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Supernatural Hope Part 6

Okay, first, thank you for reading, I know I keep saying it, buut I can't say it enough. Now, here is the last part of the previous Act that wouldn't fit, and the resolution. I hope you like, and I know this is no where near where they are going to go with the episode tonight, but like it says in the blog title, this is my hope, and it ends hopeful.

PLEASE READ FROM THE BEGINNING IF YOU ARE JUST COMING IN, HERE ARE LINKS TO THE OTHER PARTS:

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

 

PART 6

ACT 4

(From behind the YED, we hear a voice)

John: (Calm and Evenly) Stop right there you son of a bi+ch, let my son go. (The camera pans out, and we see that John, Bobby and Dean have surrounded the YED, then we see through the window that the town is a blaze, and bodies of the "gifted" children are strewn all over the ground) I am not asking.

YED: Well, John, looks like you aren't as dumb as you look either.

Dean: PUT HIM DOWN DAMMIT!!!

Bobby: Dean…

(The YED narrows his eyes, and Sam yells from pain)

YED: You want him back in one piece, you back off, and tell your other son to settle down.

John: Look, you are outnumbered here, all your precious "children" have been taken care of, and you are on your own, once again. Yeah, we even got that dirty Trickster, see, there is a perk to mortality, and being human, those you love tend to be loyal, and your family will always be there for you, no matter what. Now, I was never one for the Saturday morning family movie, but Demons are alone, you fight alone, you die alone, and any alliances you make along the way are never strong enough to stand the test of love, because you are not capable of love. Now, my boys and I are gonna leave here, together, and you are not going to come after us ever again.

YED: (Still cocky, not looking to worried, because none of the new arrivals has noticed the Colt case, even though Sam, through his pain, is trying to signal to Dean) Did you forget who has your son, pinned against a wall, draining blood? Because the way I see it, I may be alone, but your weakness is that you care, you cared enough to die for the Golden Boy over there, and he couldn't even keep Sammy here safe, (Chokes Sam again just to make his point, Sam winces, but is growing weaker) great choice you made there. (Dean looks defeated) See, I may be alone, but all I have to look out for is me, you humans are so worried about each other that you are one big tangled mess, barely able to discern one from another.

Bobby: Well, you know they have that saying "strength in numbers" for a reason, and it seems to me you are outnumbered.

YED: Yeah well, I can at least take one of you out while I have the chance. (He starts to squeeze more blood out of Sam, and John shoots at him, but he turns in time, and the buckshot hits an invisible wall that is protecting the YED, and rolls across the floor, the YED starts a sinister laugh) I warned you not to mess with me when I brought you back John, I am better, stronger, you think I would start this kind of war if I wasn't? (The fight starts, the YED squeezes more blood from Sam, who is looking barely alive, John and Bobby starts shooting, and Dean takes out the journal and starts chanting, but nothing is working)

Dean: (Yells over the firing) I gotta try Dad!

John: No Dean! The shield will kill you, we talked about this!

Dean: He's right, I couldn't keep Sammy safe, but I can make it right. (He throws down the journal , and gun, cracks his neck, looks straight ahead and starts to make a move towards the shield surrounding the YED)

John: NOOOOOO! (Dean ignores him and launches himself at the shield, out of nowhere, a big crack shocks the room, and bright white light fills the house, the camera angle changes to outside the house, and we see the bright light bursting at the seams of the house, we hear a single shot fired, as the light fades, we can hear the crackle of the fire burning down the town.)

FADE TO BLACK

RESOLUTION

(Camera pans up to the house where all is silent, the light is now shining again, we hear from inside)

John: (Softly) Oh my God.

Dean: Oh, no, it can't be.

(The camera races up the window again, into the house, and up to a figure all in white, the light now almost faded, but still to brilliant to see the face, the figure turns around and looks directly into the camera, and smiles)

Sam: (Slumped against the wall, the figure bends down and touches his face, he looks up) Mom?

Dean: Mom, is that really you.

John: Mary?

Mary: Yeah, boys, my boys, it's me.

Dean: But, how…..why….(Mary kisses Sam on the forehead, and gets up and turns to Dean)

Mary: Shhh, the demon won't be back, ever, he was trying to re-write the future, and that is not looked kindly on from where I came from, so, I asked if I could be the one to lend a hand. I did have to do a little persuading, but, it didn't take much, they could see the love in my eyes.

John: Mary, I can't believe it.

Mary: (Finally turns to her husband) Oh, John, how I have missed you. I am so sorry for all that you have gone through, but it wasn't just the demons plan for you to come back to our boys, you were taken, before your time, and now, that is corrected.

Dean: But…where is the demon?

Sam: (Realizing what happened) The Colt…

Mary: That's right Sammy, the Colt, you were trying so hard to signal them, and it was just time for me to step in, one more second and I would have lost you both. They gave me enough power to use that gun and I just couldn't let him take all of my favorite men, and you have a lot of work yet to do, one shot is all I needed, and that is what I was granted. (Turns to Dean) I don't ever want you to doubt your dedication to your family again, you don't have to worry about that demon anymore, but if any other demon ever tries to convince you that you are an unfit brother, you just remember what you did here today, you tried to give up your life for your brother, (Dean's eyes start to well up) you have so much of your father in you, I am so proud of you Dean, don't ever doubt yourself honey, you have more heart than you let show, and you love more than most people do their whole lives. (She turns to Sam) And you, mister, try to listen to your brother once in a while (Dean smirks) he always has your best interest at heart, and he is just being your big brother, but don't let him bully you either (Now Sam chuckles) Also, don't be afraid to be yourself. You didn't get to know me very well, but you have more of me in you than you know. Don't be afraid to care the way that you do, your sympathy and kindness are such wonderful gifts, don't waste them because you are afraid of getting hurt. (Finally turning to John) John, the love of my life, I wish that we had more time together. You are the best person that I have ever met, and these boys are better people because they had you in their lives. I would have given anything to be there to help you raise them, but I couldn't have asked for a better father to raise my kids alone. All they have good in them, you taught, don't ever forget that. I love you all so much, but I have to go, be good to each other, this family is all you can count on. (They all come in for one last hug, she hugs each in turn, and Sam heals a bit after she has hugged him, she winks at him, and hugs Dean, turns to John with tears in her eyes, and hugs him, then kisses him as she fades away, they continue to stand there in awe)

Bobby: (Noticing that Sam is still in bad shape) Umm…I think we ought to get Sam to a hospital.

Dean: (Snaps out of it first) Right, Sammy, glad to have you back buddy, don't ever pull that dying crap again man, you scared the hell outs me. (Smiles at Sammy, who smiles back)

Sam: Yeah, well, I am not the one who fell for an illusion Dean, I mean come on. (They start to gather their stuff and walk out, John grabs the gun, and the case, but the last bullet is spent, Bobby, Dean and Sam look at him with questioning eyes)

John: What?! Just in case, you never know. (They all turn to walk out now, and at the door, Dean pulls out his lighter, and sets a piece of the dry wood that splintered in all of the fighting on fire, and tosses it into the room, and the floor and wall it lands by immediately catches fire, now, Bobby, Sam and John look at Dean skeptically)

Dean: Hey, like you said, you never know.

(They start to make their way towards the gate of "Ghost Town" that is still burning down all around them, Sam is being held up between John and Bobby, and Dean is limping to the side of John)

Sam: You know Dean, at the rate it took you to come help me, I mean, I am surprised that we ever get a job done.

Dean: Oh, you know what Sammy, if you could just stop getting abducted and being held hostage, maybe I wouldn't have to come bail your ass out all the time.

Sam: Oh, all the time, huh? Really? I don't think so.

Dean: Ah, you are such a drama queen, you know that, you should have majored in musical theatre instead of law.

Sam: Yeah, well at least I didn't hook up with a chick that looked like a dude because my beer goggles were so thick I didn't see her Adam's Apple.

Dean: You know, Candy was a great girl…

Sam: Yeah I'm sure, did you trade face shaving tips?

Dean: Now, you're just pushing it (They look at each other, and wide smiles spread across their faces as the walk through the gates and the camera pans up over the city burning to the ground)

John: (Smiling with Dean and Sam) Now boys, don't make me have to put you in a time-out.

Sam: Do you even know what that is? (Camera continues to pan out)

John: I know what it is, and maybe I will start dishing them out, if you want to keep getting smart with me.

Dean: Oh, like that is even possible, I mean, I don't think he can get smart with you Dad.

Sam: Who went to college Dean?

Dean: (Mocking) "Who went to college, who went to college", when are you going to get a new line Sammy?

Sam: When that one stops being true….

(We still hear this bickering as they disappear around the corner toward the Impala)

Now, I have two versions of the last part, so let me know if you want me to post it, the resolution is pretty much the sam, but the last part od Act 4 is different. Now, I won't be back til 7pm, so (since I won't actually have time to watch the finale tonight, being as that I haven't seen last week yet, I will post tonight if you want, but if this ening is satisfying for you (I picked the one I liked better) I will leave you with this as the end! Thanks again for reading!

Supernatural Hope Part 5

I'm on the way out the door, so here is Part 5, pleae read the previous in order if you are a newcomer so that you understand what is going on, and what this is about...

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

 

 

PART 5
ACT 4

(John and Dean almost run smack into Bobby in the forest headed back to the Impala, being that they don't see each other, they all draw their guns, Bobby has the shotgun, as does Dean, and John has Dean's pistol. They all look around, and sigh with relief)

Bobby: Damn, John, it's good to see you.

John: Right now, I'd say that's its damn good to see just about anyone Bobby.

Dean: Hold on! You don't seem surprised, Bobby, (Points his shotgun at Bobby again) how do we know its really you? Huh? You see, my Dad, who died months back, and you don't even blink, now, you tell me, who the hell are you. (John, suddenly wary now that Dean mentions it)

Bobby: Ah, Christ, really? Man, we don't have time for this, (John and Dean cock their guns at the same time) Woah, okay, who gave you the protection pouches to ward of possession Dean? And John, you really want me to dredge up memories of a certain night out in Louisana when we were hunting that banshee? (Both men visibly relax)

John: Damn, Bobby, it is good to see you.

Bobby: I just want to know how I am seeing you, I mean, I knew they brought you back, but he wasn't to clear on the details, you know, buckshot in the stomach may have had something to do with…

Dean: Wait, wait, wait, you knew they brought Dad back, great, and when were you gonna tell me?

Bobby: Now, where do you think I am going, you think I want to go back to that town by myself, I was trying to catch up to you, oh my god, where's Sam? I thought you went to get him.

Dean: I did, but I got Dad, and we figured, from what he has heard, and what we found out in these last few days, that we need more firepower to go in there.

Bobby: (Shocked) Dean, you left Sam in there again?

John: Look, Bobby, it was my idea, I heard some of what they are planning, and….wait, how did you know they brought me back?

Bobby: The Trickster.

(Dean looks shocked and his jaw drops)

John: What? Tricksters don't run with these kind of demons.

Bobby: Yeah, well, not unless you royally piss one off, and that is exactly what me and your boys did a few weeks ago.

Dean: No, that's not possible, we killed him, he's gone, it has to be another.

Bobby: You stabbed him with a knife that had the blood of one of his victims on it right?

Dean: Aw man, you left that part out!

Bobby: Yeah, well, I'm old, okay, give me a break, but it all came back to me when I saw the seat was empty- (Suddenly hits him that he hasn't told Dean or John about Sam) Dean, Sam's not dead.

(Dean and John both snap to attention with looks of shock and disbelief on their faces)

Dean: Bobby, that's not….I can't…

Bobby: Look, to make a long story short, in the interest of time, the Trickster, who is no longer a threat by the way, go royally pissed when we put a stop to his little games over at the college, and came looking for the Demon to help in any way he could, and that thing that died, it was just another illusion conjured up by the Trickster on orders from the Demon.

Dean: (Lets it sink in, but is still full of doubt) No, I saw him die, he bled, I held him, and there was no heart beat, he died right there on the ground, I can still see it, it was real, it wasn't a trick, I felt it, there was no heartbeat, Sammy's heart, it stopped beating.

Bobby: No, you didn't feel a heart because those illusions that the Trickster conjures don't have a heartbeat, so the plan they had worked more effectively, because you didn't have to wonder why a live Sam wouldn't have a heartbeat. Now, I know that this is a lot to take in, but I need you two to snap out of it, because we have to go and load up, and head back NOW, and I mean right now, for Sam, because once they find out that the Trickster is dead, and that he double-crossed them, they are gonna come after us, and the best way to do that, especially if they still have Sam, is to finish off the reason that we would come back.

John: Bobby's right, we have to go, right now, the only thing we have on them is that they think we are oblivious to all this, I will fill you in on the details of what I learned on the way Bobby, let's go Dean.

Dean: Okay, let's move though, I lost Sam once, and I am not going to make that mistake again, they are messing with the wrong family.

John: You can say that again.

(They all turn and run back to the Impala, flash to the house that the YED is holding Sam in, up to the window like before, only this time, the camera pans over to the mantle over the fireplace, where the colt case is resting. Sam is unconscious on the ground, and the YED is smiling again)

YED: Sammy, oooohhhh Sammy. (Turns around, and raises his hand contorting Sam and waking him up at the same time) Ahh, there we go, (Drops his hand, and Sam falls in a heap) Well, I was right again, your brother took one look at dear old Daddy and Dean was fleeing off into the sunset, it was very touching, they were almost skipping off into the sunset together. He must have been so happy that he forgot all about his little baby brother, but hey, then again, he was only coming back for a corpse. Maybe your corpse lost importance in the face of losing his father again. Lets face facts Sammy, your Dad and your brother have a special bond from all of those years hunting without you. They are gonna do what you should have, what Dean wanted to, they are going to leave. Leave this life behind, leave this fight behind, now that they have their family back, and they still think that you are dead, so the reunion has begun, and soon, they are going to be partying and reminiscing about you, unfortunately, they won't be with you.

Sam: (Deflated) They're gone?

YED: Yeah, they're gone, and you're alone, once again. I told you Sammy, I have learned a lot since the last time we tangled.

Sam: (Angry, and in pain from the torture) DON'T call me Sammy.

YED: Ah, now Sammy, anger is not a good shade on you.

Sam: You know what, I am done, if they left, fine, as long as you can't get to them, I am fine with that, just do it already. If you are going to kill me, just do it, because if you slip for one minute, I am out of here, and when that happens-

YED: Ah ah ah, don't make with the empty threats.

Sam: You think I didn't notice the Colt? I am not dumb either, and just wait, you'll slip, you all do, and that is when am going to get out of this little circle, see, all of those years that my father and brother were hunting, I was studying, learning all about what they were doing. And I am a fast learner, faster than you counted on. (With this, he marks a strike through the smallest symbol in the circle with the blood that is dripping from his various wounds, and there is a shock wave that permeates out from the circle breaking the bond that the demon put in place, the YED freezes for a second amazed that Sam was able to break the circle, long enough for Sam to swing one of the broken pieces of chair up, and smack the YED in the side of the head, but it is not hard enough in his weakened state to do any real damage, the YED throws up his hand, and Sam lifts off the ground, and gets pinned against the wall)

YED: (Angry, and bleeding from his temple, says very pointedly) Now look, I was trying to be…cordial to you in hopes that you would come to your senses, and live up to your potential, but if you are going to be more of a hassle than you are worth, I can end this now…(He walks toward Sam, and blood starts to come out of his nose)

FADE TO BLACK

Okay, all that is left is the last part of this, and resolution, hope you guys like!! I will put up when I get back!

Thanks again!!

Supernatural Hope Part 4

Alright, sorry, I got busy with the RL, it sucks don't it, well, I am gonna post the last parts all today, before the finale, so that I know that I was not influenced by the actual screenwriters, :lol: you know, the people that know what they are doing. Okay, here we go, pretty much just story from now on, I don't have time to go find pics, sorry. I hope you like, and thank you all so mucgh for reading, it has made my fears of trying this just disappear, thanks again so much for the encouragement, and I hope you are not disappointed...

PLEASE READ IN ORDER, HERE ARE THE LINKS TO THE PREVIOUS, SO YOU KNOW WHAT HAS HAPPENED, AND WHY THIS IS EVEN HERE:

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

 

PART 4 

(Scene shifts back to where we left off with Dean and John, there is only a slight drizzle now. They are standing closer now, but Dean still has his rifle trained on John and still looks like death warmed over, emotionally and physically drained now, he is loosing it fast, John looks upset, but calm)

Dean: (His voice cracks a little) You still haven't proved you are my father. I am taking no chances with you people anymore, I can't handle anymore of this…..I….

John: Dean, what do you want to know, ask me anything, I am your father.

Dean: You can't be, we torched your body, how are you even here, you are a pile of ashes.

John: Well, that is a long story; do you really want to get into it now, especially if we have to go save Sam?

Dean: (Realizing that John doesn't know that Dean has come for Sam's corpse, and that Dean still believes that the "other Sam" was the real Sam, so he deflects the question, still in disbelief) You can't be here…..you can't be him…..

John: (Frustrated) Alright, this is getting ridiculous, Dean. You want to know where I have been, I have been in hell, and not figuratively, literally, you want to know the last thing that I said to you, I told you that you had to save Sam, and nothing else mattered. And that if you couldn't – you would have to kill Sam, you might have to kill Sammy, that is what I said to you, what else, huh? You want blood samples, DNA, we don't have time for this Dean, we have to go and save Sammy from these sadistic freaks.

Dean: (Lets his gun fall to his side, and grabs John in a hug) Dad, it's really you.

John: I told you it was me, son. Now, let's go, they brought me here in an iron box, so I couldn't see out, but I have a pretty good lay of the land since they let me go….(He starts to turn and go to rescue Sam, but Dean just stands there, the gun almost falling out of his fingertips, John looks back) Come on Dean, we can do the whole reunion thing later……Dean?

Dean: There is no one to save, Dad….I……I let you down, I let Sammy down, I was right there….

John: (suddenly looks a little apprehensive) What are you talking about?

Dean: (Upset and stoic at the same time) I saw him go down…I saw him get stabbed…in the back…must have hit something…a nerve or an artery…I don't know….but his heart stopped beating….right there in my arms….it just stopped.

John: Who Dean?

Dean: (Looks John in the face) Sammy, Dad, he's…..dead.

John: No, you are delirious, you just said that you were here to save him, he can't be dead, we still have time…

Dean: No, Dad, I said I was here to get him, to get his body, these….I don't know what happened, he was in the Impala, and then he was gone, vanished into thin air…..just disappeared…..(Looses it again) AND I WANT HIM BACK, GIVE HIM BACK, OR I WILL SHOW YOU "GIFTED"!!

(John stands in shock as Dean continues to yell)

FADE TO BLACK

(The camera pans in on a blade of a knife, and a grease cloth wiping off dark blood, follow the blade into the holster on the side, now the camera goes down to the shotgun propped against a tree, and pans out to reveal Bobby, picking up the gun, aiming it at the Trickster. The ropes are still in place, but are soaked with blood, and his head is hanging heavily on his shoulders.)

Bobby: So, that's it, that is everything you know?

Trickster: (Weakly) Yes, I already told you, yes, that is all they told me, that is all I am allowed to know, I even tried to find out more with my powers but that demon blocked them all.

Bobby: You better not be lying to me, I will find out if you are…

Trickster: I am a creature of fortune, alright, I go where the opportunity is, and the opportunity to stay alive, even if I have to reveal the demon's plan to you, is looking pretty good right about now.

Bobby: (He smiles out of the corner of his mouth, and scoffs) Who said you get to live? (The Trickster looks up suddenly, shock and horror in his eyes) I never said that I would spare you, all I said is that you had better start talking, your assumption is not my problem. I realize why we didn't kill you before, and it wasn't the illusion. We were lacking the one ingredient, which, since I was duped, I qualify for. (Bobby takes out the knife that we saw earlier, and runs it along his forearm to draw blood, the Trickster watches in horror as Bobby starts to approach him)

Trickster: WAIT, no, look, I can help you, I can go and be your ears and eyes on the inside. I have use, I can be useful to you.

Bobby: (Still approaching) See, that is where you are wrong, if you are right, and they brought John back and still have the Colt, I don't need you, you have outlived your use, all three of the Winchester men is enough backup for me.

Trickster: But I can help you find the Colt, I can get it, and bring it to you….come on, please, I will help…

Bobby: (Stops, then smiles, and starts towards the Trickster again) Are you kidding me, you think that I am that stupid, let you go back and tell your boss that I am coming and I know about Sam and that I am going to go find Dean and John and bring them to get Sam back? No, sorry, we will manage without having to worry about your backstabbing and manipulations, we will find the Colt, because I don't know what that demon is keeping it for, but I do know, that he won't let it out of his sight for long. Oh, no, you have no more use to me.

(The camera closes in on the Tricksters horrified face, and we hear the knife go in, see the life go out of the Tricksters eyes, and slump against the rope, wide angle again, and Bobby is gathering the weapons that he removed, and is on the move again, toward the "Ghost Town" the camera pans straight up, and pans across the ground to the top of John's head, and pivots so that it is directly in front of his face, his eyes are red and staring blankly into the distance up, the camera pans out to Dean, who is standing in front of John)

Dean: Dad…..Dad, I know I screwed up, but we have to get Sammy's body back, I can't handle the thought of what they took it for…..Dad, come on.

John: (Seem to snap out of his trance, but is still stoic) I just wanted you boys to be happy, and live long lives. I just couldn't have you be naïve to what is going on in the world, the demons and the darkness, and the evil.

Dean: (Resolved) It's not your fault, okay, I let you down, I let Sammy down, I should have quit, we should have gone when we had the chance, but Sammy didn't want to, you know that hard head of his, he had to stay, and help, try to fight what they were planning.

John: (Encouraged by Dean's responsible attitude) Look, I'm sorry Dean, I should have done better by you, and Sammy. But we don't have enough time to be out here in the open right now. There are too many of those kids here, I heard them when they thought I was unconscious, and what their planning is like nothing we have planned for. Come on, son, we have to go get ready, get more than just a shotgun and a few boxes of ammo. You don't have any hunter's you can call?

Dean: Oh, damn! Bobby, I just took off when I saw that Sam was gone, he is probably looking for me. Dad, if they are getting ready to start this war, we need him, we have to go and find him. I don't want to waste any time though, we need to get him, get some charms, or spells or something to help us, and we need to come back for Sammy.

John: Did you think I forgot, of course we are comin' back, now, let's go try to catch up with Bobby, and tell him what we know.

(They take off in the direction of the entrance gate to "Ghost Town" and back toward the Impala, hoping to find Bobby. The camera pans in on the YED who is smiling to himself in the window of the same house from earlier)

FADE TO BLACK

END OF ACT 3

Okay, let me know what you think, hopefully, barring a major emergencey, they should go up relatively quickly now.  Thanks again for reading. 

Supernatural Hope (Part 3)

Okay, this was either going to be super long, or kinda the same as the rest, so I compensated with some pics from All Hell Breaks Loose Part 1, and seriously, to the three of you that are reading it, I keep tweaking it, and it is getting longer, so I will try to post as often as I can, but have some work tomorrow (You know the evil photo lab) so I hopefully will be able to get some up here. Anyway, here is the next part, hope you like it, and No, Engel, I have never written fanfic before, this is my first try....thanks for making it such a good experience:

In case you missed, please read in order, or you will be lost (I use swear words, sorry if that offends), and SPOILER PIC WARNING for All Hell Breaks Loose Part 1.

Part 1

Part 2

 

ACT 3

(As Dean comes through the gate that he entered earlier exactly as before, he looks up, where Sam was when he "died" but this time, no Sam, a wave of grief hits him as he has a flash of the earlier scene, that physically knocks him down as he falls to his knees )












(The memory of Sam's "death" just makes him more angry and resigned, and he sniffs back the tears about to fall, and gives a good shake to let it go, and stares straight ahead as he gets up and starts to yell)

Dean: HEY! COME OUT YOU LITTLE FREAKS!!! WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE WITH MY BROTHER!!! (He waits for a beat, and when nothing happens he starts again) OKAY, FINE, YOU WANNA PLAY HARDBALL? HERE, (Puts his gun down, and turns around in a 360 degree circle) SEE…..I'M UNARMED, ALL I WANT IS SAM BACK, I AM NOT HERE TO HURT YOU…(under his breath) at least until you show yourselves.

(The sky darkens, and thunder rolls, lightning cracks, and the rain starts. Dean continues to turn in a circle, looking in every direction for any sign of life, or demon, as he turns and the rain pours harder...)

  

(a dark figure is walking toward him with some difficulty, Dean sees, and immediately picks up the shotgun and aims at the figure moving at him)

Dean: STOP! Bring Sam, or I will kill you, and all of your little friends too…..and uh, not in the "Wicked Witch" kind of way.

(The camera pans in on the figure's face, and we see that it is John Winchester)

John: (Almost a whisper) Dean…

Dean: (Catches the slight hint of a voice from his father through the rain) Dad? (Shakes it off) Yeah, nice try I am not that stupid, I WILL shoot you, whoever you are. (Even in the rain, you can tell is crying, his eyes are filled with defeat, he looks as though he can't take it anymore, Sammy died, now they are using some sick trick to make him see his dead father)

John: (Keeps coming closer to Dean) Son…

Dean: You are not my father, he is DEAD!!! You or one of your minions killed him!!! I am here to get Sam, just give me my brother back, I know you took him, just give him back, so I can…..I can…..(He can't bring himself to say the rest)

John: (Looks at Dean, suddenly angry) You lost Sammy……to them? Dammit Dean, what did I tell you?!? I gave you one job, one thing to do, and you let these demonic as$holes take your brother?!?!?

Dean: (Looks so confused and hurt, it is almost unbearable) You can't be him, you just…..can't.

John: (Now, standing right in front of the barrel of the gun) Dean, I don't know how I got here, but I do know that I am here, and as far as I can tell, you lost Sam, now explain to me how the hell you did the one thing I told you not to.

FADE TO BLACK

(Bobby is running through the woods, it is still pouring down rain, he is headed back to the "Ghost Town" to try to tell Dean about all of the folklore of Tricksters, and that Sam may still be alive somewhere when the Trickster comes out of nowhere and clotheslines Bobby, right across the neck, his feet fly forward, and he falls flat on his back, knocking the wind out of his lungs)

Trickster: Yeah, you aren't as bad as they made you out to be, are ya? You are kinda old, and tired if you ask me, I mean, I should be back in the mix, back with the big dogs, but no, they put me on you. (As Bobby is gasping for air, the Trickster looks down at him and scoffs) I mean, hardly a challenge, and to think, you call yourself a hunter?

(Bobby suddenly swipes the gun across the ground, and takes the tricksters legs out from under him, and he falls back the same way Bobby did, the air knocked out of him, flat on his back, Bobby scrambles to his feet, and points the barrel of the gun directly at the Tricksters forehead)

Bobby: Yeah, I do call myself a hunter, and a damn good one at that. (He suddenly turns the gun, and slams the butt against the Tricksters head, knocking him out cold, screen flashes black for a second with the blackout of the Trickster)

(Flash to Bobby, standing in front of the trickster who is tied to a tree trunk, wrapped so tight, he is barely getting any air in his lungs. Thick rope is binding almost every inch of him, his hands down by his sides, and his feet spread, his head turned sideways and rope binding across his nose. The only places void of rope are his eyes and his mouth, and his mouth is covered in duct tape)

Bobby: Old and tired my a$s. (He still has the rifle trained on the Trickster) I sure whooped yours though huh? (The trickster starts to try to move, and wiggles a bit, but the effort it takes to move even that much is to painful, and a muffled scream of pain escapes through the tape) Alright, now that I have your attention, where is Sam? Because I know that you pulled an illusion out there, and that the Sam that died was not the real Sam, so I am gonna give you one chance, you wanna tell me what you know and live a little longer, or let me figure it out myself, and die right now. Personally I could care less what you choose, I am out of patience, and I am out of time. I promised John one thing, that I would do whatever I could to keep his boys safe if anything ever happened to him. I plan to live up to that promise, and I had been doing pretty well so far, they didn't always know, but I have been watching, making sure they came out of their hunts in one piece, even if they did get scraped up a little. I didn't count on you though, I should have gone back after the boys left, and made sure that they had finished you off. Now, your little illusion has driven Dean into the lion's den, and I wanna know what you know about it. I want to know everything that you know about this yellow eyed son of a bi+ch and this war that he is planning, and if you don't start talking in about two seconds, I am going to start shooting off body parts, shouldn't kill you, but it will hurt like hell. (Bobby takes off the duct tape) Two……one……(The Trickster starts to scream).

Trickster: DON'T SHOOT, OKAY, I WILL TELL YOU, JUST STOP, I'LL TELL YOU EVERYTHING I KNOW!!!!

Bobby: (Sarcastically) Alright, now who is the hunter? (Resigned) Never mind, get to it, I don't have all day, and be warned, (Glares at the Trickster) I have been known to start shooting if I get to bored, so leave out the bu||shi+ because if I hear anything that does not pertain to Dean, Sam, John, Me or this war, I will start removing your body parts with this shotgun.

(Camera pans out while the Trickster starts to sob, and ramble, keeps panning out, over the trees, we hear a single shot)

Trickster: (In pain, he yells out of desperation) Noooooooo! Alright, ok, I will stop wasting your time….it all started about twenty-five years ago…..

FADE TO BLACK

Couple of cliffhangers there for ya, I know, not very good, I wanted it to be like the episodes, how they flash from one storyline to the other, but hey, it's my first time, so don't be too harsh.....next one comig soon.

Supernatural Hope (Part 2)


Okay, I am going to put this up in sections, because I thought I was done, but I went and re-read and added parts, I guess four comments is better than none, thanks all for the words of encouragement, and OhB, I am so happy you like, cause I WAS worried, this being my first attempt at anything like this. Here we go, hopefully ACT 2 will help you understand where I was going with the whole "Bobby realizes" thing:


Link to Part 1 if you missed it, read first or you will not have a clue about what is going on :P

 

ACT 2

(The camera shot goes to a house in the "Ghost Town", pans up the walkway, and over a window ledge, showing the YED. He is standing at the window, looking out, waiting. We hear a familiar voice)

Sam: He's not stupid. (The camera pans past the YED, and down to the floor, across to a chair, with a jean clad leg tied to it, camera continues up the leg to the torso, and then the face, it is Sam, beaten, but none the less, still alive. His arms and legs are tied to the chair, and there are some symbols painted on the ground around the chair.)

YED: Yeah, well, we'll see about that won't we.

Sam: Dean is a lot smarter than you give him credit for, and he has been doing this a lot longer than I have, he's not going to fall for your parlor tricks, it is just-

YED: (Camera looking through window, as YED puts up his hand toward Sam, and Sam immediately stops mid-sentence, and contorts his face in pain) I don't remember asking for your opinion, either way, I think you give him to much credit, you didn't see the look on his face, when he saw you die. (He turns on Sam and puts his hand down, Sam slumps down in the chair looking as though this is not the first time the YED has tortured him in this way, the YED smirks) You know, you and your brother really pissed that trickster off. They are not normally such a malicious breed, but after you went and ruined his fun, he came looking for me. Heard the buzz from the other side, and wanted in on the plan, said he could help, and he proved to be right, although I told him if he wasn't able to help, I would kill him. The threat of death, even to the supernatural beings you and your brother dispose of so carelessly, seems to be a key motivational tool. That charm of you, and your "death", so real, just like those women that your brother was tempted with when he went after the trickster. And, an added bonus to the trickster's illusion is that the illusion of you, the "other Sam" doesn't have a pulse, so when Dean couldn't feel your pulse, and since he saw that you were stabbed so convincingly, he assumed that the lack of pulse was you...dead. That little snafu that I was worried about, that Dean would realized the "other Sam" didn't have a pulse turned out to be unfounded, and actually worked out better than I could have ever imagined. I thought I would have to just plant the "other Sam" somewhere that Dean would run across it, but him seeing you die, with his own two eyes, standing there helpless to do anything was just priceless, to convincing for even him to deny.

Sam: (His hands have been moving slowly while this rant has progressed, and he is almost free from the binds on his right hand, The YED sees this as he is finishing his speech, and throws his had up again, immediately contorting Sam in pain. When the YED stops, the rope is off of Sam's wrist. Sam looks up at the YED, and says quietly, still weak from the torture) It doesn't matter, that charm the trickster cast has to be fading by now, and then Dean will figure it out, it doesn't matter what you made him watch, or what he saw.

YED: I don't know, he looked pretty distraught, (Taunting Sam) he may not be thinking straight, and that is exactly how I want him, irrational and emotionally drained from the loss of his dear baby brother "Sammy".

Sam: (As Sam slowly moves his free hand over to untie his other bounds, the camera goes to the YED's face, and he turns to the window again, smiling as he looks back out the window, pretending as though he does not see Sam's bid to escape) Your wrong, Dean will come back, and he will find me.

YED: Even if Dean does comes back, I have more in store for him, don't you worry your soon to be dead little head about it. I would kill you now, but you may prove to be a useful bargaining chip, (Glancing over his shoulder watching as Sam undoes the last of his ropes) and I am not as dumb as you think.

(Sam is free from the chair, and gets up quickly to rush the YED, but barely takes a step when he is thrown back, and seems to bounce off of an invisible wall directly behind him, and crashes through the chair that he was tied to, and lands on the ground in a heap, the YED starts a sinister laugh, and turns around to face Sam, who pulls a wooden shard of shattered chair from his side, with a wince)

Sam: (Pained, pulls out another piece) Ahh, oww.

YED: (Still chuckling and looking at Sam with a sinister grin) Do you really think that we wouldn't be prepared for you getting free from those ropes? Tsk, tsk, tsk, I'm surprised at you Sammy, I thought that you were the brains of the operation, don't you recognize those symbols surrounding you? You are not the only one who has picked up some useful tricks in the preparation for this battle.

Sam: (Looks up at the YED with narrowed eyes, even though he is visibly beaten, his eyes are resigned) You better have picked up a whole hell of a lot more tricks than a containment circle for what is coming at you. And don't worry, when Dean figures this out, and I do mean, WHEN, the fight is gonna be more than you and all your (Sneers at the word) "children" can handle, he will stop at nothing, you brought this fight on, but I doubt you have any idea of what Dean is capable of, and no clue what he is gonna bring when he comes to get me.

YED: (Cocky, and dismissive of Sam's threat) Well, if seeing you die right in front of him, is not enough to weaken him, I have set up another little diversion for him with the help of the trickster and those wonderful children who have become so very loyal to me, one diversion that he can't even conceive of, one that is sure to break him….see, when he gets Daddy back, you won't even be a flash in his memory.

(At the word "Daddy" Sam's eyes go wide, and he gets a horrified look on his face, and The YED just looks at Sam, and smiles as he returns to the window and looks out again, the camera pans out fast, across the town, to where Dean is just now making his way back through the entrance to the "Ghost Town")

FADE TO BLACK

I know it is kinda short, but I wanted to seperate into sections, let me know what you think, next one soon to come, check back regularly, cause I am gonna be adding pretty swiftly....I hope :D

My Hope for Supernatural *PLEASE READ*

WARNING: YOU MAY BE SPOILED IF YOU HAVEN'T WATCHED "ALL HELL BREAKS LOOSE (PART 1)"

Okay, I figured I would write down the way that I hope it goes, at least somewhat, because it just can't be true, although I have refrained from watching because I am not so good at cliffhangers, and would rather watch the two parter back to back, like it was meant to be viewed, I got spoiled when I went on the boards to check something (my own fault really) so I am putting my version of what happens next...I also want to post a small disclaimer because I have not actually seen "All Hell Breaks Loose" (Part 1) yet, so I am going off of previous episodes....don't throw things if it is not completely accurate :lol: I have also not watched any trailers for Part 2 yet, so I may be way off here. This is just my pipe dream.....I am also putting it in normal type so that it is easier to read.

WARNING: YOU MAY BE SPOILED IF YOU HAVEN'T WATCHED "ALL HELL BREAKS LOOSE (PART 1)" (I also use two swear words, "hell" and "damn")

OPENING TEASER

The opening scene is of Dean holding on to Sam, cradling him in a hug, so tight that he fears if he lets go, then the truth will really hit him, and Dean is scared of what he may do if Sam is really gone.....there will be nothing left to live for. This is just to much, he just lost John, now Sam is gone, and he was right there....why didn't he move faster, take a shot, maybe it would have scared him off.

Dean: NOOOOO! Sam, hold on,come on, don't do this, (tears are streaming down his face that is contorted in anger, frustration and sadness) come on Sammy, you are stronger than this, fight, come on, do what you have been doing all of your life, fight, DAMMIT!!!

Bobby: I lost him, Dean.

Dean looks up suddenly, startled because he had not even realized that Bobby had come back, then goes back to burying his head in Sam's limp shoulder.

Bobby: Did you hear what I said, I lost him, Dean......DEAN!

Dean: (Sullen, eerily calm, and unable to let Sam go even now, takes a breath and looks straight ahead over Sam's shoulder) It doesn't matter, he doesn't matter, it will all be over soon.

Bobby: What are you talking about Dean, this thing has just started, it is nowhere near over.

Dean: It is for them, for Dad, for me.........(choked up again)...for Sammy.

Bobby: Dean, we have to go, we can't stay here right now, especially the condition you are in, its to vulnerable to be out here in the open like this, come on. (He goes to lift Sam off the ground and Dean holds on to him, Bobby keeps trying, and eventually, Dean gets up with Sam's weight and the guilt of his loss weighing down on Dean's shoulders, Bobby tries to help, but Dean just shrugs off his hands)

END OPENING TEASER

FADE TO BLACK, and show the fiery credits

 

ACT 1

(They have gotten back to the Impala, and Sam is laying in the back seat. Dean is leaning on the hood, and Bobby is alert, looking around, waiting for the retaliation that he fears from the YED and his army of "gifted" children.)

Bobby: I don't think that it is a good idea to stay here Dean, we gotta go, we should go and figure out another way to deal with this, as far as I can tell, they are getting stronger, I know you can feel it too Dean, they are getting too damn strong, the air is electric, there is something coming, the war your father warned you about.

Dean: (With quiet but completely discernible loathing) Screw the damn war.

Bobby: Screw the war? The war that your father was fighting, the war that took your brother, screw that war?

Dean: (Stands up, and turns toward Bobby, getting more angry, his voice rising slightly) This war that my father was fighting, that just took my brother, it is what destroyed everything I loved and everything that I cared about, even before the war, my mother was taken from me, my entire family has died because of this war, so YES, SCREW THE DAMN WAR!

Bobby: (Realizing the state of mind that Dean is in) So, what do you want to do, you know why they are coming, they are not going to settle for your family. They are going to go after every single hunter that you, your father, your brother has ever met, and every single hunter that you have never even thought about. Those demons are going to use those kids as their soldiers, and then, when they serve no furthur purpose, discard them like trash, they are going to destroy the world that you have grown up in, can you honestly stand by and let that happen?

Dean: (At the words "stand by" Dean snaps out of his calm numbness, and starts to seeth with anger, and when Bobby is finished, he explodes) SAM IS DEAD, BOBBY, AND I WAS RIGHT THERE, HELL, YOU WERE RIGHT THERE, HOW COULD WE LET THIS HAPPEN?!?! WHY DIDN'T YOU TAKE THE SHOT, WHY DIDN'T I? I WAS SUPPOSED TO PROTECT HIM, I WAS SUPPOSED TO KEEP HIM SAFE, THIS IS NOT SAFE, DEAD IS NOT SAFE, WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO NOW HUH? HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO DO ANYTHING, THEY WERE MY FAMILY, MY MOM, MY DAD AND NOW MY BABY BROTHER, I CAN'T DO IT!!! I WAS FIGHTING TO KEEP THEM SAFE, FIGHTING SO HARD SO THAT WE COULD BE TOGETHER, AND NOW THEY ARE GONE, AND I AM LEFT HERE ALL ALONE!! HOW IS THAT FAIR, HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO GIVE A DAMN ABOUT THE WORLD THAT IS NOW EMPTY AS FAR AS I AM CONCERNED?!?

Bobby: (Upset a bit, but still realizing they are in too much danger being out in the open like they are) Alright, you know what, we have to go, let's move Dean, we will regroup, and figure out what to do next.

Dean: Who are we gonna regroup with, huh, Bobby? Everyone is dead, (As he says this, he thrusts his hand toward the back seat where he laid Sam, which is now completely empty)

Bobby: Uh...Dean, where is Sam?

Dean: What do you- (turns around and looks into the space where Sam was).....(Bewildered)...what the hell?

(They both rush over to the Impala, and slam the front seats forward, where Sam's back, that was covered in blood, had been lying on the seat, there is nothing. No blood, no dirt caked from lying on the ground with Dean, nothing. The seat and the car look as if Sam had never been laid on the cushions, they look at each other in shock and disbelief.)

Bobby: What the....

(Dean springs into action, grabs the shotgun, starts back toward the "Ghost Town", while Bobby stares into the void where Sam was, completely confused)

Dean: (Mumbling under his breath) Dammit, how did they take him, what do they want with him now, if I have to kill every one of those kids, I am gonna get Sammy back.

(Bobby stares at the seat, thinking, then, suddenly realizes what is going on and where Sam has gone, and turns around to tell Dean, but he is nowhere in sight, so Bobby grabs his gun, lots of ammunition, loading up on weapons and fire-power before running off after Dean, Fade to black)

END ACT 1

Okay, so let me know if you want me to go on, cause I don't want to write all of this if it is really stupid so far, I have pretty much the rest written, so let me know!

Pimpin' My Show!

Alright, I'll let the signs talk, but if the rumors are true and the show is in danger of being canceled, I will pimp it everywhere, including my blog, so here we go!!

Okay, done with the pimpin', and on to the review. Watched Heart liked it, but actually thought that Born Under a Bad Sign Sam was actually more compelling. I mean, we are kinda used to sullen sad Sammy, but evil sexy Sam is definitly new, and I gotta say (don't throw stones!!) I loved him more as all fiery and evil than sappy and crying.

What a Double Twist on Supernatural!!!

Okay, I know I am waaaayyyyy behind, but I am slowly catching up, you know, life called, don't you hate when that happens! ;) Anyway, I just watched "Tall Tales" & "Roadkill" and I really didn't see the ending coming, on either!! I did know something was up when Dean didn't hit on her in "Roadkill" though. He was being so mean, and then when they showed the relevant flashbacks at the end, it all came together!! I really pride myself on being someone who has seen enough movies to kinda get the ending before it happens, and I have the gift for TV shows too, that is why the only Crime show I watch is Bones, cause I usually do figure out the ending, but I get to look at David Boreanaz for an hour while I do it, so all is good. Anyway, back on track, I usually guess what is gonna happen, and I am usually right, but I had no clue about the end of "Roadkill". I must say, that was an awesome setup, just like in The Sixth Sense, everyone claimed that they knew that the guy was dead, but it made millions of dollars.....right. But, the point is I didn't see it coming, and loved the small details that lead to it, just in case someone was clever enough to recognize the signs!!

The other ending that I was surprised by was the "Tall Tales" one. Not that he came back, cause I was pretty sure they didn't get rid of the trickster, but the illusion that they pulled on him, that one was good, I mean we all know that Dean is all impulsive, and would go after him, so it took me by surprise when the plot was revealed, and the fight orchestrated!! Anyway, I wanted to put up a blog about the shows I watched, they were both awesome, and I was actually glad to have some of the levity return in the midst of all the recent drama, and by the looks of it, the drama to come.....up next "Heart".

New Banner and Why Can't We All Just........You Know

Okay, got another banner from the wonderful dj_mrt, representing my other job in the BFU, since I am Parker's Nanny, these pictures are from my personal files. You know, I didn't make it on screen in "Fallout Shelter", but I went with Sid, so, anyway, wanted to represent my other job in the BFU with my banner so that I could change them at will!! Thanks again to the amazing dj_mrt, Seriously, you are a genuis!!  

And also, I just thought that this was so cute and funny!! I hope you like it!

 

Photo Advice

I am bored, and had a very interesting day at work, so I am going to impart some advice for everyone that takes Photos into a 1Hour Photo lab. 

Alright people, I work in the One Hour Photo Department of a Drug Store, and the things I see!! I have one word people, Polaroids!!! Seriously, if you are gonna take pictures of your self and others doing unmentionable things, don't turn them into your local 1-Hr photo lab! I mean, at least use the send out service, you have to look those people in the face when you pick up your pictures, people! And even if you have no shame, doesn't mean that the Photo Techncian wants to see all your business. 

Okay, I know it may sound like I am a snoopy person looking through other people's pictures, but when we are trained, we are MADE to flip through the pictures of EVERY SINGLE CUSTOMER BY LAW. It is a little detailed, but we have to notify the police if we see certain things, and also, we have to take pictures off of the price if they did not come out.

So, once again, if you are going to take pictures of nasty things, don't burn your local Photo Lab technicians eyes with your extra curricular activities, just wait the extra few days and send them out or take polaroids. I mean we are in the digital era too, you can take digital pics, and print them at home. Just a plea, from one Photo Technician who has seen to many scenes she wishes she could wipe from her memory like Ben did in the moviePaycheck .  

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