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#1 Rintaran
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Alright, so we know what the character looks like and how he fights...  We also have a few one-liners, which certainly make him out to be a little cocky, but what I want to know is, what is this character like?  What are his other personality traits?  What's his background like?  Any enemies and if so, how'd be make them?  Any lovers (or ex-lovers), and how did they meet, how has their relationship worked out?  Unless you're looking for a flat story, you can't run it with a flat character.  Tell me more about "The Red Hurricane".
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Welcome aboard Neji!
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#3 Rintaran
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Thanks for the prompt response!  One day up and already four (possibly five) entrants, and one submitted piece. First I'll address the questions that have come up:

 

So is this mean a story? Because the one i have is about 1500 characters and it is a short stroy, actually a pilot for a book i am writing, can i start a competition for that?NejiKusa

Yes, it would be a story.  But the limit is 750 words.  The number of characters would vary depending on how they're connected.  :P

 

An entire story in 750 words.   It'll be challenging to mash it into that small of a limit.   We have a 5%-ish allowance on either side right?   Getting exactly 750 is hard.EndlessGame

Yes, there is some room on the of the 750 benchmark.  What I'm basically asking for is what a magazine would call a "filler" story.  You have a max of 750 (no more than that).  But you can be below by as much as 50 words.

PG rated? Whose idea was that?irmeleeman5995

That would be mine.  Actually, this whole contest was my idea.  PG is a lot looser now than, say, 5 or 10 years ago.  In PG, you get violence (to some degree), and bra-shots.  The idea was to see if you could write to the demand of the audience, something that is very important for writers to consider.  There will be future contests with different "ratings", don't worry.

 

I think that's about it for now.  Remember the deadline is May 21st.  Any posts made after that date will not be counted. 

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#4 Rintaran
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Last round was league play. As many of you know, the winner has not been announced due to a) Sparky being absent, and b) the other judges backing out. This will be our second writing competition, and I highly encourage all members to participate.

 

The Competition:

Write a 750 word story. This story can be on any theme or subject. It must be completely contained within 750 words. This story may not already have been posted in the union, and may not be comprised of an excerpt from a longer story or novel. Please edit swears using asterisks (*) and keep the content generally PG-rated.

Entries are to be posted within this topic. Only one entry per person will be used in the competition.

 

The judges:

Sparky & Rintaran

 

The due date:

Final entries must be in by May 21st, 2007.

 

The prize:

A personalized award icon crafted by Rintaran to place in your signature, and 1 month's bragging rights.

 

The competitors:

NejiKusa (submitted)

EtherTwilight (submitted)

ps2host93

EndlessGame (submitted)

-The-G-Man-

yodariquo

Foolz3H (submitted)

BuryMe

irmeleeman5995 (submitted)

just4yoshi 

 

(please post your interest below, your name will be added to the list at that time)

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I figured I'd just keep counting from where the last one left off...

 

Write a short story/poem/script where your main character is either in an asylum, or should be. 

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#6 Rintaran
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Sorry about missing a couple weeks of quotes.  Here's a fresh one to entertain you momentarily.

Writers should be read, but neither seen nor heard. -Daphne du Maurier (1907-1989)

Ah, the old maxim.  They used to say the same of slaves and servants. Once upon a time, that's what authors where.  Servants to dukes and duchesses, or freethinkers behind the scenes of plays and the like.  But to think that should continue today is pretty funny.

Today, the voice of writers needs to be seen and heard.  As Percy Bysshe Shelley once claimed, it is the words of poets that move the people of the world.  It is our responsibility to change the minds of dictators, to open the doors to a new age, and to find ways to convince people to attempt a different, better way.  As writers, we are watchers of society.  We watch that which goes on around us, and in many cases, we know more of human nature than those who do not write.  Yes, psychologists have a major upper hand in the working of the psyche, but their textbook knowledge doesn't expand beyond the individual, where we supposedly can see the whole.  For Shelley, it was not just in writing poems, but in action that he strove to spread his message, and to ultimately change the world.  The same is  true of today's writing activists.  Margaret Atwood, among Canada's most famed writers, is very outspoken on a number of topics, as are any number of other authors.

Some books, poems and stories were written to be heard, not read.  To my mind comes the speakerly takes of Ivan E. Coyote and Thomas King, and the lyrical poems and plays that have been recorded for centuries.  These are tales and thoughts and plays meant to be heard, and in the case of plays, to be seen.  For the authors to be hidden away out of sight does us no good.  We cannot feel our success, and in many cases, neither can the audience.

But today, in our world of technology, we have an even bigger reason to be seen and heard.  The book is quickly becoming a relic of ancient times.  Today, schools across the country are destroying their libraries of books, tossing or selling the books and replacing them with already out of date computers.  Even worse, students are spending less and less of their free time choosing to read.  Instead they find themselves playing video games or watching television to a far larger degree than before.  I'm not saying there's anything wrong with TV and Computers, quite the contrary, but I am saying that it is greatly affecting how often people choose to read.  Students now tote around their mp3 players, listening to music. 

As authors in our current world, it comes to us to change the way we "write". Yes, continue to put down words that are to be read.  But also read those words aloud!  Not just in coffee shops or literary meetings, but read them aloud into microphones and record your writings.  As mp3s, students can listen to the writer recite their novel.  On TV, they can watch the author reading it, even as images of other acting out the contents are worked in.  With the computer, they can actively reconstruct the writing in a new breed of interactive video games.  Today, if people cannot see it and hear it, they increasingly deny its existence or discount its importance.  The author, the writer, must be seen and heard, as well as read.

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#7 Rintaran
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I agree with Ether, it definitely needs to be fleshed out further to work well as a story.

I think I may have to steal a part of the premise for a campaign that I'm going to be running in the near future (now that university is wrapping up)...  It should provide for an interesting adventure hook.  You don't mind do you? 

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#8 Rintaran
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Never interrupt your enemy when he is making a mistake.Napoleon Bonaparte (1769 - 1821)

 

From the mind of one of the greatest French tacticians, we have a common sense quote.  I think it bears some examination in terms of the writer.  As a writer, what is our enemy?  Two things immediately come to mind: the blank page, and writers' block.  Both are inevitably destroyed in the same manner: by writing.  But how can a blank page make a mistake?  Or, how could writers' block make a mistake?

I invite your ideas as to how this may be possible. 

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#9 Rintaran
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Welcome SonicDivision.  It's nice to have another published poet/author in the union, aside from myself.  I look forward to reading and commenting on more of your stuff (as my lesson planning allows of course). Did you happen to learn Russian from your parents?  I'm a little rusty (okay, really rusty), but I find the similarities in our background interesting.

Welcome Devon.  Have you ever written an essay that wasn't meant for school?  I'd be interested to know what topic you chose, and to see how it turned out.  I've written a fair share of essays for university and for literary magazines in the past.  I've tended to focus on gender issues, but not exclusively.  One of my better essays focussed on the nature of apearances in Francis' Burney's Cecilia.  I'm also currently working on a thesis on the commanding role of women in the works of Shakespeare, but it'll be a while before I get through with that.  Anyhow, welcome to the union.

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#10 Rintaran
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"You know you're getting old when you stoop to tie your shoelaces and wonder what else you could do while you're down there." - George Burns (1896 - 1996)

Now, Sparky didn't ask me to post this. But I didn't see one up, and since he's been pretty busy and I have about two minutes to spare, I figured I'd spare him the time and get one up for him.

George Burns makes a very good point that affects various aspects of our lives. Once upon a time, civilization just wanted to wash it's clothes on the rocks of the beach, but now we need to not only wash our clothes, we want it to be done quickly, we want them steamed, pressed, folded, and we wouldn't mind if a cup of tea was served to us by our machinery that tells us orally when it's time to transfer the clothes from the washer to the dryer. No longer are we thrilled with a simple pad of paper and a pen, we've found ourselves turn to a computer, which can do a whole bunch of stuff, instead of just one thing. And to make matters worse, instead of using the simplest program (notepad) to do our writing on the computer, we continue to ask for something more, and find ourselves in a program that can import graphics, spreadsheets, links, even sounds and video and because we're getting more in one, we come to believe it to be a good deal.

In writing, this sort of "what else can I do with this?" attitude can be very advantagous to an author. It provides the advantage of creating a diverse plot, dealing with a varied number of themes and looking at an enormous scope of topics... It provides the writer with the chance to discover something that may work better in the story than what they had originally planned. And best of all, it provides the author with a bit of practice, and as parts are split during the revision process, may provide leaping points for further stories.

The dangers are just as numerous however... An author could easily find themselves lost in their explorations of "what else," thereby losing the core of their piece. Because the question is inherently endless, the author may never manage to finish their piece, thereby rendering all of their explorations useless. The author's writing may become incoherent as the what else takes over, leaping from idea to idea.

It's important to keep some sort of focus when you write, but its equally important to explore a little bit. You never know what wonders you may find that can help you in the future. My suggestion? Grab a couple of skipping stones while you're tying your shoe. It's relaxing to watch them develop themselves, and shouldn't put you too far off track if you're wise in its application. I mean really, even at thirteen skips, it still only takes a few seconds right?