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Book1: Chapter1: The Outcast

This FanFic is called "The Outcast" and this is actually what I love to do; write and post! Here's the 'pilot' so it's longer than usual.

Time of Setting: In between “Lake Laogai” and “The Earth King”

Smoke was covering the sky from a convoy that was destroyed. 20 men guarded the carriage, as it was attacked by 4 rebel Firebenders. All were killed, except one. This person, known as “The Outcast” was a 13 year old teenager that had brown hair, reddish-orange eyes, average height, and had no life. He thought he would have one after meeting these rebels, who were actually his age, but they were lost. He grabbed his 20-pound bag and started traveling nowhere again.

Noku was the Outcast. He knew he was wanted from his own nation as a criminal. So all he could do was travel all over the Earth Kingdom until the day he died. Nothing to do, never sleeping, begging for food and water in either Fire Nation-held or Earth Kingdom towns, this was normal for him. He was also used to being attacked suddenly by bounty hunters looking for quick loot, but they always failed. His attackers always underestimated him so he always had the edge over them. He was a Rouge Firebender who had no life…

The place Noku was in now, was a place very near Ba Sing Se. All his traveling finally brought him here, to the Earth Kingdom capitol of the world. He wanted to enter the city to at least try to start a life here, but he had no money or chance. He finally found a tree and sat under it. He laid down his heavy bag behind a bush that was close by and tried to get some rest. The place he was in looked very plain and boring. Nothing but the tree and bush he was sitting near and the dirt road that led to the entrance of Ba Sing Se. He reached into his bag to get a piece of cloth to wipe off some of the ash from his recent ambush. He also noticed he got another cut and wound on his left hand; no surprise to him. His red and maroon Fire Nation clothes were dirty and ragged. His heavy old leather boots also were plain brown from the dirt. He hasn’t changed out of them since the horrible experience he had a few months earlier that made him an orphan and the Outcast.

He looked up into the sky and at the sun. The sun was the only thing helping him stay alive and powerful. He started to close his eyes, but saw something coming from the sky. It was just a shadow because of the sun, but it was getting bigger. It was coming right at him! He jumped to the bush beside the tree and was now well hidden. The object landed to reveal that it was a bison with an arrow on its head. On the bison, were 4 other people and a lemur. Two were from the Water Tribe (judging by their clothes), one was from the Earth Kingdom, and one looked like one of the long lost Airbenders as he had an arrow on his head. These 2 guys and 2 girls looked familiar to the Outcast somehow. They all started to climb off this giant flying bison and were looking happy. But right when the Earthbender touched the ground she looked alert and shocked.

“Someone is behind those bushes!” warned the Earthbender.

My Lost FanFic

Some of you may have seen that I have been having a FanFic crisis. Well, the full version, is that my FF, "The Outcast" has disappeared from the FF Boards on Nick.com. Not even the shortcuts I showed earlier on this site won't work anymore. THIS IS BULLS***!!! My FF was the only reason why I was at Nick.com, now this happens. It's either the moderator of the board (calls himself/herself NICKFrog) and deleted it (I NEVER use curse words in my FF, especially if it's on Nick.com), or some virus got it only, and no one else's, and deleted it.

That reason is why I'm not myself lately (with me making and rating bloopers on the Blooper Thread) and why I seem different. I could re-type/write it, but I don't have the first 13 chapters saved onto my Microsoft Word. This really $ucks...

If you guys want, I could try and re-write the first chapters and post them somewhere (probably not Nick.com again since it was lost there). It'll take a while, but I can give it a shot.

TMT

Ownage and Pwnage!

OWNAGE AND PWNAGE!

ATLA is going to beat Family Guy, South Park, Simpsons, and JL for the best animation here on TV.com! This is OWNAGE and PWNAGE because they were known to be the kings of comedy (except JL) and were mentioned every day in public and in schools. But now, ATLA has risen and surpassed these legendary and unforgetable shows and is blasting to victory! This will be long remembered in TV.com history as the expected shows lose to a new show.

Come on, ATLA is new, and it's defeating these shows that have been here for at least 5 years! It's called 2 words my ATLA fans: OWNAGE and PWNAGE!!

Peace out, hang loose, and God bless!!

TMT

A New Year's Resolution for All True ATLA Fans

HERE'S A TRUE RESOLUTION:

1. Watch every new episode that comes on the first day it premieres (this is optional, since ppl usually have activities on Friday)

2. Buy the entire season 1 and 2 on DVD (season 2 will probably will all be out before 2008)

3. Watch important episodes again and again until your eyes bleed like h3ll!

4. Support your ship the most you can by BELIEVING BEFORE THEY HAPPEN!!!

5. Jump like my pet mental hog-monkey if your ship comes true.

6. Be on the Avatar Forum website page on TV.com every day!!

Those are my Avatar resolutions, the first one was because I didn't watch every episode. I completely missed all the episodes until I watched SotFN then I got into this show like...mentally...giving me the name. I watched the show's re-runs every day to find any episode I haven't seen. That was my 3/4 of the way goal for 2006, and I watched them ALL BABY!!

Peace out, hang loose, and God bless!!

TMT

The Timeline makes ATLA popular

Avatar: The Last Airbender is the best show on Nickelodeon and we all know that. But what makes it so popular? I'll tell one thing: it's timeline and story. No other show on Nickelodeon has an actual story to it. The only show that's close to having something close to a storyline is Danny Phantom, as all it does is keep track of Danny's new powers. But because ATLA has a storyline, it makes it harder to write the episodes. They have to think of what to put in the episodes without changing the story too much or messing with the deadline (Sozin's Comet). Although it makes it harder to do that, it still manages to stay on top and be #1. THAT'S what makes such an awesome show besides the action and the comedy. I admit some of the comedy may not be like that of Patrick's of Spongebob Squarepants, but we still love it!! I know this whole blog is stupid, but I'm just sharing my thoughts!

*the_mental_teen typed this*

Time, a valuable and annoying thing.

Some of these awesome shows take longer than usual to come out. I mean, Avatar:The Last Airbender is the best show on nickelodeon and probably the best animated show out. Though it still takes 2 weeks for a new episode to come out! I think the nicktoon studio should focus much more on Avatar:The Last Airbender and less on the horrible shows like Teenage Robot, Kappa Mikey, etc. If your gonna make a #1 show like this, make sure it comes every week like all other shows!

the_mental_teen