this is really sad. James Brown died yesterday morning of pneumonia. he was 73. i know this is really short but i want everyone to be informed

LIFE SUCKS!

my best friend is transferring to a different school in Fresno. i would've been happier if it was a school in Clovis unified.she doesn't even want to go to Hamilton but her mom is forcing her to. June is thinking about calling her social worker. we'll barely get to talk on the phone or internet. we might not even get to see each other for more than 3 years. before Clovis/Fresno she lived in Sacramento

      I realize that some people believe that a dress code is necessary because they think it will prevent violence.  A dress code will prevent students from being distracted, for example if a student arrives at school with a Mohawk, the students will be staring at that student instead of studying.  A dress code also means students won't wear inappropriate clothing like a tube top.  While all these points are valid i still maintain that a dress code is not needed due to the students' rights to express themselves.  As i have noted, a dress code is, without a doubt, unnecessary.

please read and see if you like my essay so far. if you need to go ahead and give me some constructive criticism. remember i am only a 6th grader.i will also name the parts.

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With a dress code you can’t be trendy.  You can’t wear what you think is “in,” so children wouldn’t think their fashion isn’t important.  A numerous amount of children love fashion and wish to pursue it as a career but a dress code interferes with that dream.  A dress code also means you will be uncomfortable.  During the springtime we still have to where jeans, even when the temperature gets near 100 degrees, which could cause heat stroke.  If we are wearing uniforms P.E., then we’ll be uncomfortable and we’ll be unable to do our best especially during P.E. testing.  As you can simply see a dress code would be a waste.

please read and see if you like my essay so far. if you need to go ahead and give me some constructive criticism. remember i am only a 6th grader.i will also name the parts.

anecdote

    I believe that we don’t need a dress code. I feel it’s a waste for example Ryan was walking home from school one day.  He was trying to be careful because he heard there was a new gang in the neighborhood.  He was wearing his red shirt that was part of  his uniform.  He saw a number of guys on the corner wearing red.  Ryan was found on the ground of that same corner the next day.  He was pronounced dead at the scene.

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        A lot of people like to express who they are with the way they dress but with a dress code, they don’t have that type of freedom.  Many children would feel like they can’t be open to who they are.  Also, I feel that if a family has to where certain clothes due to religious beliefs, they should be allowed to, but many dress codes prevent the children from doing so.  School uniforms cost a big amount of money.  The cost of the uniforms may discriminate against low – income families.  Why pay for a uniform that costs a huge amount of money than wear clothes you already own that fit you fine.  As you can see a dress code is clearly not needed.

   

i forgot to tell you about my band concert on monday it was really great. my parents said are band sounded like we were advanced. what's funny about our band is most of it is made up of the "jock" boys.anyway right now i am doing a essay on the dress code. my teacher told me to challenge myself and go against the dress code since i'm really for it.i'll post it later and you could tell me how it is

my family and i are barely putting the ornaments on our christmas tree today. we won't finish for another couple hours because my parents went shopping. i know this is kinda short for me but i was bored and wanted to post a blog

what up my peepz. i'm just bored sooooooo i decided to see what everyone's been up to. i had an ok day on friday except my study buddy kept on hitting me with a book. then since my crush, zack was sitting with his study buddy chet(chad's little brother)next to us we were talking to both chet and zack. zack told me a lot of funny things on how his study buddies were in the past but 97% of the time i was paying attention to krista , my study buddy. anyway so my friend mike told the teacher what she was doing and she lied to her and said "but she was never listening to me, all she was doing was staring at the clock."i should keep in mind that she is a second grader 

as some of you may know i want to become a singer when i grow up.the thing is in chior i can't show my true strong voice. my chior teacher is in favor of this girl who is a show off. i don't wanna give up on singing but the thing is no one ever compliments me. i don't know what to think anymore.

today is my friend Alyssa's B-Day. i just got back from her sleep-over party. it was sooooooooooooooooooo cool. we did a scavenger hunt at 9:00 pm of course they warned the neighbors. i'll tell you more later. TTYL