Don't worry about it, you guys. I thought that was funny.
Madison: Hey, Abbie. How've you been doing?
Abbie: Great.
Madison: How's that baby doing?
Abbie: The doctor says it's healthy.
Ojo: Are you excited?
Abbie: Yeah. I'm scared, too.
Ojo: Aww, I understand. We'll be here for you, though.
Madison: We'll be in the delivery room when you have your baby.
Abbie: Aww, thanks, you guys. I want all of you there.
Sunshine: We'll be right there for ya', Sweetie-Pie.
Abbie: Thank you so much.
Jane: Awww, you're welcome, Baby. Now, we have one more guest to arrive. Then, we'll have dinner. He should be here any moment now.
(Doorbell rings)
Jane: Oh, that must be him now. Excuse me. (Leave the room to answer the door)
Teresa: I hope it's the cops. Someone needs to get rid of Tiffany.
Ojo: Shut up, Teresa!
Teresa: What? She's annoying me.
Tiffany: I'm not doing anything to you.
Ojo: Teresa, I'm gonna smack you if you don't shut your pie hole and behave.
Teresa: What am I? Three years old?
Ojo: Yes. (Elbows Teresa's stomach)
Teresa: Oww, bleep!
Abbie: That's what you get for acting like that.
Teresa: Said the knocked up 17-year-old.
Abbie: Hey, it's not my fault I'm pregnant! I didn't ask that jerk to knock me up! I even told him no, but he didn't listen to me!
Ojo: (Slaps Teresa across the face) Teresa Allie, I got duct tape in my purse. If you don't shut up, I'm putting some over your mouth.
Teresa: Okay!
Jane returns.
Jane: Tiffy-Poo, I have a little surprise for you.
Tiffany: What is it?
Jane: Come into the kitchen.
Tiffany: Okay. (Follows Jane into the kitchen) Where's the surprise? (Looks around and sees a blond boy, standing next to the refrigerator) Nicolaj? Oh, my gosh! Is it really you?!
Nicolaj: It's me.
Tiffany: (Squealing excitedly) Oh, my god! (Runs to Nicolaj and throws her arms around him) I can't believe this! (Cries hysterical tears of joy) Oh, my god! It's you!
Nicolaj: Awww. (Holds onto Tiffany) I'm so happy to see you.
Tiffany: (Still crying) God, me, too.
Jane: I knew you'd be happy!
Tiffany: Thank you, Jane! Thank you so much!
Jane: Awww, you're welcome, Sweetie, but this wasn't my doing.
Tiffany: What do you mean?
Jane: Madison and Ojo flew Nicolaj in from Denmark.
Tiffany: (To Nicolaj) Let's go to the living room.
Nicolaj follows her into the living room with Jane behind.
Tiffany: Ojo? Madison?
Ojo and Madison look at Tiffany.
Tiffany: Thank you so much.
Madison: Awww, Sweetie, you're welcome. (Gets up and hugs Tiffany) Honey, look, I know how much Nico means to you, so Ojo and I teamed up and flew him from Denmark.
Tiffany: How long will he be staying?
Madison: He'll decide on whether or not he wants to live here.
Tiffany: Oh, my gosh!
Nicolaj: I think I'll like it here a lot better than home.
Ojo: Aww, Nico. (Hugs him)
Madison: Oh, and more good news for you, Tiffany. Nico's staying with us.
Tiffany: (Squealing) Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

To be continued...

Nicolaj - Story of an Angel - Chapter 3

A week later, the girls are in the master bathroom, getting ready for a party their friend, Jane, is throwing.
Madison is in a silky, black dress, matching high heals, makeup, and her hair curled.
Ojo: (Looks at Madison) Oh, Madi, Honey, you look beautiful!
Madison: Aww, thank you, Sweetie.
Tiffany walks in, wearing a white dress with pink, yellow, and red flowers all over it and white, dressy sandals.
Ojo: Hey, girl. Lemme help you with your hair and makeup.
Tiffany: Okay.
Ojo: (While rubbing makeup on Tiffany's face) That dress is so pretty on you, Honey. Jane's gonna wanna eat you right up.
Tiffany: (Snickers) She's like that.
Ojo: Yeah, she's a sweetheart.
Tiffany: She's like Nicolaj.
Ojo: Come to think of it, yes, she is. (Finishes off the makeup and puts the makeup materials down) Now, let's do your hair.
Tiffany: Can you do it like Joanna Garcia's hair?
Ojo: I sure can. (Starts on Tiffany's hair)
Tiffany: I love her hair.
Ojo: Yeah, she's a gorgeous lady, isn't she?
Teresa walks in, glaring at Tiffany.
Teresa: You can never pull off Joanna Garcia's look. She's too pretty, and you're ugly.
Ojo: Have you looked in the mirror yet? 'Cuz, when I look at you, I can't see anything but crap. Now, get out. I'm trying to do her hair, and you're making it hard to focus.
Teresa: Fine. Jeez. (Storms out)
Ojo: As far as I'm concerned, she can drink out of the toilet, barf, and lick it up.
Tiffany and Madison: (Laugh)
Tiffany: I usually find that gross, but if Teresa did it, it would be hilarious.
Ojo: Yeah, it would. Maybe it'd teach her a lesson.
Madison: I just hope she doesn't embarrass us at Jane's party.
Ojo: Don't worry, Honey. I'll duck tape her mouth shut if I have to.
Madison: Good.
Tiffany: So, who's gonna be there?
Ojo: The whole gang. Jane, her husband, and her kids, Gabriella, her husband, and kids, Susan, her husband, and her son, Candy, Sunny, and Abbie, too.
Tiffany: How is Abbie?
Ojo: Jane tells me she's likely to go into labor pretty soon. She's due in about three or four weeks.
Madison: How did she get pregnant?
Ojo: Her stupid boyfriend moved in on her before she was ready.
Madison: Aww, poor girl!
Ojo: That's why she dumped him. What kind of bastard would try to get a 17-year-old girl pregnant before she's ready?
Tiffany: What a loser.
Ojo: Yeah, I know.
Madison: Well, if I know Abbie, she'll be a great mother.
Ojo: I know. Well, Tiffy, I'm done with your hair. Look in the mirror. You look great!
Tiffany: (Looks in the mirror) Wow! Thanks, Ojo!
Ojo: Aww, you're welcome, girl.
After the girls are ready, Ojo and Madison are out in the hall, whispering.
Ojo: You didn't tell Tiffany, right?
Madison: No, don't worry.
Ojo: Wow, she's gonna be surprised.
Madison: I know! It'll be the surprise of her life!
Teresa cuts in.
Teresa: What are you guys whispering about?
Ojo: None of your business.
Teresa: Why? I'm your sister!
Madison: It's a surprise for Tiffany.
Teresa: Why won't you tell me?
Ojo: (Sarcastically) Oh, I don't know. Maybe it's because you have a big mouth? Or, could it be that you'll make fun of Tiffany? Oh, wait. It's both, so butt out!
Teresa: (Shouting) You both suck!
Ojo: (Annoyed) Go get in the car.
Teresa: Okay. (Leaves)
Ojo: (Softly) Slut.
Teresa: (From the garage) I heard that!
Madison: (Calling to Tiffany) Tiffy-Babe! Are you ready?!
Tiffany: (Answering from the bathroom) I am now! (Comes out)
Madison: Awww, you look so cute.
Tiffany: Thanks.
Ojo: Okay, let's go, girls.
The three leave the house.

To be continued...

Nicolaj - Story of an Angel - Chapter 2

After breakfast, Tiffany goes online to talk to Nicolaj.
Nicolaj online: So, how's you're morning going?
Tiffany online: I have a really bad headache. Teresa came in my room and screamed at the top of her lungs just to get me out of bed. Then, at breakfast, she wouldn't quit putting me down.
Nicolaj online: Awww, I'm sorry.
Tiffany online: She's been treating me like this for the last twelve years. She's such a bleep.
Nicolaj online: Awww, I wish I could be there with you. I'd kick her ass for you.
Tiffany online: Thanks, Nico. (Sighs) Well, on the bright side, I had another dream about you.
Nicolaj online: Awww. What happened in it?
Tiffany online: You hugged me and called me "Sweetie."
Nicolaj online: Awwww!
Tiffany online: I love it when you say that.
Nicolaj online: (Laughs)
Tiffany online: I wish that hug wasn't just a dream, though. I wish it was real.
Nicolaj online: Yeah. Me, too.
Tiffany online: I can't stop thinking about you.
Nicolaj online: Awww.
Tiffany online: I love you so much.
Nicolaj online: I love you more.
Tiffany online: (Blushes) You're making me feel so good about myself. I feel like I can tell you everything in my life.
Nicolaj online: You can tell me anything.
Tiffany online: You know some of my most embarrassing secrets, but you don't care about them. You think they're cute. I've never met a guy that can put up with me the way you can and think all my flaws are cute. You have no idea how much that means to me.
Nicolaj online: You have no idea how much I'm blushing.
Tiffany online: You think you're blushing like nuts? I'm on fire over here!
Nicolaj online: (Laughs) You probably look beautiful when you blush.
Tiffany online: You probably look sexy when you blush.
Nicolaj online: No, I don't.
Tiffany online: Oh, come on. You're so hot! I've had your picture on my screen saver for two years now.
Nicolaj online: Awwwww!!!
Tiffany online: Did you know I always imagine you here with me, holding me and treating me like your baby?
Nicolaj online: No, I didn't.
Tiffany online: Sometimes, I can feel you touching me. Like, I feel your hands, gently rubbing against my arms, or I feel you put your arms around me. Sometimes, I feel tingling in my face as if we just kissed. It's kinda like you're spirit's here.
Nicolaj online: It is. I'm always there.
Tiffany online: Yeah, you are. Maybe I can't see you, but I can definitely feel you.
Nicolaj online: Maybe someday, you'll actually see me.
Tiffany online: God, I hope so.
Nicolaj online: I love you.
Tiffany online: I love you, too.

To be continued...

Nicolaj - Story of an Angel - Chapter 1

It all starts out at 8:30 in the morning when Tiffany is still asleep. Teresa comes in to wake her up.
Teresa: (Gently taps Tiffany) Tiffany? Wake up.
Tiffany doesn't move.
Teresa: Tiffany, it's time to get out of bed.
Tiffany: (Growns)
Teresa: (Screaming) WAKE UP!!!
Tiffany: (Shrieks) What the hell?! (Looks at Teresa angrily) Teresa, what the hell is wrong with you?!
Teresa: Breakfast, you idiot!
Tiffany: Gee, what's for breakfast?! A splitting headache?! If so, I'm already having breakfast!
Teresa: Good! Now, get up!
Tiffany rubs her head and gets out of bed.
Five minutes later, Tiffany enters the kitchen, still rubbing her head. She joins the other girls for breakfast.
Ojo: (Sweetly) Hey, Honey. Are you okay?
Tiffany: (Groaning) Teresa gave me a headache.
Ojo: (Gives Teresa a dirty look) Teresa, what is wrong with you?
Teresa: She wouldn't wake up.
Ojo: That doesn't give you the right to scream in her ears.
Teresa: I'm 26 years old. I can do whatever the hell I want.
Ojo: Bleep.
Madison: So, Tiffany, did you sleep well? I mean, before Teresa blew up.
Tiffany: (Smiles and leans head back) Yeah.
Madison: Did you have another dream about Nicolaj?
Tiffany: Yeah.
Ojo: Aww, what happened in the dream?
Tiffany: He hugged me and called me "Sweetie."
Ojo and Madison: Awwww!!!
Teresa: Ewww! He called you something nice?
Tiffany: What's wrong with that?
Teresa: Nicolaj liking you is weird.
Tiffany: Because?
Teresa: You're a pathetic cry-baby with love handles, zits, and bad gas.
Ojo: Teresa, some of us are trying to eat.
Tiffany: Teresa, why do you always have to put me down?
Teresa: It's my job.
Ojo: Well, you're fired.
Teresa: I'm rehiring myself.
Ojo: You know what? If you're gonna be rude, go eat in the bathroom, over the toilet, and leave us alone.
Teresa: Fine. (Leaves the table)
Ojo: I'm so sorry about Teresa.
Madison: So, you got a hug from Nico, huh?
Tiffany: Yeah. I just wish it was in real life, not just a fantasy. (Sighs) God, I really love him.
Madison: Aww, Sweetie. (Hugs Tiffany) I'm sure it'll happen one day. I know how much you love him. I can't blame you. He's such a great guy, and I think he's everything every girl should have.
Tiffany: He's definitely everything I want.

To be continued...

Nicolaj - Story of an Angel (Summary)

Plot

Taking place in the summer of 2010, 23-year-old Tiffany shares an online relationship with 18-year-old Nicolaj. She dreams of someday meeting him. One of her close friends, Jane, is throwing a party at her house, and Ojo and Madi have arranged a special surprise for Tiffany. Tiffany's surprise happens to be a visit from Nicolaj. Madison and Ojo have flown him in from Europe to be with her. Although Tiffany is very happy with Nicolaj, she is tired of Teresa constantly putting her down and trying to break up the relationship she has with Nicolaj. Teresa has been mistreating Tiffany for twelve years straight, and Tiffany finally breaks down and tells her exactly how she's feeling. One day, Tiffany and the rest of the girls receive a phone call from the police, informing them that Nicolaj is in the hospital with a severe injury. Everyone is scared for him, but they know he can survive anything.

Subplot

Abbie is pregnant at 17. She was in a relationship with a guy that moved in on her before she was ready, even after she said no. However, her family believes in her and knows she'll be a great mother.

Main Characters

Tiffany: A shy, 23-year-old dreamer, hoping her dream comes true soon.
Madison: A sweet and soft-spoken 26-year-old who is always there for her friends.
Ojo: One of Madison's identical triplet sisters who is very kind. She's not always as gentle as Madison, but she only uses her powers to defend the ones she loves.
Teresa: Madison's other identical triplet sister. She is a stuck-up snob with a very nasty attitude and doesn't care about other's feelings. She constantly puts Tiffany down about everything in her life. She gets on several people's nerves.
Jane: 30 years old and one of the sweetest women in the world. She loves every living creature under the sun, even Teresa. She believes there is good in everyone. Jane is married with three children, including 6-year-old Lyda, 4-year-old Matthew, and 18-month-old Cheyenne.
Abbie: A 17-year-old, soon-to-be 18-year-old, girl who is about to give birth to a healthy baby and become a mother. She is very kind but can be sassy when necessary. Abbie is Jane's youngest sister.
Gabriella: A 20-year-old married woman with two children, a 19-month-old son and a new-born daughter. Gabriella is also Jane's sister.
Susan: Jane's almost-identical twin sister, minus the hair color. Susan is very bubbly and kind. She is a married woman with an almost-2-year-old son.
Candy: A 32-year-old full of sugar. Candy is a lot like Jane in many ways. She is loving and kind to everyone and loves every creature under the sun. She's full of smiles, kisses, candy, and love for everyone. She is very close to Tiffany and has known her since she was a baby.
Sunshine: 26 years old. Sunshine goes by Sunny. She is a sweet, southern bell. Her name says it all. She is full of life and sunshine.
Nicolaj: 18 years old and the love of Tiffany's life. Nicolaj is probably the purest and sweetest young man under the sun and is willing to give love to anyone who needs it. In Tiffany's eyes, he's an angel and a survivor.

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Hey guys. Lol! As you can probably tell from my whacky username here, this used to be a profile created to write about my love life. Well, I decided to change the idea for the profile. I'm gonna use this profile to post the stories and everything I've written.

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