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Chinese New Year!!!! LOL

i totaly forgot it was, is ....going to be...oh you guys know what i mean...its the year of the boar......i think...i'm sure....i'm deffinately positve it is the year of the boar ...pig w/e you want to call it....so HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR!!!!....LOL:P:D (i know my lil sis is gonna post one too....hehe)

Just to clarrify somethings :oP

ok it's only right that i explain, as best as i can, the storyline of my naruto story.  i kinda twisted it to my convinience. i basically to the idea of naruto (charac, setting, some key points, etc.) now lets see.....ummmm :P:D......*thinking* oh yeah :D:P:

well it takes place a few years after their chunin exams(3 maybe 4) & in my story they all passed :P:D (yes even naruto lol)...the 3rd hokage is still alive (spoiler: but not for long)...they meet a girl named Sango who's about Naruto's age (whats this she kinda looks like him too...:wink: hint hint)..... she's part of ANBU & has been searching for Naruto for a long time now...and in a matter of hours she recruit naruto & the other to go on a very important , i guess you can say S-rank mission, to help the mist village search for a rouge ninja of theirs...or is it their rouge ninja? (hint hint)

well i guess thats the jist of it....you guys might notice names from other anime that i took to add to my story (i.e. Sango is from Inu Yasha :P:D ) (what thats the only thing i could think of at the time ...teehehe :D:lol: :P ) hope this helps you under stand it a little more when i put the other teasers & then when i post the chapters :P:D thats it for me so

Matta ne (i hope i spelled that right lol :P:D)(see ya:P)

P.S

for those of you who dont know i've been writing this on & off again for almost a year now...i get real bad writers block sometime & i hate it....i sit there & look at the paper but i get nothing...kinda like now..i'm in a semi-writer's block as we speak...anyone care to be my muse ..lol:P:D

P.S.S

oh i for got to add another spoiler..i think its a must know...naruto,in my story just to clarify, doesnt contain the nine tails alone..he shares half of the nine tails with someone...but who? dun dun duuuuuuuun ...if your anygood you can probably guess who...if anyone can guess right i'll pm u & tell u if you were, maybe lol ...:P:D

The Teaser you've all been waiting for!!! :oD

here you guys go...i'll have the other 2 as soon as possible :P:D


Teaser #1: Ch.3: Twin Fury

Naruto arrived at Saukra's tent.  Before he even thought of calling out to Sakura he practiced what to say to her.  What he didn’t know was that Sakura was listening to his.

"Ok, come on Naruto you can do this," he said.  He was nervous and didn’t know how to start.

"Naruto?" said Sakura softly.

"Sakura here me out before you say anything.  Yeah that was a good start, ok where was i, oh yeah.  Before you say anything i want you to know something," Sakura got closer to the tent's door to hear better, "I know I might be a pest sometimes & I screw up too and most of all I know I’m no Sasuke either; but I’m something more.  That sounds good, right?" Naruto said.

“Oh Naruto,” said Sakura.

“Ok where was I, oh right.  I can be a great guy sometimes.  I’ve learned to be more subtle in what I say and do.  Before you speak there’s only one thing I want to ask you.  Sakura would you consider being more that just a friend, even more so than just a girlfriend,” Naruto finished his speech.

“I had no idea you felt that way Naruto,” said Sakura quietly & blushing.

“Oh, who am I kidding?  Sakura would never want someone like me.  What was I thinking,” said Naruto to himself.  Just then Sakura came out of the tent.

“Naruto, is that you?” she said as she came out of the tent.

“Oh, hi Sakura what’cha doing?” said Naruto.

“Oh I hope she didn’t hear me,” he said in his mind.

“Did you want to tell me something?” asked Sakura.  She hoped he would be brave enough to say all that to her.

“Me, no what makes you think that?  I just came to make sure you were ok,” said Naruto avoiding the question.

“Oh,” said Sakura disappointed, “well then I’m gonna go back and rest.  I’m not feeling to well.  Goodnight.”

(Beginning of Sakura’s Theme 0:00) 

She turned around to go back in her tent.

“Come on Naruto.  What’s wrong with me?  Why can’t I tell her,” said Naruto in his mind.

“Wait Sakura, there is something I want to say to you,” said Naruto.

Sakura stopped and turned back around.

“What is it you wanted to say?” she asked him.

“Well you see um, damn how did it go.  You see Sakura, I’m no Sasuke & I know that but I am me.  And,” he paused, “I’m not afraid to be who I am.  I know I can be a pest & say the wrong things at times; but I have learned to be a lot more subtle.  This isn’t making any sense to you, is it?”

“I disagree Naruto, it makes perfect sense.  I know you can be a great guy when the time is right,” said Sakura smiling.

“There’s just one more thing I want to say & ask you Sakura,” he said looking down.

“What is it Naruto?” asked Sakura. 

“I want to protect you with my life, for the rest of my life,” he said.

(1:14 song time)

“What are you saying?  What do you mean?” she said.

“What I’m trying to say is,” Naruto paused.  He was nervous & worried about what Sakura was going to say.

“Yes Naruto?” said Sakura.

“Would you give me the honor in being more than a friend, even more than a girlfriend,” he finally said.

Sakura was speechless.  A couple of minutes went by & nothing was said between them.  And the Sakura spoke.

“Oh Naruto,” said Sakura. (Song ends here :P )

“It’s ok, I understand,” he said with his head down & his back turned to her, “It’s not like I thought you would say yes.  I mean come on; who are we kidding no one would ever love me.”

Sakura ran up to him & hugged him very tight.  Naruto was surprised by Sakura’s action.

“Yes Naruto,” said Sakura still hugging him.

“I don’t understand.  I thought…” Sakura interrupted Naruto.

“You never gave me a chance to say anything,” said Sakura.

“So you mean,” said Naruto.

“Yes.  How many times do I have to say it,” she said as she turned him around.

“Yes?” he said excited.

“Yes! Yes! Yes!” she was so excited in saying yes that she leaned forward and kissed Naruto.

Sakura noticed that they were kissing and quickly backed away blushing.

“Sorry about that I guess I got carried away,” said Sakura still bl.

“Wow, that was great,” said Naruto all love sick like.

Owari…….

 Until the next time tehehe…:P:D

YAY Me!!!! :oD

YAY ME!!! the colts win the super bowl!!! i dont like football but i won the bet at our super bowl party ...YAY ME I GOT MONEY :P:D

i know you want to read it!!!! :oP

ok ...so i've been told i have to post the story i've been writing...it's not finished but i'll give you guys a lil teaser to keep you interested....understand that my writing style is like if it were an acctual book....

so it'll say for example:

"NO WAY!!!" she exclaimed.

Note: anything that is italics is not said out loud to the other characters.

if you have any of the songs from the naruto OST it kinda helps since i was bored one day & started to add the bckgrnd music LOL teehehe :P:D

ok i'll give 3 teasers *being nice here* :D:D

tell me what you think of them:P:D

I'll post them one at a time & soon...first i gotta type it :P:D :(

Can't decide which to use... :o(

i can decide which title to use for one of the chapters in my naruto story :( :cry: ....which one do you guys think i should use:

All joking aside: The Final Battle Aproaches

Stop Fooling around! : The Battle Grows Near.

No more side tracks: The Final Battle Aproaches

The Final Battle Aproaches: No Turning back

 

so which one? or if you can think of a combination with any of those that'll be cool :P:D

(i hate writers block :( )