I think the Three Billy Goats Gruff originally came from Norway, or around that area. I've read at least three or four different versions of it. I did change it a bit, becuase, well, I like my version better. Btw, it's not suppesed to make sense. It's supposed to be funny. At least, thats what I think.

You mean like "fifteen men on a dead mans chest, yo ho ho, and a bottle of rum! Drink and the devil had done for the rest, yo ho ho, and a bottle of rum!" I might write another version, to make it more like an old sea shanty.
I was working on Xade, which, like I said, I'm turning into a book. That plus all during break I was playing alot of games, and looking for a new job.

Most of the time if someone is commited to a mental institution it's by someone they love and who loves them, who thinks that they are doing the best thing for the person they love.
Besides, it's how the character thinks she'll do, it may not be what she would do. There is a difference, you know. That plus, I want to have him realize he doesn't know her as well as he thinks he does.

Throwing star is Shuriken for the uninitiated. Some people don't know what a Shuriken is, but at least throwing star can create a mental picture, hopefully.

One question. If someone started off about how their just murdered Sensai and a dragon had just spoken to them while they were in a coma, wouldn't you think they were crazy? Or maybe they were hallucinating...

I will take your suggestions under consideration.