If you actually open this thread then thank you :)
Basically I'm an 18 year old guy, I have Asperger's Syndrome, Tourettes, OCD, and a bunch of other social defects, I wrote this poem at 3:35am this morning and was just wondering if any poetry lovers out there would mind giving it a quick look over? If you could then I'd really appreciate it, as I'm thinking of taking this up as a hobby (unemployed due being almost being scared of leaving my house) and I need something to do with my time:
The beauty of love is a treasure, yet to be gifted to me
However it does not mean that my life, is without happiness and glee
It seems I will have to sit back, and wait for it to appear
For if I am to be blessed, may it be to one I hold dear
You should not go seeking for love, it is destined to come to you
But if I am to be struck, I hope for my heart it is true
I don't envy those who possess it, but I long to hear someone say
Those three magical words, that willcertainly brighten my day
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