I don't know how many people I'm going to reach by doing this, but what the hey. I'm going to post a little snippet of my Danny Phantom fanfic and see if I can attract a few readers. The fic is called "Courting Catastrophe" and is posted on fanfiction.net (http://www.fanfiction.net/~mercyangel09). I'm always looking for feedback to help my writing improve. Anyway, here's the blurb: Danny glared at Dash as the quarterback returned to his little entourage, leaving him and Sam to shuffle to fifth period Senior Writing. “I really hate him.” Sam patted Danny’s arm reassuringly. “I’m proud of you though. I would have thought that you would have overshadowed him and made him sing I’m a Little Teapot in the middle of the cafeteria by now.” “It’s tempting, very tempting,” Danny answered as he and Sam walked through Lancer’s door. Sliding into his seat, Danny placed his backpack on his desk and fished out his writing binder. “How did your paper go?” Sam asked, hoping to make small talk. Danny shrugged. “A paper on what we want to do with our lives? Peachy, I suppose.” “Oh, come on Danny. You spent two days in the library with your nose buried in books about NASA. It wasn’t that bad.” Danny gave a half smile to Sam. “It was really fun. But I’m now too tall to be an astronaut. What am I supposed to do now?” “Astronomy?” Sam suggested. Danny would have replied had Tucker not bounded into class, a radiant smile spread across his face. “You’ll never guess who agreed to go with me to Prom.” “Valerie,” Danny and Sam answered at the same time. Tucker’s face fell. “Man, you two really know how to take the fun from these things. How’d you know, anyway?” “Because since she’s part of the middle class, Kwan won’t take her,” Sam answered. “I can’t believe you want to go to that antiquated mating ritual anyway.” Danny cocked an eyebrow. “And you don’t?” A subtle blush crossed Sam’s cheeks. Biting her lip, Sam prayed that Danny didn’t notice, but as usual, he was perfectly in tune with her true feelings. I hope it's not totally horrendo. (Yes, I am making up words, but then again so did Shakespeare so get off my back.) Like said, the first three chapters are posted on fanfiction.net and are for reading. There's even an option to read a review, if you want. I just want to know if I'm doing the series justice.
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