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i loved it! great comparison to OT.
some things i think you should addin the next instalments are other forums as other cities(like SW where there is constant battles in the streets haha) and unions. the only part that seemed a little odd to me was when the girl attacked Koth, but its probably just building her character. if you need a double agent or a head tech guy you can feel free to use me:)
[QUOTE="metaldude05"][QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="FalcoLX"]Wow, awesome job! That was a great portrayal of a fictional OT. Just a thought for the second part, maybe mention the former mods who stepped down from their position like Omni-slash.Theokhoth
Oh, I have plans.;)
Also, if anybody wants me to mention any banned users, please tell me.
Can i slap Deity Slapper in the next one
Sorry, but even if he does make an appearance here, it will be a short, quick one.
And I'll be the one to smack his ass. >.>
But you can be in the second (or possibly third) one if you'd like.:D
ok sounds good i guess. as long as someone takes him down
i loved it! great comparison to OT.
some things i think you should addin the next instalments are other forums as other cities(like SW where there is constant battles in the streets haha) and unions. the only part that seemed a little odd to me was when the girl attacked Koth, but its probably just building her character. if you need a double agent or a head tech guy you can feel free to use me:)
NYiVtec
Mwahaha, there will definitely be journeying to other lands, one of which is alluded to in this story.:twisted:
[QUOTE="NYiVtec"]i loved it! great comparison to OT.
some things i think you should addin the next instalments are other forums as other cities(like SW where there is constant battles in the streets haha) and unions. the only part that seemed a little odd to me was when the girl attacked Koth, but its probably just building her character. if you need a double agent or a head tech guy you can feel free to use me:)
Theokhoth
Mwahaha, there will definitely be journeying to other lands, one of which is alluded to in this story.:twisted:
how many parts do you plan on writing?
[QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="NYiVtec"]i loved it! great comparison to OT.
some things i think you should addin the next instalments are other forums as other cities(like SW where there is constant battles in the streets haha) and unions. the only part that seemed a little odd to me was when the girl attacked Koth, but its probably just building her character. if you need a double agent or a head tech guy you can feel free to use me:)
NYiVtec
Mwahaha, there will definitely be journeying to other lands, one of which is alluded to in this story.:twisted:
how many parts do you plan on writing?
Three. But there may be more, depending on how much I write.
[QUOTE="NYiVtec"][QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="NYiVtec"]i loved it! great comparison to OT.
some things i think you should addin the next instalments are other forums as other cities(like SW where there is constant battles in the streets haha) and unions. the only part that seemed a little odd to me was when the girl attacked Koth, but its probably just building her character. if you need a double agent or a head tech guy you can feel free to use me:)
Theokhoth
Mwahaha, there will definitely be journeying to other lands, one of which is alluded to in this story.:twisted:
how many parts do you plan on writing?
Three. But there may be more, depending on how much I write.
after your done cane we create an extended universe type thing to completly overkill your great story (all aproved by you of course)
"Khoth flinched. Like profanity, shouting was illegal in GS324." :lol: so true
Epic story :P
I feel LJ was potrayed a little too easy-going, though. You would think he is some quiet, spritual type guy
Can I be one of the main villains of the second part? Any good fantasy story needs a despicable, over-the-top villain character.nocoolnamejim
Sure. You'll be called "Jim," as I don't plan to use weird screen names.
I'd also like to mention at this point that not all the mods are bad guys in the story. . . ;)
I am easy going....and quite nice actually.:|"Khoth flinched. Like profanity, shouting was illegal in GS324." :lol: so true
Epic story :P
I feel LJ was potrayed a little too easy-going, though. You would think he is some quiet, spritual type guy
DivergeUnify
"Khoth flinched. Like profanity, shouting was illegal in GS324." :lol: so true
Epic story :P
I feel LJ was potrayed a little too easy-going, though. You would think he is some quiet, spritual type guy
DivergeUnify
You think so? He always strikes me as the kind of guy who, while he certainly cares for things, doesn't give the impression that he does, in fact, care for things.
Not that that's a negative impression, mind you.:P
[QUOTE="NYiVtec"]after your done cane we create an extended universe type thing to completly overkill your great story (all aproved by you of course)
Theokhoth
Sure. It's not like I own a copyright or anything.:P
But if you sell it, I'll ****ing eat you.:D
well i thought i should be polite and ask first:P
[QUOTE="DivergeUnify"]I am easy going....and quite nice actually .:|I didn't say you're not nice and your reaction doesn't seem very easy going ;) :P"Khoth flinched. Like profanity, shouting was illegal in GS324." :lol: so true
Epic story :P
I feel LJ was potrayed a little too easy-going, though. You would think he is some quiet, spritual type guy
LJS9502_basic
I wasn't trying to make out a bad interpretation or anything. Sorry if that's how it came across
I didn't say you're not nice and your reaction doesn't seem very easy going ;) :PI didn't say I was angry about your comment. Just setting the record straight. I'm also not as serious as you guys always seem to think.;)I wasn't trying to make out a bad interpretation or anything. Sorry if that's how it came across
DivergeUnify
[QUOTE="nocoolnamejim"]Can I be one of the main villains of the second part? Any good fantasy story needs a despicable, over-the-top villain character.Theokhoth
Sure. You'll be called "Jim," as I don't plan to use weird screen names.
Jim's just fine. I've never really had a cool screen name since I've been at Gamespot anyway.Actual shades of gray? How interesting! I look forward to reading.I'd also like to mention at this point that not all the mods are bad guys in the story. . . ;)
Theokhoth
[QUOTE="DivergeUnify"] I didn't say you're not nice and your reaction doesn't seem very easy going ;) :PI didn't say I was angry about your comment. Just setting the record straight. I'm also no as serious as you guys always seem to think.;)I wasn't trying to make out a bad interpretation or anything. Sorry if that's how it came across
LJS9502_basic
That's why I made you laid back in this one.:P You drive up and waltz in, late, blaring music in a meeting without wearing a mask like the rest of your cohorts. . . I thought it would be good.
ROFL!! this was great, so it had you, the ish, LJ, Kikouken, Jandurin, and was that last guy FamicomCommander?? or no?? Haha you kicked kikoukens ass lol that was great. The ish reveal was "epic" i for some reason imagined a saddened angry person with a scar through his eye but you ruined the image when you hugged him and metioned "Crush." :lol: 10/10 Add me in the next one, i can be the funny jerk in the story who is mean to everyone :Pblazinpuertoroc
Ha, yeah, Fami is Famicommander.:P
So do you want to be a good guy or a bad guy?
Why the hell wasn't I included :(?Video_Game_King
A lot of people weren't included. I simply wanted to introduce the protagonist (myself), along with other characters, along with an idea of the setting. The next part will have more characters, and the third part will have yet more.
[QUOTE="Video_Game_King"]Why the hell wasn't I included :(?Theokhoth
A lot of people weren't included. I simply wanted to introduce the protagonist (myself), along with other characters, along with an idea of the setting. The next part will have more characters, and the third part will have yet more.
I better be in there. And there better be a super-soaker full of holy water...
[QUOTE="DivergeUnify"] I didn't say you're not nice and your reaction doesn't seem very easy going ;) :PI didn't say I was angry about your comment. Just setting the record straight. I'm also not as serious as you guys always seem to think.;) Thanks for clarifying that. Now I'll always have an impression of you providing a serious arguement, but in rl( if there is such a place 0_0) you're laughing in your keyboard at how you're fooling everyone :lol:I wasn't trying to make out a bad interpretation or anything. Sorry if that's how it came across
LJS9502_basic
[QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="Video_Game_King"]Why the hell wasn't I included :(?Video_Game_King
A lot of people weren't included. I simply wanted to introduce the protagonist (myself), along with other characters, along with an idea of the setting. The next part will have more characters, and the third part will have yet more.
I better be in there. And there better be a super-soaker full of holy water...
Um. . . . .. you'll be in there. >_>
[QUOTE="blazinpuertoroc"]ROFL!! this was great, so it had you, the ish, LJ, Kikouken, Jandurin, and was that last guy FamicomCommander?? or no?? Haha you kicked kikoukens ass lol that was great. The ish reveal was "epic" i for some reason imagined a saddened angry person with a scar through his eye but you ruined the image when you hugged him and metioned "Crush." :lol: 10/10 Add me in the next one, i can be the funny jerk in the story who is mean to everyone :PTheokhoth
Ha, yeah, Fami is Famicommander.:P
So do you want to be a good guy or a bad guy?
i thought only mods could be the bad guys??? Either way Id rather be part one of the good guys who is part of the resistance. You can name me Blazin 8) :P Seriously the story was great, you could write a whole epic novel outta this rofl! Do the ish and famicomcommander know you made this?? People need to read this story ASAPi thought only mods could be the bad guys??? Either way Id rather be part one of the good guys who is part of the resistance. You can name me Blazin 8) :P Seriously the story was great, you could write a whole epic novel outta this rofl! Do the ish and famicomcommander know you made this?? People need to read this story ASAPblazinpuertoroc
The mods the only bad guys? Whatever gave you that idea?:twisted:
The only way Ish and Fami know about this is if. . . . .
:o
[QUOTE="Video_Game_King"][QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="Video_Game_King"]Why the hell wasn't I included :(?Theokhoth
A lot of people weren't included. I simply wanted to introduce the protagonist (myself), along with other characters, along with an idea of the setting. The next part will have more characters, and the third part will have yet more.
I better be in there. And there better be a super-soaker full of holy water...
Um. . . . .. you'll be in there. >_>
Under the name of d--ouch what was that?
[QUOTE="blazinpuertoroc"]i thought only mods could be the bad guys??? Either way Id rather be part one of the good guys who is part of the resistance. You can name me Blazin 8) :P Seriously the story was great, you could write a whole epic novel outta this rofl! Do the ish and famicomcommander know you made this?? People need to read this story ASAPTheokhoth
The mods the only bad guys? Whatever gave you that idea?:twisted:
The only way Ish and Fami know about this is if. . . . .
:o
:o I thought maybe you talk to them via msn or aim[QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="Video_Game_King"][QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="Video_Game_King"]Why the hell wasn't I included :(?DivergeUnify
A lot of people weren't included. I simply wanted to introduce the protagonist (myself), along with other characters, along with an idea of the setting. The next part will have more characters, and the third part will have yet more.
I better be in there. And there better be a super-soaker full of holy water...
Um. . . . .. you'll be in there. >_>
Under the name of d--ouch what was that?
I see what you're doing. FEEL THE WRATH OF THE WISE BLACK MAGE :P!!!
[QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="blazinpuertoroc"]i thought only mods could be the bad guys??? Either way Id rather be part one of the good guys who is part of the resistance. You can name me Blazin 8) :P Seriously the story was great, you could write a whole epic novel outta this rofl! Do the ish and famicomcommander know you made this?? People need to read this story ASAPblazinpuertoroc
The mods the only bad guys? Whatever gave you that idea?:twisted:
The only way Ish and Fami know about this is if. . . . .
:o
:o I thought maybe you talk to them via msn or aimNope. I don't use that stuff.
[QUOTE="blazinpuertoroc"]i thought only mods could be the bad guys??? Either way Id rather be part one of the good guys who is part of the resistance. You can name me Blazin 8) :P Seriously the story was great, you could write a whole epic novel outta this rofl! Do the ish and famicomcommander know you made this?? People need to read this story ASAPTheokhoth
The mods the only bad guys? Whatever gave you that idea?:twisted:
The only way Ish and Fami know about this is if. . . . .
:o
From the details I know of Fami's case, I wouldn't be too surprised to see him back again before too long once the confusion with his particular situation is cleared up. No guarantees since I'm not working it, but I'm pretty confident you'll see him again.[QUOTE="blazinpuertoroc"][QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="blazinpuertoroc"]i thought only mods could be the bad guys??? Either way Id rather be part one of the good guys who is part of the resistance. You can name me Blazin 8) :P Seriously the story was great, you could write a whole epic novel outta this rofl! Do the ish and famicomcommander know you made this?? People need to read this story ASAPTheokhoth
The mods the only bad guys? Whatever gave you that idea?:twisted:
The only way Ish and Fami know about this is if. . . . .
:o
:o I thought maybe you talk to them via msn or aimNope. I don't use that stuff.
Then youve been using the power of the force to contact them yes?! :shock:That was awesome Theokhoth! 4/5 :D
Now the question is, am I arrogant enough...?
*thinks*
...
I guess I am, can I be in part 2??? :P
[QUOTE="btaylor2404"][QUOTE="Theokhoth"][QUOTE="-Jiggles-"]I haven't even read it yet, but I can already tell that it's pretty Godlike.Theokhoth
Meh, I wrote it in about an hour, so it won't be great. Part two will have many more characters than this one.
You know I read it all, keep going, nutcase :)
You're gonna be in part two. ;)
Oh lord, just remember I'm one of the nice Atheists and have had your back plenty of times!
If you're looking for a modern-day ninja ala Sam Fisher for your story... *points to avatar* :roll:kingdre
I might be able to squeeze that in.;)
That was awesome Theokhoth! 4/5 :D
Now the question is, am I arrogant enough...?
*thinks*
...
I guess I am, can I be in part 2??? :P
black_cat19
Sure. You can have the code name "Black Cat."
Needs moar Jayd-er, I mean -TheSecondSign-.-TheSecondSign-
Indeed it does.;)
Oh lord, just remember I'm one of the nice Atheists and have had your back plenty of times!
btaylor2404
>.> Sure. >.>
Anybody have any banned users they'd like put in? I might make h8smikemoore a B& character.:(
[QUOTE="kingdre"]If you're looking for a modern-day ninja ala Sam Fisher for your story... *points to avatar* :roll:Theokhoth
I might be able to squeeze that in.;)
That was awesome Theokhoth! 4/5 :D
Now the question is, am I arrogant enough...?
*thinks*
...
I guess I am, can I be in part 2??? :P
black_cat19
Sure. You can have the code name "Black Cat."
Needs moar Jayd-er, I mean -TheSecondSign-.-TheSecondSign-
Indeed it does.;)
Oh lord, just remember I'm one of the nice Atheists and have had your back plenty of times!
btaylor2404
>.> Sure. >.>
Anybody have any banned users they'd like put in? I might make h8smikemoore a B& character.:(
Mold on hold was banned...he was really cool'Twas fudgin' epic. :) Nice work, Theo.
I'd love to have any part whatsoever, if you wish to include me.
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