I am approaching the time when I'll be able to start writing chapter 10 of Jag's story. The only reason I haven't already begun to write it (besides giving myself a break after writing the tremendously awesome chapter 9) is because I wanted to wait for my pal Andy (Mangoni) to catch his story up to the point in time where Jag's story currently is. There will be a point in my chapter 10 where Jag and Mangoni have a chat after being away from each other for some time. I thought it'd be nice to know what has happened to Mangoni in all that time, just in case I could add some more detail into my own chapter using info I acquired from his.
The following excerpt is from his most recent chapter. It's actually the tailend of it. We worked on the flashback portion together, in that Andy emailed me a rough draft of it, showing the basic gist of what he was going for, and then through the magic of Skype, we ran through it line by line, expanding and changing some words around as we saw fit. The beauty of it was that it never felt like I was taking over (cause I wasn't) and in truth, Andy was loving it because it always seemed that I knew exactly what he was going for and was able to come up with the right words to say what we wanted to say as best as we could both say it. I really think the whole process made us better writing buddies and friends. When it comes to this story, our combined story, we're almost one person at this point.
So do keep in mind that this comes from Andy's most recent chapter, not mine. But, we both worked on the flashback part because it has huge importance to both Mangoni's story and Jag's. It is important for you all, the readers of my story, to know the contents of this excerpt because it will make certain parts of ch10 and 11 more significant and better understood.
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It was late that night when I heard the sound of something rustling outside. I wasn't on edge. I knew that sound all too well by now. It was the sound of a wolf walking around outside. It had to be Zilus, my father.
"Well don't be stalking me outside my tent all night. Come in and tell me how terrible a job I'm doing." I said, irritated.
"I'm not here to argue or condescend." he said. "I wanted to see how you were doing. I know what happened. The physical wounds will heal, but it's not easy losing someone. "
I looked at him in confusion. Normally he wouldn't be this kind. "Are you saying you're not going to tell me how foolish it was to get so close to someone so quickly? That I should have been looking while I swam, instead of going full force and not paying attention? Or that I should have kept my weapons with me so I could have thrown one at the captain before he shot me?" I said, seeing how things could have gone differently in my head.
"It took some time, but I finally realized that it's not what you should have done that matters." he said. "It's what you did do, what you have done. And I have to say, you've done well for yourself. I'm proud of you, son. You're trying your best to get to your mother. But there's something you should know." He paused for a second before continuing. "You still believe your mother to be Undice. I told you this because I knew the trolls had made that name for her." He paused again. "Her real name is Juuni." Yet another pause, presumably to allow things to sink in for me. "Let me explain." he said.
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Your mother was a very beautiful Draenei, and every man in the village had their eyes on her. Problem was she was supposed to marry Jagauric's father, Calaaris. They had been promised to each other since birth, but she had no romantic feelings for him. In truth, she had fallen for me more than she had him. In our younger years, Juuni and I would play together and we would talk to each other - completely disregarding time as it flew by - all while Calaaris was left to his self. We were practically inseparable, the very best of friends. One day, we found a place in the woods nearby, and we'd go there from time to time to just hang out or hide from all the other younglings. In the years when we were coming into adulthood, we would go to this secret place very often and just lay on the ground to look up through the gaps in the trees at the many bright stars and enjoy one another's company, and the confidentiality the place possessed.
"One day, I hope to leave this place. I don't want to marry Calaaris. They shouldn't make me." she said.
"I don't understand why it couldn't be me or why we can't choose our own mates, but I will promise you this. I will take you away when the time is right. I will marry you, Juuni. Of that you can be sure." I replied. Little did we know, Calaaris was in the thickets behind us, watching and listening.
He didn't say anything at first. He just watched and waited for three years as Juuni and I grew ever closer. But, things still went on as planned. They married the day they came of age. That didn't stop our meetings, however. Soon there wasn't a night when we didn't meet. One particular night, before I had sat down at her side, I could sense something was wrong. In the moonlight, I could see that Juuni was quivering and she had clearly been crying.
"What's wrong?" I asked her. She looked up at me and shook her head. In that moment, Calaaris came out of hiding.
"What have we here?" he shouted, desecrating the silence of the forest. "Are you making an attempt at a married woman?" He knew what had been going on.
"I won't lie to you. It's exactly what it looks like." I said in a calm tone. "She doesn't love you, Calaaris!"
"Do you take me for a fool, Zilus?! You don't think I look into her eyes every single morning and see the sadness? I know she doesn't love me, but I wasn't about to give up without giving it a try." Calaaris continued, "I didn't want to marry her, but it's what tradition dictated and we both weren't about to throw that out the window."
"So let me take her now." I suggested. "You can tell the rest of the Elders what you will. It doesn't matter to me."
"You can't do that." Juuni said suddenly in a low voice.
I stood there, baffled. "Why not, Peaceblossom?" Here was our chance and suddenly she didn't want to take it?
"Zilus... I'm with child." Juuni looked down and held her belly with both hands. "I cannot leave here while still carrying this baby." Total shock is what I felt at that moment. I was speechless.
"Look," Calaaris said, facing Juuni. "I know you don't love me, and I know you've tried like I have to still make this work, but it's been clear as day from the days when we were all but little children that you two are soulmates. Who am I to stand in the way of true destiny?" Then he turned to face me. "So here is what we will do. Juuni and I will remain married until our child is one year of age. At this time, I will consider our union null and void and you two will be able to run away together to live out your lives as you've surely been dreaming. The baby will stay with me, and I will raise him. Meanwhile, as you surely know, both of you from that day forward will be exiled from the village, never allowed to step foot back inside." In this moment, Juuni went to say something, but Calaaris raised his hand, already prepared to respond to her concern. "I will handle the Elders. No need for you to be concerned about that." He paused again. "I believe this is the only way we can be responsible about this."
"You always were a master organizer," Juuni said.
"Thank you, Calaaris." I told him with fierce sincerity. "I will treat her well and always keep her safe."
"I know you will," Calaaris said. "You always have." At that, I nodded my head down slightly in acknowledgement. This whole meeting spoke volumes about the kind of man that Calaaris was. "Well," he went to continue, "I guess that's it for now. Let us all head back into the village together and Zilus, you shall remain but a good, close friend of Juuni's until the time comes. No secret meetings. If you wish this to work, you mustn't let anyone catch on."
"I understand completely," I said, giving Juuni a brief smile. She meekly returned the expression.
"Very well," Calaaris nodded. "Let's go then."
And with that, Calaaris put his left arm around Juuni's shoulder and as I walked closely behind them, we made our way back into the village.
Fast forward a bit, and the time had arrived for Juuni to give birth to her child. It was a long and arduous labor, but in the end, she gave birth to a strong baby boy, whom they decided to name Jagauric. Calaaris and Juuni both could not be any happier.
The following year crept by painfully slow, but eventually, the time finally came for Juuni and me to leave and start our new life together. The three of us stood inside the closed doorway of Calaaris' home, baby Jagauric resting on his chest in a cloth sling wrapped over his left shoulder. "Well, I guess this is it." I said. "Got everything, Juuni?"
She nodded, then walked the few steps to stand right in front of Calaaris. She looked down at her one-year-old son, who just looked up and smiled, giggling and squirming around playfully in the sling. She bent her head down and gave Jagauric a deep, heartfelt kiss on the forehead before saying in a soft, reassuring tone, "Please don't ever think I've abandoned you, my son. You are a blessing, and I will always love you, with all my heart."
Juuni then turned away from Jag's bright, beady eyes to look up into Calaaris'. "Please don't hate me for leaving you like this. I know it must be hard to have to say goodbye to your wife and marriage."
"I could never hate you," Calaaris replied. "My only regret is that I could not find a way to make you happy. I just want you to be happy."
"And that's what I love about you, Cal." Juuni said, caressing the side of his face with her soft hand. They shared another moment together, just looking into each other's eyes, before Juuni turned around to come back to my side. "We should get going," she said with a tinge of anxiety. I knew she was worried about being seen. We could only hope the sun would not come up earlier than normal on this morning.
"Yes, it is time." I agreed. Junni and I turned to the door, and I opened it for us, letting her go through first. Standing about five feet from the door, we both turned around to see Calaaris standing in the doorway, still with Jagauric in tow. He nodded in my direction, a meaningful nod, and I returned the sentiment exactly. I would take care of Juuni and protect her for the rest of our days. With this exchange of a simple gesture, I was swearing an oath of sorts to Calaaris that I would follow through with all my promises.
Once I began to turn to face the path that led out of our village, several things happened all at once. Calaaris gently closed the door of his home behind us, Juuni and I began to walk down the path, and a single ray of sunlight appeared suddenly above the nearby mountains, crowning them and shedding a little bit of light onto the entire village. We had to get moving quickly, or else we'd have a lot of explaining to do.
As we were leaving the village, Juuni turned to me and said solemnly, "I hope one day the Fates allow me to gaze upon my son once again."
At first, I didn't know how to respond, so I just kept walking with my eyes focused on the path ahead of us. Then, without turning to face the woman whom I loved so dearly, I replied in-kind, "Me too."
And without either of us saying another word, we walked onward with the morning sun at our backs, never looking behind us and looking forward with the hope that true happiness lay just beyond the horizon.
Several days later, we happened upon a charming, little village nestled by a forest. Juuni thought it a wonderful place to start our new life together, and so we settled down there, getting married soon after our arrival. Four years later, you were born.
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"Everything else I've told you about her is true." Zilus began to say in conclusion. "She was taken by the Erador when you were two, and now that you know you can get on the right track. You know that Stormwind is where she was. If you still hold to hope, I recommend asking around there."
I sat there not certain what to say. He apparently caught on when he continued speaking. "I must be on my way. I have places to go and people to see. Be careful, son, and don't lose hope." With that, he vanished into thin air, leaving me completely dazed and confused.
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