[QUOTE="starduke"]

This is going to be my last post for a while.

"Why?"you may ask. Well, the answer is because I'm working on editing all the stories I've posted together so I don't end up repeating the into and the scene with the great big battle too much. The stories about Shyl and Chernallan will be intergreted into Xade's as they are introduced in his story, since he is the main character. I read other books that did that and it worked most of the time, so I decided to try it.

waZelda

Good desicion! I'm looking forwards to reading it.

I actually ended up maiking Shyl's story happen entirly in conversation between her and Xade when they are going thru the tunnel that leads out of Drenell. It's a LONG tunnel. Chernellan's story is pretty much the same, I put it in when he was introduced. However, I couldn't do the same with Shyl without messing up the pacing of the scene where she first appears. So, she ends up telling her story to Xade.

@iloveflash

I was more conerned with the flow then anything else. Also, I try to avoid run on sentances, maybe to an extreme. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the "creative stuff".

Please read the other story. It might be a little better, since I had a little more time to write it.

These stories are something I wrote for my creative writing class in college, and I haven't had a chance to work on them since then, since I'm so busy.

@waZelda

Shyl is just a rough draft, really. I wrote it for a project at my college, and the deadline slapped me in the face, before I could really finish. I'm still working on it. Also, since Shyl is a female character, I had a hard time "getting into her head".

The reason I didn't go more into the magi-elves side of the storyis becasue Shyl is a techno-elf, and the main focus of the story. The main charater of my larger story, the man who will eventually become her husband, is a magi-elf. I go into the magi-elves side of it in his story.

The reactor was new technology and supposedly indestructible. Nosrue, the leader of the elves, didn't want to bring it into the battle, but was pressured into doing it because the other techno-elven leaders thought that the powerful energy source would give them a tactical advantage. It's in the new draft that I'm woking on.

Forme it's a toss up between FF 3, FF4, and Pokemon Platinum. Theyare all great games.

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