That was alright. I got bored after the circumcision joke, which was funny btw. :D

Definitely work on presence and delivery...but I am sure you will. Stick with it.

Have you posted on any stand-up comedy community forums? Or have your own blog?

Both of those things will definitely help. Good luck.

_en1gma_

I'm not on any stand-up forums, but I do have a blog.

http://brandonscottwolf.blogspot.com/

I put my vids on it, links and occassionally write something. Hope you guys like it and check it out.

Your pretty good man, i rate you up there right next to my favorite katt williams

im not much of a comedy person to be quite honest, i just like playin b-ball :lol:

realistic44

Not bad, not bad at all. I'll subscribe, I want to see how you progress ;)

-FlyLo-

[QUOTE="EaglesPhan89"][QUOTE="Deathxcore"]

You've actually inspired me to an extent.

I've been thinking more and more lately that I should get into stand-up; its always been a dream of mine because I've always had a talent at making people laugh. You've inspired me because you've shown me that comedians have to start somewhere, and you've kinda relieved me of a lot of anxiety of trying to be perfect on the first try.

I'm jotting down some material but its hard for me to format it into a deliverable way so that I can reference old jokes in new jokes and vice versa.

Thanks for sharing it with us, it takes guts to get up there and especially to put it on the web.

Keep up the good work man!

Deathxcore

Well after I saw this thread, I looked up the biggest comedy club in the area. (Dayton, Ohio woohoo?) And asked them about open mic night.

Tonight was an open mic night, and it started at 8pm. I was so excited, nervous, and fearful. I was debating whether or not I should wait till next week and regret not doing it tonight, or to stick it out tonight and take a chance.

Once I spoke with my best friend, he told me that I was funny and I know it and he got me inspired to go tonight. So I threw up, I went down there to sign up, and they didn't have an audience tonight. It was a test of faith going down there, and I know now that I have the balls to do it.

Now I just have to wait until this coming thursday. =P

I'll be sure to let you know how it goes.

good jokes, however your showmanship leaves something to be desired. 8.5/10

LeGoofyGoober

[QUOTE="EaglesPhan89"]

I only began doing stand-up a few months ago so I'm relatively new. I go to PSU and study communications/journalism and we all know how that's going to go. All the papers and whatnot are going under. I thought stand-up would be fun and if I keep working hard, I don't see why I can't get really good at it. After all, I'm only 20. I have lots of time to work on my material and act.

dodgerblue13

Yeah no problem man. I'm always there for a fellow PSUer. I actually want to be a comedy writer, but the closest thing to writing comedy at PSU would be journalism. If you are really passionate about something then go for it. If you want to write for a newspaper then do it.

If I'm going to write for anything I would want it to be a humor magazine.

Mainly the circumsicion and the bad wife jokes made me laugh, Keep working on it ^^

MuddVader

You've actually inspired me to an extent.

I've been thinking more and more lately that I should get into stand-up; its always been a dream of mine because I've always had a talent at making people laugh. You've inspired me because you've shown me that comedians have to start somewhere, and you've kinda relieved me of a lot of anxiety of trying to be perfect on the first try.

I'm jotting down some material but its hard for me to format it into a deliverable way so that I can reference old jokes in new jokes and vice versa.

Thanks for sharing it with us, it takes guts to get up there and especially to put it on the web.

Keep up the good work man!

Deathxcore

There are two type of comic in this world. Outrageous and Shy.

I can tell you are a Shy comedian but thats not a bad thing at all! Use it to your advantage! You should tend not to act out anything and you should always try to find a balance. Remember, with you it should be Delivery>Punch most of the time. Try to get into some Stand Up classes! I see real hope in you as a comedian! Keep it up man! :D

JJ_1