I thought up of my first Fanfic. It is about some pikmin that must win there planet back. The planet where the piks are is named pik-pik. These are the pikmin's names: Red: Pak Blue: Duke Yellow: Jak White: Ron Purple: Chubs :P Here it is!
Pik-Pik. One of the most beautiful planets in the galaxy, and yet one of the most dangerous. You see, reader, Pik-pik was enhabated with deadly bugs. And reader, as we know, bugs are NOT pretty. But these are not any normal bugs. they are mutated. But it is not filled with just bugs. The planet has the most exotic species of plants. Nad one of these plants, are MOBILE. Yes, they are called Pikmin. However, even though the planet is technically named after them, they are not the dominant species. In fact, they are the lowest members of the food chain on pik-pik. They reproduce in great numbers, but a lot of them get eaten short after it is planted.
But that all changed one day, when a mysterious ship crash landed on pik-pik. And out popped a pilot. His name was olimar. His nose was a little....... on the LARGE side. But he was an excellent fighter. And in 30 days, he trained the pikmin to fight back. When he left, the pikmin felt as if they were the only ones left one the planet, because they had grown so close. But after he left, a bulborb attacked their colony. Many non-fighter pikmin were lost, and the bulborb ate many fighters, exept for five. The remaining five killed the bulborb, and reproduced by using the body of the bug. They had discovered a great source! The five, known as Pak, duke, jak, ron, and chub, became heroes.
Now we must go 5 years LATER. Pak was feeding the young pikmin, Duke was gathering food for the colony, Jak was sleeping, Ron was teaching enlists for the army how to fight, and Chubs was eating ( as usual). Just then, Duke came rushing back without any food, with a worried look on his face. " Why no food? You spent the last two and a half hours gathering." said pak.
" NO FOOD?!?!" screamed chubs. He ran upp to Duke and began slapping him. " What the crap is wrong with you?!?!? I was hungry!!! WHY MUST YOU BE SO CRUEL????"
" Thats all you evah think about, chub, food. You just ate 67 berries with 1 and a half gallons of water, and your still hungry." said ron.
' It was 66 berries!' Chubs replied.
HEY!!! shouted Jak. He walked calmly up towards the group." Let Duke explain whats harshing his mellow."
"Thank you, Jak." said Duke. " Okay, I was climbing up a very berry tree, when I looked west, and fell offbecause o something I saw." "
What did you see?" asked ron.
" I saw a group of emporor bulbaxes charging towards the colony!"
WHAT???? screamed jak and pak simeltaniously. Ron didn't get the chance to shout, for he fell over the instant he heard it. Chubs didn't say anything, for he was pickin lint out of his belly button. Jak slaped it out of his hand. " but I thought emporor bulbaxes went extinct." said Pak.
" yeah, well I am pretty sure they migrated to bulbax kingdom." said duke.
Thats crazy. said ron. " We killed the overlord emporor five years ago, when olimar was here." They turned to chubs, who was now picking wax out of his ear. jak slapped his hand again. " Do you even know what were talking about?!" shouted Pak sternly. " Nope! I havent a clue." Chubs responded.
Several explanations to chubs later........
"OH!!!!!! I get it!!!!" said chubs. His face brightened. " EMPOROR BULBAXES ARE COMING TO KILL US!!!!" he screamed. "Alright calm down. They are really slow, and they are a HUGE distance away. Itll take em forever to get here." CRASH. A huge hole formed in the wall of the colony wall. Three huge emporor bulbaxes began to slurp up pikmin that were surrounding the wall. the army forces began flooding out of their stations and attacking the enourmous bulbaxes. Sadly, their little lives ended, as the bulbaxes were consuming pikmin at a rapid pace. The five heroes had no time to react, as it all happened so fast.
One bulbax rushed toward our five mini heroes, one went for the army force, and one went for the nursing section. The army forces were being sucked up like dust in a vaccum cleaner. The bulbax that approached our heroes opened his mouth, revealing its hideous purple tongue.
" Aw crap." said Pak.
" get ready, guys." warned Duke.
" Lets harsh THEIR mellow!" shouted Jak.
" We must avenge our fellow army mates!" said Ron.
" With snacks!" said chubs, as he pulled out berries. The huge bulbax let out a huge bellow, that echoed through the colony. The invasion had begun.
To be continued...
I hope you at least liked it. Or thought it was good. I know it was a little cheesy, but its my first fanfic, so I tried.
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