What he said, basically. Nice flow in your writing and you establish a good setting.

By the way, can you give us some context as you usually do?

waZelda

Well, waZelda, "The Dive" is in tribute to one of my favorite artists. I even met the dude, and shook his hand. The man and his art left an impression me, and inspired "The Dive". I met him at a art gallery that was showcasing his sculptures. He makes sculptures by carving into the bottom of plastic with dental tools. When it's turned over there's tiny underwater cities and farms. I tried to imagine what it would be like to actually go to the cities he sculpted, and then I wrote "The Dive". However, for the life of me I can't remember his name. I do remember that I named the hotel after him, and his last name was "Moray". I can't find him or his art on the net, and it's very frustrating.