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Well, Harry Potter is fantasy...Never read any of her books.
Pretty much all I read are baseball books, sci fi, and fantasy.
cain006
[QUOTE="BluRayHiDef"]You reject all criticism and therefore asking for a critique is a redundant exercise. You will never write anything publishable because your attitude is juvenile and you have an inflated sense of ability.Â
Once again, you cannot objectively criticize a style of writing, but only the technical aspects of writing. Heck, the terms "good" and "bad" are subjective by nature. You say that even though you don't enjoy Tolkien's style, you'd never call it bad. Guess what? That's an opinion. There are people who would call it bad. You can't seem to understand that.Â
Ninja-Hippo
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You reject all criticism and therefore asking for a critique is a redundant exercise. You will never write anything publishable because your attitude is juvenile and you have an inflated sense of ability.[QUOTE="Ninja-Hippo"][QUOTE="BluRayHiDef"]
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Once again, you cannot objectively criticize a style of writing, but only the technical aspects of writing. Heck, the terms "good" and "bad" are subjective by nature. You say that even though you don't enjoy Tolkien's style, you'd never call it bad. Guess what? That's an opinion. There are people who would call it bad. You can't seem to understand that.Â
BluRayHiDef
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I'll win the lottery and self-publish my books.Â
Seriously, no published author wrote one draft and called it a day. Learn to take criticism. Sign up on the AbsoluteWrite forums and post your work there. See what they have to say.[QUOTE="Meinhard1"]I enjoyed it I will have to read it. I've never really read crime fiction. Maybe this will be a good jumping-off point.
Look up early reviews on "The Cuckoo's Calling."
DavesAlt
It was out for three, or so months before anyone knew it the author was Rowling.
Her books were exciting to read when I was like 12. When I finished reading the fifth book I was bored out of my mind. Been there, done that, average plot, dumb characters, decent narrative. I'd probably enjoy reading The Divine Comedy more even though I don't know ancient florentine.
[QUOTE="cain006"]Well, Harry Potter is fantasy...Ah I mean more generic fantasy like dragons, medieval, traditional magic type stuff.Never read any of her books.
Pretty much all I read are baseball books, sci fi, and fantasy.
PannicAtack
I mean yeah Harry Potter is fantasy but I don't see the point of reading it when it's clearly marketed towards kids. I barely read as it is and I'd rather finish up the Malazan series of books than start yet another series. I'm probably not even gonna finish that series for another couple years or so.
Well, Harry Potter is fantasy...Ah I mean more generic fantasy like dragons, medieval, traditional magic type stuff.[QUOTE="PannicAtack"][QUOTE="cain006"]
Never read any of her books.
Pretty much all I read are baseball books, sci fi, and fantasy.
cain006
I mean yeah Harry Potter is fantasy but I don't see the point of reading it when it's clearly marketed towards kids. I barely read as it is and I'd rather finish up the Malazan series of books than start yet another series. I'm probably not even gonna finish that series for another couple years or so.
Who it's marketed toward doesn't really mean much of anything. Mario is marketed toward kids and it's enjoyable for anyone for instance. Conversely certain hentais have been marketed (as in placed in kid sections) toward kids because someone thought it being a cartoon meant it was for children.Eh it was a fluke the HP books were shit and so were the movies I dont think science will ever figure how that shit sold so much maybe theologians need to look into a deal with the devil angle but sadly her books after HP will sell based upon the HP bubble.
[QUOTE="cain006"]Ah I mean more generic fantasy like dragons, medieval, traditional magic type stuff.[QUOTE="PannicAtack"] Well, Harry Potter is fantasy...Ace6301
I mean yeah Harry Potter is fantasy but I don't see the point of reading it when it's clearly marketed towards kids. I barely read as it is and I'd rather finish up the Malazan series of books than start yet another series. I'm probably not even gonna finish that series for another couple years or so.
Who it's marketed toward doesn't really mean much of anything. Mario is marketed toward kids and it's enjoyable for anyone for instance. Conversely certain hentais have been marketed (as in placed in kid sections) toward kids because someone thought it being a cartoon meant it was for children. I have no issue with stuff being made for kids. Hell I'm watching Batman Beyond right now and just finished Young Justice a month or so ago. It's just that the Malazan books are freaking amazing and I don't think that a book for young adults would go anywhere near into the detail and content/page that they have.And I have baseball books for easy reading anyways. Just finished Bang The Drum Slowly, probably gonna pick up the next one Mark Harris wrote soon.
She wrote some book recently under a different name and it was reviewed very well.Eh it was a fluke the HP books were shit and so were the movies I dont think science will ever figure how that shit sold so much maybe theologians need to look into a deal with the devil angle but sadly her books after HP will sell based upon the HP bubble.
WilliamRLBaker
She wrote some book recently under a different name and it was reviewed very well. She also had some mixed and negative reviews for that book as well......anyway that doesn't change the fact that the HP books weren't really well written.[QUOTE="WilliamRLBaker"]
Eh it was a fluke the HP books were shit and so were the movies I dont think science will ever figure how that shit sold so much maybe theologians need to look into a deal with the devil angle but sadly her books after HP will sell based upon the HP bubble.
cain006
Why horror stories? Why short? Why would you question these things? He just thinks you'd be good at them.[QUOTE="heeweesRus"]You should try writing short horror stories, bluRay.BluRayHiDef
Why horror stories? Why short?[QUOTE="heeweesRus"]You should try writing short horror stories, bluRay.BluRayHiDef
you need to walk before you run.
furthermore, those are more likely to be considered for publishing, and therefore more likely to be considered for professional editing, etc..
horror is another story, but short stories and stuff like that might not be a bad idea.
From what I can tell, JK Rowling had a strong outline for every book before the 1st was even finished. This helped create a cohesive and interesting plot. Plus she helped young children discover an intriguing and magical world. While the later books sacrificed some of the magical feeling of discover for plot and character development. From what I remember of the first few books and the last couple, she improved over the years from book to book, and by the end seems to have accomplished being a very competent author. I grew up with HP and I would do it again in a heartbeat.
Why horror stories? Why short?[QUOTE="BluRayHiDef"]
[QUOTE="heeweesRus"]You should try writing short horror stories, bluRay.mrbojangles25
you need to walk before you run.
furthermore, those are more likely to be considered for publishing, and therefore more likely to be considered for professional editing, etc..
horror is another story, but short stories and stuff like that might not be a bad idea.
BluRay, it seems this topic was created to segway into showing off your single page writing example that has been sprinkled already at least once in OT. I would take mrbojangles' advice and focus on short stories, as stated, they are more likely to be picked up. If you have a 300pg book and an editor reads the first page and doesn't like it, he/she will likely not read the rest of the 299 pages. But if it's a 20-30pg short story and the first page shows promise or good ideas/plot despite being poorly written, then he/she may be more likely to read the rest of the story and find it salvageable.
Orson Scott Card got his start in science fiction through a short story version of Ender's Game (I don't know how close it is to the novel with the same title), and despite the bigot he is, he is a pretty good author.
Well deserved. I don't care what anyone says, those HP books are just so fascinating. I still read them, god knows how many times I've read the series. (Yep I'm a fanboy :p)
Its largely due to her writing and direction that I am writing my own novel now. Literature was always boring to me until I started reading HP. Then everything changed...
[QUOTE="Toph_Girl250"]Billionaire? O_O That's it, time to sit down and get motivated on writing my own novels. MakhaidosGood luck; she's the first (and, to my knowledge, only) author in history to achieve even millionaire status by selling books. Barack Obama became a millionaire from his biopic.
My question to you all is, what constitutes bad writing?  Harry Potter, by young adult standards, goes far above and beyond what is expected from those books.  The great thing about HP is that its incredible access able. For instance, you don't feel like reading it is a chore of some sort because she doesn't beat the reader over the head with a mythos.  In other words its, not a "geek,"  (overly fantasy-too developed) kind of environment.  She wrote a lot of it somewhat seamlessly.  I think that within itself constitutes strong writing. Â
I am not a fan of the Harry Potter books, but I can certainly appreciate everyone enjoying them.
[QUOTE="Toph_Girl250"]Billionaire? O_O That's it, time to sit down and get motivated on writing my own novels. MakhaidosGood luck; she's the first (and, to my knowledge, only) author in history to achieve even millionaire status by selling books. That is not true. Â Is the most successful, but there have been many before and some after.
I don't think she has quality as a writer.....I think hype goes a long long way.LJS9502_basicHer market value isn't related to her "quality" as a writer, just to the appeal of her books. What was Tolstoy's net worth?
[QUOTE="Makhaidos"][QUOTE="Toph_Girl250"]Billionaire? O_O That's it, time to sit down and get motivated on writing my own novels. hiphops_saviorGood luck; she's the first (and, to my knowledge, only) author in history to achieve even millionaire status by selling books. Barack Obama became a millionaire from his biopic. Ahh, I was wrong; she was the first to achieve *billionaire* status, not millionaire.
From what I can tell, JK Rowling had a strong outline for every book before the 1st was even finished. This helped create a cohesive and interesting plot. Plus she helped young children discover an intriguing and magical world. While the later books sacrificed some of the magical feeling of discover for plot and character development. From what I remember of the first few books and the last couple, she improved over the years from book to book, and by the end seems to have accomplished being a very competent author. I grew up with HP and I would do it again in a heartbeat.
Zlurodirom
I'm pretty sure that outline was the "books of magic" and then changed a few things, as time went on she lost what the heck to do because Neil Gaiman had already moved on past Harry Potter...errr.....Timithy Hunter.
Some other good young adult books are the Bartimaeus series and the Redwall books. Actually I don't even know if they held up, I read them when I was in like 8th grade and younger.My question to you all is, what constitutes bad writing?  Harry Potter, by young adult standards, goes far above and beyond what is expected from those books.  The great thing about HP is that its incredible access able. For instance, you don't feel like reading it is a chore of some sort because she doesn't beat the reader over the head with a mythos.  In other words its, not a "geek,"  (overly fantasy-too developed) kind of environment.  She wrote a lot of it somewhat seamlessly.  I think that within itself constitutes strong writing. Â
I am not a fan of the Harry Potter books, but I can certainly appreciate everyone enjoying them.
mexicangordo
[QUOTE="Toph_Girl250"][QUOTE="Makhaidos"] Ahh, I was wrong; she was the first to achieve *billionaire* status, not millionaire.MakhaidosI wonder how rich and successful Stephen King became with his novels? Pretty rich, but not as rich as her. She's richer than the queen of England. :lol: @ being richer than your own queen. Wow, the queen must be jealous. Have they met?
Some other good young adult books are the Bartimaeus series and the Redwall books. Actually I don't even know if they held up, I read them when I was in like 8th grade and younger. Redwall as good literature? The morals are far too simplistic and doesn't truly explore the motives behind the villain. It's a solid series, but there are far better books out there that doesn't ensnare themselves in "vermins are evil, hur hur hur".[QUOTE="mexicangordo"]
My question to you all is, what constitutes bad writing?  Harry Potter, by young adult standards, goes far above and beyond what is expected from those books.  The great thing about HP is that its incredible access able. For instance, you don't feel like reading it is a chore of some sort because she doesn't beat the reader over the head with a mythos.  In other words its, not a "geek,"  (overly fantasy-too developed) kind of environment.  She wrote a lot of it somewhat seamlessly.  I think that within itself constitutes strong writing. Â
I am not a fan of the Harry Potter books, but I can certainly appreciate everyone enjoying them.
cain006
[QUOTE="cain006"]Some other good young adult books are the Bartimaeus series and the Redwall books. Actually I don't even know if they held up, I read them when I was in like 8th grade and younger. Redwall as good literature? The morals are far too simplistic and doesn't truly explore the motives behind the villain. It's a solid series, but there are far better books out there that doesn't ensnare themselves in "vermins are evil, hur hur hur".Ah well I could barely remember anything about those books. The Bartimaeus books are pretty awesome fantasy though. Cool, unique magic system with huge risks and the series ended pretty bleakly for a young adult book. But I guess lots of YA books try and do that to seem edgy.[QUOTE="mexicangordo"]
My question to you all is, what constitutes bad writing?  Harry Potter, by young adult standards, goes far above and beyond what is expected from those books.  The great thing about HP is that its incredible access able. For instance, you don't feel like reading it is a chore of some sort because she doesn't beat the reader over the head with a mythos.  In other words its, not a "geek,"  (overly fantasy-too developed) kind of environment.  She wrote a lot of it somewhat seamlessly.  I think that within itself constitutes strong writing. Â
I am not a fan of the Harry Potter books, but I can certainly appreciate everyone enjoying them.
hiphops_savior
[QUOTE="Zlurodirom"]
From what I can tell, JK Rowling had a strong outline for every book before the 1st was even finished. This helped create a cohesive and interesting plot. Plus she helped young children discover an intriguing and magical world. While the later books sacrificed some of the magical feeling of discover for plot and character development. From what I remember of the first few books and the last couple, she improved over the years from book to book, and by the end seems to have accomplished being a very competent author. I grew up with HP and I would do it again in a heartbeat.
rgsniper1
I'm pretty sure that outline was the "books of magic" and then changed a few things, as time went on she lost what the heck to do because Neil Gaiman had already moved on past Harry Potter...errr.....Timithy Hunter.
Not familiar with Books of Magic/Timothy Hunter so I cant comment, sorry.
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